英语书面表达之图表作文ppt课件.ppt

如何进行图表式作文写作,1,条形或柱状图(barchart)曲线图(graph)饼形图(piechart)图表作文要求考生将图表中的数据、图形转换成文字，并就图表中所反映的情况作出分析或发表议论。,2,1.读取信息。仔细读图，掌握图表上提供的信息,2.处理信息。对信息进行分析与,对比，考虑文章的布局。,3.文章结构。,Part1：Generalidea(conclusion/tendency)(图表反映的问,题或总体趋势),Part2：Facts(tosupporttheidea)(具体数据或事实)slight,slightly;quick,quickly;steady,steadily;sharp(急剧的),sharply(急剧地);dramatically(显著地);remarkably(显著地),6.趋势：upwardtrend(上涨趋势),downwardtrend(下跌趋势)7.不变：stay,remain(依然是),8.其他：accountfor30%ofthetotal(占总量的30%),atthesamerate(以相同的速率),average(平均的),annual(每年的),figure/number(数字),amount(数量),percentage(百分比),8,常用句式结构:Topicsentences.,Ihaverecentlymadeasurveyamong.Aresearchhasbeenmaderecentlyamong.Imwritingtotellyouaboutmyresearchabout.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasabout.,Bodysentences,Somebodysfavoriteis.whileothers.Whatsomebodylikestodomostis.Both.and.wouldliketo.Asfor.,thenumber.equal.Thesecondlargestgroupwouldliketo.Thesecondchoiceforsomebodyisto.,9,归纳总结或发表评论(有时第三步可省略)常用词汇有:tosumup,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary,onthewhole,inshort,allinall,inaword,intheend,inotherwords,therefore,asaresult,generallyspeaking,AsIhaveshown.,Ashasbeenstated,得出结论,10,Conclusionsentences,AsIhaveshown.AshasbeenstatedInmyopinion.Ithink.,11,三要：1.要找出对比最为明显的突破点。2.要找出对比较明显的要点。3.要找出双方非常相似的要点。三忌：1.忌流水帐式依次描述。2.忌反复使用同一句型。3.忌反复出现纷繁复杂的数据。,柱状图式作文写作要注意：,12,下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。注意：1.词数100左右；2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比strikingcontrast,13,书面表达审题体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称,14,下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。注意：1.词数100左右；2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比strikingcontrast,15,Ihaverecentlymadeasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudentschoiceoftheirfuturejobs.Theyhavedifferentideasaboutit.Themoststrikingcontrastisinteaching.30%ofthegirlswouldliketobecometeacherswhileonly5%oftheboyswanttodothisjob.20%oftheboyswanttodobusinessandanother20%wanttobecomelawyerswhilegirlstakeup15%inthesefields.Whatboysliketodomostistobecomemanagersandthesecondlargestgroupwouldliketobescientists.Besidesteaching,thesecondchoiceforgirlsistobescientistsandmanagers.Thenumberisnotsmall.Girlsalsoexpecttoshowtheirabilitiesinthesetwofields.,Apossibleversion,16,假设你于4月23日的“世界读书日”(WorldReadingDay)在你所在的学校进行了一项阅读习惯调查，以下是其中的一项调查结果。请用英语写一篇短文，说明相关内容及结果等。,A买书阅读,B网上下载或在线阅读,C从朋友处或图书馆借阅,D学校阅览室阅读,1.调查内容及时间；2.调查结果；,3.问题：阅览室的使用率(userate)不高；4.建议：(1)延长阅览室的开放时间；(2)书店送书到校，方便学生购买。,17,OnWorldReadingDay,wecarriedoutasurveyaboutthereadinghabitsofhighschoolstudents.Accordingtothesurvey,45.75%ofthestudentsreadbookstheybuyand8.5%ofthemdownloade-booksorreadonline.35.75%ofthestudentsborrowbooksfromfriendsorthelibraryand11%ofthemreadintheschoolreading-room.Fromthesurveywecanseethattheuserateoftheschoolrea-ding-roomisnothighenough.Wesuggestthatitsopeninghoursbeextendedandmeanwhilebookstoresbeinvitedintotheschooltomakeitconvenientforstudentstobuybooks.,18,日前，针对学生的零用钱（pocketmoney）的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查得出数据如下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这一情况，并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。注意：1书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可。2字数：100字左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。,19,Deareditor,Recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney_.,20,Deareditor,Recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney.Inthissurvey,bothjuniorstudentsandseniorstudentsspendmosttheirmoneyonbooks,sacksandplayinggames,stillsomemoneygoestoclothes,banks,sports,andsoon.Thesurveyshowsthatabout44ofseniorspreferbookstosacks（37%）andplayinggames（31%）.Ontheotherhand,only32ofjuniorswillspendtheirpocketmoneybuyingbooks,whileoverahalfbuysacksand44spendonplayinggames.Bothseniorsandjuniorswouldnotwastetoomuchmoneyinclothesorputitinbanks.Ithinktoomanysackswillnotonlymakeusputonweightbutalsodoharmtoourhealth.Inaddition,ifweplaygameswithoutlimit,welllosemuchprecioustime,whichresultsinlowgrades.Furthermore,themoneyishard-earned.Ihopewestudentsvalueourmoneyaswellasourtime.,21,假如你叫JimLee，你最近对你班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给某报社的编辑写一封信报告此事，以引起舆论关注。注意：报告应包括图表所示全部内容叙述结果时要避免重复使用百分比。叙述过程中要适当添加评语。词数100左右。,22,学生习作点评Deareditor,MynameisJimlee.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Now,Ididaresearchaboutthepurposeofmyclassmatesgoontheline.Thereare30%ofboysand20%girlsreadnewsonthecomputer.Have20%boysand15%girlssende-mailson-line.Therearemoregirls(about35%)thanboys(about5%)haveachat.About10%boysand10%girlsusedcomputersstudy.Moreboysthangirlsplaygames.YoursJim,23,Commonmistakes,1.Mostoftheboysinordertoplaygameswhilemostgirlsinordertohaveachat.2.About10%boysand10%girlsusedcomputerstudy.,汉语式英语,？,24,1.20%ofboysgetontheInternettosende-mailswhile15%ofgirlsgetontheInternettosende-mails.2.Thenumberofboyswholiketoplaygamesislargerthanthenumberofgirls.,重复累赘,25,句式单一,平铺直叙,A.30%boysand20%girlsgoon-lineinordertoreadnews.20%boysandgirlsgoon-linetosende-mails.5%boysand35%girlswanttochatwithothers.10%boysandgirlswanttostudyon-line.Besides,35%boysand20%girlsgoon-linetoplaygames.,compareAwithBB.Girlsfavoriteischatting,butfewboyslikeit.Whatboysliketodomostisplayinggamesandgirlsalsolikeit.Bothboysandgirlsliketoreadnewsorsende-mails