高考英语作文指导之应用文求助信ppt课件

PracticalWriting(Request)应用文-求助信-刘晓,折衷式(Semi-BlockStyle),DearSirorMadam,(Para1)(Para2)(Para3)Yours(sincerely),Lihua,2017-9-15,.,2,信件写作流程1、仔细审题，明确写作要求一审文体：二审时态、人称：三审要点：2、列出提纲，构建框架结构-框架-要点分布-逻辑关系-语言（词汇、语法）（动词、连接成分、可用句型）,格式正确，语言得体；,时态前后照应人称上下一致；,要点齐全，逻辑清晰,3,3、依据提纲，扩展成文紧扣提示，适度发挥，扩展成句，连句成文。尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。4、核查文章，适度修改。格式正确要点齐全语言准确衔接自然,2017-9-15,.,4,求助信内容要点：-写信目的-说明困难-请求帮助-感谢并期待答复,2017-9-15,.,5,求助信起首句（theopeningsentence）Imwritingtoaskyouafovor.Wouldyoudomeafavor?结束语(theclosingsentence)IsincerelyhopeyoucanIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.HopeforanearlyreplyIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldIwouldappreciateitifyoucould,2017-9-15,.,6,求助信表示求助的常用句式Wouldyoubesokindasto?Isitpossiblethat?Isincerelyhopethatyoucan,7,假如你是李华，暑假参加了某微信公众号（Wechatofficialaccount）举行的英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评（abookreview）。现你用英语给外教Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你当面批改书评，内容包括：简要介绍活动提出请求提议见面时间注意：词数80次左右可适当增加细节，使行文连贯,文体人称(3)时态(4)要点,求助信,第一人称,一般现在时一般将来时,写信目的求助内容结束语,1、仔细审题，明确写作要求,originalEnglishbooksEnglishoriginals,2017-9-15,.,8,Dear,(Para1)(Para2)Yours(sincerely),LiHua,2、列出提纲，构建框架结构,请求帮助提出请求&约定时间感谢并期待答复,说明困难,写信目的,根据交流对象选用称呼和结尾礼语DearSam,Yoursrespectfully,Yourstruly,Yourssincerely,2017-9-15,介绍活动,9,要点罗列askyouafavorsignupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreviewhelpmecorrectit/makesomecorrectionsmeetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometimethanksandexpectations,10,3、依据提纲，扩展成文askyouafavorIamwritingtoaskyouafavor.IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.Iamwritingtoaskyouafavor.,highlyrelated,looselyrelated,11,3、依据提纲，扩展成文signupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreviewAsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,IsignedupforanEnglishorigialreadingactivityduringthesummervocation.IwroteabookreviewonmyfavoritebookJaneEyre.AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,Isignedupforareadingactivityduringthesummervocation,whereIreadsomeEnglishoriginalsandwroteabookreview.,Supporting+Key,non-restrictiveclause,12,3、依据提纲，扩展成文helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrectionsIamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideaacross,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmetocorrectitandgivemesomeadviceonwriting.Beingpoorinwriting,Iamworriedtheremightbesomemistakes.Wouldyoubesokindastohelpmemakesomecorrections?,Supporting+Key,Usingaquestiontobepolite,13,3、依据提纲，扩展成文meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometimessionIfpossible,canImeetyouafterclassOnFriday?IfyouareavialableafterclassonFriday,pleasetellmeandIwillmeetyouinyouroffice.CanyousparemesometimeandtellmewhensothatIcangotomeetyou?,Concession,Concession,Result,14,3、依据提纲，扩展成文thanksandexpectationIdbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourkindreply.,15,DearSam,(IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.)Iamwritingtoaskafavorofyou.AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,Isignedupforareadingactivityduringthesummervocation,whereIreadsomeEnglishoriginalsandwroteabookreviewonmyfavoritebookJaneEyre.ButIamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideaacross,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmetomakesomecorrectionsandgivemesomeadviceonwriting.CanyousparemesometimeandtellmewhensothatIcangotomeetyou?Idbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua,格式、要点、语言,4、核查文章，适度修改,2017-9-15,.,cohesiveandlogical,16,DearSam,(IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.)Iamwri