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第 10 页 共 10 页2013上海高考英语作文2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试【上海卷】. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese. Guided Writing.指导写作Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.方向:写120 - 150字的英语作文根据指示。上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）II. Guided WritingTo whom it may concern:Ive learned that youre collecting suggestions on the location of the coming art exhibition. I know it makes a big difference to our city, such as promoting the image of Shanghai. Im writing to share with you my opinions. In my view, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows:Firstly, citizens will have easy access to it because Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. Besides, it entitles people to a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.Secondly, with a reputation of being professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions, it is bound to live up to peoples expectations. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.I hope you can give a thought to my advice which I believe will help.Wang Min名师点拨：一、 审题与构思本次高考作文考查观点论述，题型较为常见，要求对画展的展出场所做出选择，并且说明理由，而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析，难度不算太大，要写好这篇作文，只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。范文按照书信的形式，首先要提出给收信人，To whom it may concern这里表示的是敬启者，是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语，也是除了Dear xxx之外英语书信的常见用语。二、 成篇信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且表明了些这封信的目的。第二段明确提出了自己的观点，用了it is more advisable to do.句型，表明“是更合理的”，常用在提出建议时。段落最后用My reasons are as follows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。第三、四段用firstly, secondly “首先；其次”进行连接，层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析，博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。最后一段总结并重申自己的观点。三、 好词好句it is more advisable to是更合理的makes a big difference有重大作用have easy access to更容易进入entitle people to使人有资格享用with a reputation of有的荣誉live up to达到标准be bound to一定give a thought to考虑6.2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语（上海卷）One Possible Version 1一个可能的版本1Dear Sir or Madam:亲爱的先生或女士:I have heard from the newspaper that you, the Shanghai Museum, are planning to organize a famous painting exhibition.我从报纸上听说过你,上海博物馆,计划组织一个著名的画展。 And you are now collecting suggestions about whether to hold it in your museum or the art gallery.和你现在收集建议是否把它在你的博物馆或美术馆。 I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum. My reasons are as follows.现在我写这封信是为了表达我认为展览应该在博物馆举行。我的理由如下。In terms of convenience, the museum has more advantages over the gallery. 在便利方面,博物馆画廊拥有更多的优势。First, it is located in the Peoples Square, which is the center of the city.首先,它位于人民广场,这是城市的中心。 So people can enjoy convenient transportation such as the subway line 1, 2 and 8, which are available to people from nearly every district.所以人们可以享受便捷的交通如地铁1号线、2号线和8号线,从几乎每一个地区的人。 It saves the visitors a lot of time and trouble of traffic jam. Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country.它节省了游客大量的时间和交通堵塞的问题。另一个优势是,很容易被发现,那些来自全国其他省份。 After all the Shanghai Museum is a landmark of our city familiar to nearly every Chinese.毕竟上海博物馆是一个具有里程碑意义的城市熟悉的几乎每一个中国人。With regard to the professional function, though it seems natural that an art exhibition be set in the gallery, in a more general sense, I think the museum has more advanced facilities to make the exhibition successful and to preserve the paintings well.第 5 页 共 10 页2013上海高考英语作文关于专业的功能,尽管它看起来自然,艺术展览的画廊,在更一般的意义上,我认为博物馆更先进的设施,使展览成功和保持画得很好。 As we know, the museum has successfully held many national and international exhibitions and its advertising and organizing experience is of no match; also its staff is qualified and professional.正如我们所知,博物馆已经成功举办许多国家和国际展览和广告和组织的经验是没有匹配;也员工有资格和专业。To sum up, I am sure the show will be fantastic if it is held in Shanghai Museum.总之,我相信这个节目将是非常美妙的如果是在上海博物馆举行。One Possible Version 2（版本2）一个可能的版本2(版2本)To whom it may concern：敬启者:Ive learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that youre collecting suggestions on its location. 我知道了,一个艺术展览举行,你收集建议它的位置。Im writing this letter to share with you my opinions. 我写这封信与你分享我的观点。In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. 在我看来,更可取的是举行艺术展览在上海博物馆社区图书馆。My reasons are as follows.我的理由如下。On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city.一方面,人们更方便去上海博物馆位于城市的中心。 And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.和社区博物馆更宽敞的图书馆,为游客提供了一个更舒适的环境,欣赏艺术。On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. 第 8 页 共 10 页2013上海高考英语作文另一方面,作为一个著名的博物馆,上海博物馆是更专业和经验丰富的举办艺术展览。Its professi