写作训练一_写句子.doc

一、避免误置修饰语：误置修饰语是一个用作修饰语的词或词组，因为没有靠近它所修饰的词，结果使意义模糊不清或改变了句子的意思。*修改下面的句子，注意误置修饰语的错误。1 At the age of six my father began to teach me English.2 I almost got good marks in every subject.3 In despair we could imagine what an ordinary man would do.4 The girl is my friend whom you met at the party yesterday.5 The money was put in the box which father gave me.6 You will enjoy looking at the pictures that you took years later.7 There was a spot on her new dress that could not be removed.8 She put the sandwiches back in the bag that she had not eaten.9 With love and care I realized my parents raised me the best way they could.10 I saw that the murderer had been caught in the evening paper.二、逻辑主语一致问题：注意分词、动名词、不定式及某些形容词短语的逻辑主语应与句子的主语一致。*修改以下句子：1 Coming out of the classroom, my heart was beating very fast.2 Looking down the valley, smoke came up.3 To be well-informed, reading newspapers is a good habit.4 Lying there on the beach in the sun, schoolwork didnt seem important.5 Sound asleep in the living room, I came across my grandfather.6 When ten years old, my mother gave me a ring.7 Apologetically the food was place before us.8 Because of going to too many parties, my term paper was late.9 Too excited to eat, the letter was read over and over.10 Ready to start, the bus was in front of the building waiting for us.11 Dressed in blue, mother thought the little girl looked prettier.三、避免人称代词的混淆：整篇文章宜使用固定的代词，以第一人称叙述的文章不能转成第二人称。用第三人称叙述的文章就不能转用第一或第二人称。*修改下面用错的代词：1 Before operating the machine, one should read directions carefully. Otherwise you may have an explosion.2 Very few people can get as much enjoyment out of modern art as they could. One need not be an artist to get some fun out of painting. Nor do you need to be very artistic.3 We had been on the planet for eighteen hours, and you get pretty tired of sitting that long.四、避免冗长累赘：写作时要用简洁明了的语言，避免不必要的词语。*将下列句子用简洁的语言表述：1 Personally I think he is a good student.2 She helped the old man to sit down in the armchair.3 I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason that it is far away from my home.4 I have less time than my fellow workers, for I am the daughter of my mother who is seventy and in poor health and the mother of my little son.5 I immediately sent him out of the house to hospital.五、正确使用连接词，表示较为复杂的意思：如果一个句子中包含两个或两个以上独立分句，要用连接词连接。不要把nevertheless, however, therefore等副词误认为连接词用。*用合适的连接词把下面每一题中的两句话连起来：1 Spring has come. Everything is coming back to life.2 I wanted to run. Where to?3 I saw Mr. Smith talking with some of the students in the room. I didnt enter.4 Take the map with you. You will be lost.5 He heard a loud noise in the hallway. He rushed out.6 You will go there. They will come here.7 The man did a very good repair job. He charged very little.8 I didnt write to him. I didnt call him.9 She is famous for her paintings. She is famous for her novels, too.10 It must have rained last night. The ground is wet in the morning.11 The child was sick. He didnt go to school.12 Give the book to Tom. You may read it first.六、尽量避免汉语干扰造成的错误*根据汉语意思修改句子：1The books in our library are getting more and more.（书越来越多）2 She did not join in the game. Even she did not speak to any of them.（甚至她）3 We very appreciate their kindness.（非常感谢）4 Anyone who goes against the law cannot escape from being punished.（任何人都不）5 No matter how, I will do my best in the exam.（不管怎样）6 So that we must make great efforts to do our work well.（因此）7 I almost could not move with so many clothes on.（几乎动弹不得）8 There is a young man wants to see you downstairs.（有人要）9 Many families have only one child.（许多只有一个）10 Our teacher was glad that we almost passed the exam.（差不多全部）11 During staying in Beijing, I visited a lot of places of interest.（在期间）12 I wonder how old her age is.（她年纪有多大）13 Faced with so many goods, I didnt know what to buy.（不知买什么）14 Mother made me not watch any TV for long.（不让我看电视）15 I will not forget my dear friends forever.（永远不忘记）16 We are always not late for class.（总不）17 We could not find the missing boy everywhere.（到处都不）18 That novel is very worth reading.（很值得）19 In Shanghai we enjoy convenient traffic.（便利的交通）20 She asked me how much the price of the vase was.（价格多少）21 His illness doesnt matter.（不要紧）22 We know that the moon circles round the earth.（围绕着转）23 In my opinion, I think we should ask them for advice.（以我看，我认为）24 I still contact with my childhood friends now.（和联系）25 They will come to visit you when you are convenient.（你方便的时候）26 I will read books as much as possible during the holiday.（尽可能多）27 This year my studies will be very busy.（学校很忙）28 He said he had a busy