短文改错解题技巧-全国卷

ProofReading,短文改错,Whatsthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition?,1.看不出句子有错。2.看出句子出错的地方,但答案不正确。或无法改正。“改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。,2.近年新课标I卷改错测试点统计,3.新改错解题策略及答题原则,1.短文改错设错方式及规范,4.解读短文改错口诀,5.练习巩固（Practice）,RightorWrong?增加,beenIhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity.Ihaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity.beenIhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity.been,X,X,X,X,X,Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou.Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou.Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou.,RightorWrong?删除,X,X,RightorWrong?修改,ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop.ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop.ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop.,以上为不规范答题,均不给分，不能手下留情,Icanreturntohomenow.,the,in,一.短文改错设错方式及规范,3.Unnecessaryword,Ilikeplayingpiano.,ImajoratEnglish.,2.Missingword,1.Wrongword,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。,测试点,二、高考新课标I卷短文改错测试点统计,三、新高考短文改错应试策略及答题原则,1.通读全文,理解文章.2.先易后难,找出明错.3.对照考点,深入审读.,1.以改变实词形式为原则.2.以单词形式变化最小为原则.3.以添删或更换虚词为原则.4.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则5.以保持原意不变为原则,1.标点符号不改。2.大小写不改。3.词序错误不改。4.单词拼写不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。,Next,ItwasayearagowhenJoshuagotabikeforChristmas,butherodeiteveryday.Onemorning,hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone.Rantohisfrontyard,hesawamanloadingitintohiscar.Heshouted,butthemandriveoff.AsadevotedChristian,hetoldhisdadherealforgavethethief.Whatsmore,hewantedthethiefknowhewasforgiven.,and,running,drove,that,really,to,Sothenextday,hepostedthemessageontheposter-boardandputitinthebeforeyard.Tothepersonwhostolemybike:Youhurtmyfeelings.ButIamaChristianandIforgivehim!Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning,attheendofthedriveway,thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes,front,you,a,Back,如何突破高分瓶颈？,得法者，事半功倍,解题方法,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副;非谓语，细辨别，句子成份多分析;代词格，细领悟，介词短语要牢记;冠词连词常光顾，逻辑错误须关注.,四.短文改错口诀：,1）动词形,1.Foralltheseyears,wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.(2014年新课标I)2.Myfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttime.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.(陕西卷)3.Sharewithothersmakesmefeelhappy.,have,came,1.动词的时态和语态错误.2.主、谓不一致的错误。3.非谓语动词形式的误用,Sharing,4.Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.(陕西卷)5.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky.(陕西卷)6.Amazingathowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.7.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshesoutside.（辽宁卷）,were,Amazed,understand,having,8.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.9.Notonlyitprovidethestudentswithbasiccourses,butalsoitmanagestoencouragethemtoparticipateincolourfulcampusactivitiesandsocialpractice.10.Dontpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalm.11.Manyruleshavemadetoreducethetrafficcrashes,especiallyfortheonesinvolvedinthepedestrians.,does,try,been,has,2）名词数,1.LastSaturday,asusual,hewenttoseveralclass.2.Hehelpedmedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeatharoundme.,dead,classes,1.可数与不可数名词的混用。2.可数名词的单复数的错用。3.名词的格的误用4.词性的转换,3.Themansaid,“mytoothareinthepieceofchocolateonthefloor.”4.WerecalledseveraltimeaboutCleosearlymorningbarking.5.ImdeeplygratefulforyouradvicethatIshouldpaymoreattentionstopractisingmyspokenEnglish.6.Thepolicesoontrackedthecallstoabarbershop.,attention,barbers,teeth,times,3）还要注意形和副,1.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!(新课标I)2.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.(陕西卷)3.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.（浙江卷）,immdiately,noisy,wonderful,1.形容词、副词、名词等词性的误用。2.原级，比较级和最高级的误用。,4.LiMingenjoyedhimself,competingandchattingwithhisfather,andfeltrelaxingintheopenair.5.Ireallytakeproudinthisexperience.6.Therearemorethan200excellentteachersand5，000lovelystudentsstudyinghardlyinourschool.7.IhopeIcanpractisemyspokenEnglishthereasmoreaspossible.,pride,hard,much,relaxed,4）代词格，细领悟,1.Thesurveyalsoshowsthatlibrariesarewherestudentsgetmostofhisbooks.2.Myunclesimmediatelyjumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.,none,their,1.前后人称不一致。2.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的误用。3.不定代词的误用及混用。,3.Thoughsituationsaretoughtoday,alotofwepost80saremakinggreateffortstoliveagoodlife.4.Ithasbeenrepairedandstrengthenedseveraltimesoveritspastonehundredyearshistory.5.Ithinkimportanttolearnthecomputerwell.6.ThankyoufortheEnglishdictionarythatyouboughtitforme.,its,it,us,5)介词短语要牢记,1.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.(四川卷)2.Thenwemadehimbreatheusingthemouth-to-mouthway.Aftertheboycametohimself,wesenthimhospitalatonceandtelephonedhisparents.,to,for,主要考查介词短语和习惯用法的搭配。,3.Nearlyfiveyearsago,withthehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.(新课标I卷)4.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnforhim.5.Soontheycameupagoodidea.6.Thewomanwasangryandsaidtheman,“Whatareyoudoing,sir?Whatareyoulookingfor?,from,with,to,of,6）冠词、连词常光顾,1.TodayIcanstillrememberhowIbecamegoodtabletennisplayer.2.Buttherewasamansittingbesideherinanextseat.3.Besides,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.,the,a,an,.冠词a,an和the的错用或少用连词but,and，or,so,because,although,therefore,however的错用,4.Nowmanygirlsprefertomarryamanwhoownsahouseandacar.Therefore,Idontthinklovebuiltonhousesandcarsistruelove,andIdoubthowlongitwilllast.5.OnMonday,LiMingwasenergeticbutactiveinclass.6.“ShouldIchooseagoodmajorandagooduniversity?7.Theyhadexpectedtofindafreeplacetolivein,sotheyexperiencedahardwinter.,and,or,but,However,OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachusin2012.ShehadbeenteachingEnglishformorethantwoyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitshortandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderherasourfriend.Sheisreallygoodteacher.Weareloveherverymuch.Weresurewellgetinwellwitheachother.,began,has,years,us,with,beautiful,a,on,动词形,名词数,代词格，细领悟,介词短语要牢记,还要注意形和副,冠词连词常光顾,五、Practice,Passage1,Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidntneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.,Passage2,Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidntneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.,dont,much,for,hours,there,Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.,looks,sit,helpful,to,Summary,2.较好拿到分数的有：,名词单复数/形容词副词/动词时态/代词.,1.做题时应注意：叙事性文章首抓_，以免理解有误；论述性文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词错误,全文时态,3.短文改错口诀,代词格，细领悟介词短语要牢记冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注,动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别；句子成份多分析,2.名词性从句,3.状语从句,1.定语从句,4.句式结构,1.HeputitinasecretplacewhereIcouldntfind.,which,2.ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow.,where,3.IllneverforgetthedaywhichIfirstwenttoschool.,when,1）定语从句,关系代词和关系副词的误用,1.Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathedpickedupfromtheradiointheday.,what,2.ButitdidntmatterthatIwouldwinornot.,whether,3.Whenpeopleareplayinggames,theymovealot.Thatishowsportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealth.,why,2）名词性从句,连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用,1.Hegotupearlyinordertohecouldcatchthefirst.,that,2.Makeamarkwhichyouhaveanydoubtsorquestions.,where,3）状语从句,引导词的误用,Asweclimbedthemountains,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.,2)Iparticularlyenjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthechangingcolorsoftheleavesonthetrees.,visited,seeing,4）句式结构,考察一个句子是否完整,是否存在否定误用的问题,省略现象是否有误,平行、并列关系是否混乱,强调句结构是否完整等.,3)Whyyouthinksomanypeoplestillsufferfrompovertynow?4）Hotwaterisprovidedfor24hours,butliftsworkdayandnight.5）Ithoughtitwasdulltowatchagameinwhichplayerskickedaballtoeachother.Therefore,myfatherlovesfo