研究生英语写作第一次

Post-graduateEnglishWriting,研究生英语写作,左雁北京物资学院外语学院,(A)Englishwriting:,WritingstagesStructureDifferentwritingtasksWritingstrategies(B)Translation:LanguagedifferencesandtranslationTranslationtechniques,Unit1（A）Gettingstarted,UnitGoalsforWriting:Studentswill,Betterunderstandwhatgoesintothepre-writingstageUnderstandhowtoorganizeandmapoutideasbeforewritingKnowhowtousesubordinateclauses,Practice1,YouaregoingtowriteashortbiographyoftheAmericanactor,MarlonBrando.Readtheinformationandthenwriteaparagraphusingallofthelistedpoints.,MarlonBrandowasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.HediedonJuly1,2004oflungfailure.Hewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachild.Hisfirstjobwasaditchdigger.In1947hebecamefamousovernightafterappearinginAStreetcarNamedDesire.Hestunnedaudienceswithhisremarkablehonesty,sexualityandintensity.MarlonBrandochangedmodernactingbypopularizing“Method”acting.“Method”actingisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.HewontheOscarin1972forhisroleinTheGodfatherandherefuseditbecauseheobjectedtothewaythefilmindustrydepictedNativeAmericansonscreen.Hewasnominatedfor8Oscarsandwon2andisoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema.,MarlonBrando,whowasoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema,wasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.Althoughhewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachildandhisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger,hewentontochangemodernactingbypopularizing“Method”actingwhichisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.Theactor,whostunnedaudienceswithhisremarkablehonesty,sexualityandintensity,becamefamousovernightin1947afterappearinginAStreetcarNamedDesire.Hewasnominatedfor8Oscarsandwon2,includingoneforhisroleinTheGodfatherwhichwasrefusedbecauseheobjectedtothewaythefilmindustrydepictedNativeAmericansonscreen.MarlonBrandodiedoflungfailureonJuly1,2004.,AnalyzingtheParagraph,AnalyzingtheParagraph,OriginalParagraphvs.ImprovedParagraphNumberofsentences?10vs.5Sentencesbeginwithwhichwords?He/Hisvs.avarietyofbeginnings,MarlonBrandowasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.MarlonBrando,whowasoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema,wasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.SubordinateclauseAdditionalinformationfitswellinthesentence,Hewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachild.HisfirstjobwasasaditchdiggerMarlonBrandonchangedmodernactingbypopularizing“Method”acting.Althoughhewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachildandhisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger,hewentontochangemodernactingbypopularizing“Method”actingwhichisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.Relativeclauseadditionalinformationisaddedtotheendofasentenceratherthanusedasanindividualsentence,MarlonBrandodiedoflungfailureonJuly1,2004.RepeatingthenameinthefinalsentenceSimple,directandtothepoint;agoodwaytoendapieceofwritingAreminderthatsimplesentencesareokaywhenusedwithmorecomplexsentences,Clauses,Aclause:asentence,orpartofasentence,withitsownverbExamples:ThrowtheballIthrowtheballIthrowitThrowit,Threekindsofclauses:1.Main2.Subordinate3.Relative,1.amainclause:themoreimportantclauseinasentence;itisacompletesentence.2.asubordinateclause:theclausewhichislessimportantthanthemainclause;itsnotacompletesentenceExample:MarlonBrando,whowasoneofthegreatestactorsinthehistoryofcinema,wasbornonApril3,1924inOmaha,Nebraska.Subordinateclausesusuallybeginwithwhichwords?who,whose,which,that,where,BITstudentsstudyhard.MostBITstudentsaremale.BITstudents,whostudyhard,aremostlymale.BITstudents,whoaremostlymale,studyhard.Beijingisoneoftheworldsbiggestcities.Beijinghostedthe2008OlympicGames.Beijing,whichhostedthe2008OlympicGames,isoneoftheworldsbiggestcities.Beijing,whichisoneoftheworldsbiggestcities,hostedthe2008OlympicGames.,Makethisthemainclause,Makethisthemainclause,RelativeClauses,3.arelativeclause:aclausewhichisaddedontoanotherclause;itgivesadditional,orrelated,information.Example:-Althoughhewaskickedoutofseveralschoolsasachildandhisfirstjobwasasaditchdigger,hewentontochangemodernactingbypopularizing“Method”actingwhichisatechniquethatemphasizesemotionaltruthandanaturalstyle.Relativeclausesusuallybeginwithwhichwords?who,whose,which,that,where,RelativeClause,MakearelativeclausefromthesesentencesMarlonBrandowonanOscarforTheGodfather.TheGodfatherisaboutanItalian-Americanmafiafamily.MarlonBrandowonanOscarforTheGodfather,whichisaboutanItalian-Americanmafiafamily.,RelativeClause,MakearelativeclausefromthesesentencesMarlonBrandowasborninOmaha.Omahaiswherehealsodied.MarlonBrandowasborninOmaha,wherehealsodied.,Directions:Forthispart,youaretoreadthefollowingpassageandwriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsasrequired.Youareadvisedtoavoidusingsuchstereotypedexpressionsorsentencesas“lastbutnottheleast”.,根据某调查报告Whatdoyouthinkofthetwochoices?Whatsocialrealitiesarereflected?,Practice2,Itisusefultomakealistofinformationyouwanttoincludeinyourwriting.Letstakeasanexamplethequestion:Whatmakesagoodstudent?Pcationalbackground5.motivation8.personality3.race6.gender9.family,Mapping,Afteryouhavelistedtheitemsyouwanttoincludeinyourwriting,Itistimetoorganizeandgroupthem.Thiscanbedonethroughaprocesscalledmapping.Awritingmapprovidesavisualoutlineofwhatyouwillincludeinyourpaper.Itincludesmajorthemesandsub-themes.,educationalbackgroundinteresteducatedvs.uneducatedteachersinstillinterest?privatevs.publicschoolingsubjectqualityofschoolmaterialsusedqualityofteachingactivitiesdoneintelligencemotivationIQchemicalmakeupofbrainteacherproperlymotivates?definitionof“intelligence”family/friendsprovide?gradesneedtopassexams?,WhatMakesaGoodStudent?,Tip!Yourwritingmapmayormaynotlookliketheoneprovidedhere.Itcantakeanyshapeorformyoufeelmostcomfortablewith.Also,thereisnoneedtospendtoomuchtimemakingawritingmap.Severalminutesofconcentratedthoughtmightbeenoughforyoutoorganizeyourideassufficiently.,Dothembeforeyouwrite.Dontspendalotoftimeonthem.Severalminutesisenough.Usethemtosketch,oroutline,yourthoughts.,WritingMaps,Unit1（B）DifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglish,汉英句子差异与翻译,汉语句子：语义型或意合型英语句子：语法型或形合型,汉语：“板块”式结构（“竹节”式结构）英语：“多枝共干”型eg.他们进行挑衅活动，制造紧张局势，必须马上停止。Theymuststopalltheirprovocationsatonce,whichcreatetensions.,眼下,咱只盼着有关部门对“工薪族”们作一个详细的调查,对我们的收入心里有个数,别出来个咱累死也够不着的房价。（分析句子结构）Now,Iamexpectingthedepartmentsconcernedtosurveyonusthesalaried”,soastogainaclearunderstandingofourincomeandabandonsuchahighpricewecantaffordevenifwetoiltodeath.,中西方思维模式的差异,“狮子头”式的汉语句式村东头的王大妈来了，受坏人欺骗的村民们也来了。,“孔雀尾”式的英语句式：TherecameAuntWangwhodweltattheeasternendofthevillage,andalsocamethevillagerswhohadbeendeceivedbythescoundrel.去年他为了完成一个项目在实验室用计算机努力地干了十个月。,Heworkedhardwithacomputerinthelabfortenmonthsinordertocompleteaprojectlastyear.,WritingaCV/Resume,Acurriculumvita,orCV,isaninformativesummaryofallacademicandprofessionalachievements.Usuallylongerthanaresume,aCVcanbethreeormorepagesandoftenincludesrelevantexperiencesoutsideofapersonsprofessionalandacademiclife,suchasvolunteeringexperienceandinterests.OneofthemaindifferencesbetweenaresumeandaCVisitspurposeindifferentcountries.InEuropeaCVisusedintheplaceofaresumetoapplyforemployment,whereasintheUnitedStatesaCVismainlyusedforacademic-basedapplications.,1.Firstyouneedtowriteyourname,addressandcontactdetails.(Supplyingaphoto)2.Youshouldthenwriteashortsummaryofyourskills.Makeitshortbutpowerful.3.EducationbackgroundYouneedtolisttheschoolsoruniversitiesyouhaveattended4.WorkExperienceYouneedtowritedownyourworkexperiencenext.5.Summary/aimsachievedWriteabriefsummaryofskillsorqualificationsyouhaveachieved.6.ReferencesWritedowncontactdetailsofpreviousemployers.,Name:StevenWindsorNationalityBritishCitizenAddress:90CarillonAvenue,Richmond,Surry,England,UKTelephone:182XXXXXXXXEmail:steven87hotmail.co.ukSkype:steven234,Objectives:Thiswillbethefirstthingthatyourfutureemployerwillread.,Toworkinafriendlymotivatedenvironment,aswellasbeingaproficientteammemberinbothgivingandseekingadvice.Tocontinuetochallengemycapabilities,whileconductingmyselfinaprofessionalandcontrolledmanner.Toselfevaluateonaregularbasistokeepupwithnewtechnologiesinanever-changingworld.Tocontinuetoexpandenrichingmyawarenessofdifferentculturesaround,aswellastolearnthesimplefundamentalsofpopularforeignlanguagessoastointeractmoreconfidently.,Educationandcoursesattended/credentialsBrunelUniversity:Credited:marketingstrategies&salesanalysis1982-1986E