高中英语-短文改错ppt课件

短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,短文改错,.,1,解题步骤,1.通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顾3.复读全文，检查验证,.,2,Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,我几乎记不起我的奶奶了，她过去常常把我抱在她的膝盖上并唱着古老的歌谣，她去世的时候我才四岁。此刻，对我来说，奶奶仅仅是一个遥远的记忆，我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。他个子很高，有着宽阔的肩膀和随着年龄渐长由黑变灰的胡子。他有着低沉的嗓音，这让他在我们校长里脱颖而出，他强壮有力。事实上，他甚至还会把那些来找我做功课或者玩耍的小伙伴吓跑。然而，他是我所认识的最温文尔雅的人。,.,3,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,4,Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.1.Hardly：几乎不，几乎没有（表否定，修饰名词时，名词前经常加有any，修饰动词时，动词前经常加有ever）Eg.Thereishardlyanytealeft.IthardlyeversnowedinWashingtoninthewinter用于can或could之后，主要动词前，强调做某事很难Eg.IcouldhardlybelieveitwhenIreadtheletter刚刚，才Eg.Wehadhadlysatdowntosupperwhenthetelephonerang.hardly置于句首时要倒装，在hardly.when结构中，hardly置于句首时，倒装在主句Eg.HardlyhaveIheardfromhimrecently.HardlyhadIreachedthebusstopwhenthebusstarted.,.,5,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,6,Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold1.注意区分usedtodosth.be/getusedtosth/doingsth和beusedtodo这三个搭配的用法usedtodosth.过去常常做某事be/getusedtosth./doingsth.习惯于某事/做某事beusedtodosth.被用来做某事句型区分：Iusedtogetupearly.Iamusedtogettingupearly.Iusedtotravelbyair.Iamusedtotravelingbyair.Therobotcanbeusedtodosomedangerouswork.Theknifeisusedtocutfruits.,.,7,2.holdheldheld抱住，托住，拿着，抓住Eg.Thegirlheldherfathershandtightly.容纳，包含Eg.Theplaneholdsabout300passegers怀有，持有（信念，意见）Eg.Heholdsstrangeviewsoneducation.举行，召开Eg.HoldameetingHoldon等着，停住Eg.Holdon!Thisisnttherightroad.3.Knee膝盖bringsb.totheirknees（尤指战争中）打败某人，使某人屈膝投降bringsth.toitsknees摧毁某物，使（组织等）瘫痪或崩溃,.,8,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,9,Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed1.Passaway去世终止，结束Eg.Allthistroublewillpassaway2.Passthetime=killthetime消磨时间Eg.Wekilledthetimeplayingcards,.,10,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,11,Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.1.Adistantmemory一个遥远的记忆Eg.Thehistorywasadistantmemoryforme.2.Inmemoryof作为对某人的纪念Eg.Hefoundedthecharityinmemoryofhislatewife,.,12,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,13,Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well1.考查副词：此处需要修饰的是前面的动词remember，所以要用副词well,.,14,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,15,Hewastall,o/to1.Shoulder考查名词的单复数，shoulder意思是肩膀，一般作复数形式承担，担负Eg.Toshouldertheresponsibilityforsth.2.考查介词，此处用to与前面的from构成短语“from.to.”意为“从.到.”turnfrom.to/into为固定用法，意为从变为.,.,16,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedshouldersfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.to/into7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,17,Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinhimoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.and,1.考查人称代词，这句话为非限制性定语从句，主语是which指代adeepvoice,谓语动词为set，宾语可直接用名词的宾格，并且voice不予set构成人称上的反身关系，不能用反身代词himself。或者固定搭配：setsb.apartfrom.使某人脱颖而出Eg.Hisaccentsetshimapart.2.考查并列连词,.,18,1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedshouldersfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.to/into7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinhimoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.and8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,.,19,Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.,1.考查固定搭配，infact为“事实上，实际上”2.考查从属连词，during为“在.期间”，when为“在时候”3.Sacaresb.away把吓跑Eg.Theymanagedtoscaredthebearsaway.,However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,考查副词，never“从不”，ever“曾经，在任何时候”,.,20,Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherholdkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheispassedjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromwellshouldersblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsetto/intohimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandandpowerful.Inafactheevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheywhencameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaven