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书面表达重点训练一关于中学生使用手机信息归纳： Most people have a cellphone(手机). When you are walking on a busy street, you will see many people speaking on their phones. Many people say they cant imagine how they live without a cellphone. Cellphones play an important role in our daily life, such as keeping in touch with others, calling home or the police if there is any emergency(紧急事故). Although cellphones can help us a lot, we must think of others when we use them. Unfortunately, some people do not consider others when using their cellphones. For example, some cellphone users speak too loudly and discuss personal matters in public places. Some people make phone calls in the cinema. Some people talk for a long time on the phone while they are driving on the busy road. Someones cellphone will ring during an important meeting. Many people complain about these bad manners. In their opinion, cellphone users shouldnt disturb others when they make a call. Then how to use a cellphone politely in public? The following rules will help you. When youre in a meeting, watching a movie or having a lesson, youd better turn off your cellphone. When you get a call and youre with friends, try to make the call as short as you can. If you are waiting for an important call, then make sure that you tell others about this at the beginning of a meeting. Its rude to scream(尖叫) or shout on the phone. Make sure you will be heard only by the caller but not by the others around you. Besides, if possible, find a quiet place where you can talk in private.赞成：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。（很轻，小，容易携带）2.如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。 （ 方便同学们和父母和朋友沟通communicate with sb.） 3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。(play some games, relax ourselves)4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。(可以上网surf the Internet . 获取许多关于学习的信息)如果你能正确使用手机，它对学习有好处。反对： 1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。 2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。（课堂上，玩游戏，发送信息。浪费时间a waste of time. 对学习不利 be bad for）注意：1.可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：100左右；Dear Editor,Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, .Yours,Wang Lin手机的利与弊， 发表您的看法。范文：(共115 words) Today, mobile phones are more and more popular among middle school students. There are some advantages. First, they are small, light, easy to carry. Second, its very convenient for us to communicate with our parents and friends. At last, we can also use them to surf the Internet to get much information about study. If you can use mobile phones in the right way, it is good for study.On the other hand, there are also some disadvantages. For example, students may use mobile phones to play games or send messages in class. Its waste of time. Its bad for our study.In a word, we students had better not bring mobile phones to school.二水资源Since last autumn, there has been very little rain in many places of China. A serious drought(干旱)hit these place. Crops(庄稼) died before the harvest(收获).And more than 20 million people are having difficulty getting safe drinking water because of the bad drought. The Chinese government has done a lot to solve the water problem, such as digging(挖) wells and so on. Other parts of China are helping by sending water, clothes and money.Water is very important. Only one percent of the worlds water is useful for human beings. This is the fresh water we use every day. In china, more than 400 cities are short of water. About one fifth of the worlds population suffers(遭受) from water problem. When we dont care of water, we hurt everyone. Its time for us to use water in a smarter ways. Dont waste water. All of us should try to save more water for future. 书面表达：请以Save Water为题, 写一篇约80字的文章简单谈谈水的重要性；简述当前水污染和水资源缺乏的情况, 并提出一些保护水资源、节约用水的建议。作文构思：1.先谈谈水的重要性。2.当前水污染和水资源缺乏的情况3.提出一些保护水资源、节约用水的建议。Water is very important for people, animals and plants. We need water in daily life, like drinking, making meals, washing clothes and so on. We cant live without water.But now water has become less and less. Many cities are short of fresh water. We need more water because the population is larger and larger. People waste water and factories pour waste water into rivers. What should we do to save water? First we shouldnt throw rubbish into the rivers and the factories must stop pouring waste water into rivers. Second we can use less water when we wash something. Third we should turn off the tap when we are not using it. Fourth, we had better wash the toilets and water flowers with used water. Please take action to save water. Dont let our tear become the last drop of water!三世界各地地震频发，假如发生地震，如何保护自身安全呢？请你以How to protect ourselves during the earthquake为题给同学们作一次国旗下讲话，写一篇演讲稿，字数约80词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, my dear teachers and schoolmates! Now earthquakes happen regularly all over the world. Earthquakes cause great damage(损失). Even a lot of people lost their lives. Earthquakes are terrible. If an earthquake happens around us, how Try to remember these; they may help you to stay safe. Thats all, thank you! 范文：Good morning, my dear teachers and schoolmates! Now earthquakes happen regularly all over the world. Earthquakes cause great damage. Even a lot of people lost their lives. Earthquakes are terrible. If an earthquake happens around us, how can we protect ourselves in an earthquake? Here are some suggestions for you. First, if you are in the school, you should run quickly to the playground. Second, if you are in a tall building, youre supposed to hide under a strong desk or table and hold on to it. You mustnt take the elevator. You cant jump from the tall building. Remember to stay away from windows and other glass. Third, if you are outdoors, get into an open area away from trees, buildings, walls, signs and power lines. Fourth, if you are in a theater, you should stay in your seat and protect your head with your arms. Fifth, if you are in a car, stay in your seat and protect your head with arms. Dont try to leave until the shaking is over. Try to remember these, they may help you to stay safe. Thats all, thank you! 四学习中遇到的问题及解决办法Not only adults but also teenagers have problems in their life. Here is a survey showing the main problems of teenagers.First, they feel stressed because they have too much homework to do both at school and at home. They have lots of exams to take. And parents usually send them to different classes at weekends. They dont have their own time to do what they are interested in. Second, more and more teenagers are getting short-sighted(近视).They often read in bed or keep reading for a long time without having a rest. Some of them are crazy about playing computer games. Some spend too much time watching TV Another serious problem among teenagers is that many of them are becoming fat. They eat too much junk food, but they take little exercise.I think teenagers should think of ways to deal with the problems. They should make a plan for study and hobbies and find time to relax as much as possible.在学习中，我们都会遇到各种各样的问题。请以Problems in Study为题，谈谈你在学习中遇到的问题，并提出解决问题的方法及建议，80字左右。审题：所写内容两点：1、遇到的问题；2、解决方法及建议。 范围：学习上，不是生活上。Problems记不住。 I cant remember well.考试前睡不好。 I cant sleep well before exams.上课听不明白。 I cant understand the teacher.上课走神，没认真听课。 I cant listen to the teachers carefully in class.睡眠不足，上课想睡觉。 I cant get enough sleep, and I feel sleepy in class.太多作业，做不完。 I cant finish homework, because I have too much homework.感到太紧张。 I feel too nervous.Problems in StudyI have a lot of problems in study. First, it is difficult for me to remember the knowledge well. Though I spend much time on what I have recited, I forget it easily. Second, I cant get enough sleep every day. So, I feel sleepy in class. I know it is not good to do so, but I cant concentrate on the textbooks and I cant listen to the teachers carefully in class. Third, I feel so nervous before exams that I cant fall asleep at night.I realize my problems and think of some ways to solve them. I recite the knowledge after I understand them. Its easier to remember. And I review what I learned quickly every day. After class, I spend half an hour in playing sports. It makes me feel less nervous. I can also get a better sleep.What about you? Maybe you can share your ideas with me.五“I dont like my parents. They always tell me I should do this, and should not do that. It sometimes makes me angry,” said Zhang Hua, a middle school student in Guangzhou. Do you have the same problem? Maybe your parents had the same problem when they were at your age long ago. Why does it seem that some parents are not so friendly in their childrens eyes?Most parents like worrying about things. They worry about everything about you from the time when you were born. They do a lot for you, though something would make you angry. They just care about you and worry about you. They worry about your choice of friends, the food you eat, your work at school, how much sleep you get, etc All these things are part of your life. They want you to grow up healthily and happily So how can you make things easier on yourself? Its easier than you think. Just make sure your parents know what you are doing. Get them to know your friends. Call them if you stay somewhere else later than usual. Say sorry to them when you make mistakes. Take responsibility for what you have done. Talk about ideas with them. They may talk about theirs with you Most of all, try to think about your parents feelings. They are still practicing being parents and need help and support from you. Some day, when you become a parent, they may be able to help you to get on with your children.最近中学生英语报以what is my favorite parent like? Why? 为主题，展开调查和讨论，请根据以下问题，结合你自己的观点，写一篇80词左右的议论文。提示：1. 你心目中的好爸爸 好妈妈是什么样子的？ 从家庭、工作、生活等方面阐述：2.受欢迎的爸爸、妈妈应该有什么特点？请列举3个。My Favorite MotherSome mothers always ask their children to do this or not to do that. They care about their childrens friends, what their children eat and what time their children go to bed, etc. I dont like this kind of mothers. I like my mother because she is unusual. First of all, my mother is patient and helpful when Im in trouble Second, my mother is fair between adults and teenagers. Third, my mother is fun when we play together .But most of all, my mother can play different roles in our lives.六Whats your opinion about surfing online?MaryMany middle school students like us like surfing online in the spare time, which has some advantages and disadvantages. Whats your opinion about it? Thanks for your idea.RE1:whats your opinion about surfing online?ViviI think the Internet can offer us new knowledge and the latest information in the world. And it can make our life richer and more colorful.RE2: Whats your opinion about surfing online?CindyI think lts OK to surf online, but the time must be restricted because most students surf the Internet to play games rather than learn something useful.RE3: whats your opinion about surfing online?AliceI think the Internet makes us communicate more conveniently. I met a lot of friends in an English Corner. We can talk and chat there.RE4:whats your opinion about surfing online?JohnIn my opinion surfing the Internet is OK. But we should limit our time for it strictly and we should use the Internet more for our studies instead of only for pleasure.请根据以上的信息和下面的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你对中学生上网的看法和建议。要点提示：1 中学生上网基本以听音乐、看电影、玩游戏和聊天为主。2 大多数中学生天天上网，有的一天一个小时，有的两个多小时。3 由于经常上网，他们上课打瞌睡，放学后不完成作业。4 你对中学生上网的看法和建议。Nowadays a great number of middle school students like surfing the Internet. But what do they do online and how long do they spend on it? During the summer vacation, I did a survey.These middle school students usually listen to music, see movies, play games or chat with friends online. Most of them surf the Internet every day. Some of them are online for about one hour and some even for more than two hours. As a result, they are sleepy in class and cant finish their homework. Its a bad habit.In my opinion, middle school students should use the Internet correctly and spend less time on it, or it will affect their study. To keep students healthy, parents and teachers must actively guide students online.七相当部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状，比如，老想着考试，害怕考试失败，食欲不振，睡不着觉，还会作恶梦等，请你就上面的症状，从营养，睡眠，心理等角度给一些建议，缓解他们的压力。 词数：80词左右。 解题： 一,别担心成绩，成绩不是所有的东西。二考试前放轻松点，可以散散步，但不要做激烈的运动。三睡眠上，尽量早一点休息。可以在睡觉前听一听轻松的音乐。四 营养上，多吃水果青菜，少吃肉。Its true that we often feel nervous before exams. We are afraid to fail the exams. We keep thinking of them all the time. We find it hard to sleep at night. And sometimes we have terrible dreams.I dont think we need to worry too much about our exams. First, just try our best. Dont care about the results too much. Grades are not the all things. Thats OK.Second, we should relax a little before exams. Dont spend too much time on study. We can have a walk in the park, do some sports, talk with your friends and parents, or listen to the music. Third, dont stay up late. Go to bed a little earlier than usual. We can listen to some light music before going to bed. Finally, eat more vegetables, more fruit and less meat. A cup of hot milk is a good help.In these ways, we can relax ourselves before exams and get good grades.八Three VolunteersLucy, 15,is studying at Hongshan Middle School.David, a Junior Two student at Xili Middle School, is 14 years old.May, a fifteen-year-old girl, is a student of Junior Three at Binhai Middle School.Just because I like kids and teaching, I can help to look after your kids or help them with their homework on Saturday morning. If you need my help, please phone me at 83752624.I can sing and dance for the old to make them happy and I am good at talking with others. I am free on every Sunday. Please send an e-mail to me if you need my help. Here is my e-mail address:.I like animals and I have learned a lot about animal diseases. To be an animal hospital is my dream. If your pet has any problem, you can call me on Saturday afternoon. My mobile phone number is 假设你的名字叫John，14岁，大鹏中学（Dapeng Middle School）初三年级的学生，每个星期六上午你有空闲时间。你也非常想参加“Kids Drawing Guidance”志愿者服务队。你给报社编辑部写一份自我介绍，内容包括：1. 自我介绍：姓名，年纪，身份。2. 列举三个个人优势3. 能为“Kids Drawing Guide”志愿者服务队做至少两件事情。 范文：Dear Editor, My name is John, I am 14 years old. I am a student of Grade 9, Dapeng Middle School. I am free every Saturday morning. So I want to do something for Kids Drawing Guidance. I am a good student in my school. First, I am good at drawing, and I can draw very beautiful pictures. Second, I like kids very much and I can help them with their drawing. Third, I can sing and dance well. I can cheer them up. I want to be a volunteer of Kids Drawing Guidance. If I have a chance, I will try my best to do it. Please call me at 8727-4929. Yours, John九Food safety食品安全成为我们面临的一个严重的问题，自从三鹿毒奶粉伤害幼儿事件发生以来，许多人都开始关注食品安全，今天许多人都不相信我国生产的食品，不敢去超市购物，因为那儿食品有害，甚至有人自己种菜。如何解决这个问题：1.政府制定有关食品安全的法律确保食品安全；2.人们自身应该学习一些食品安全知识；3.买到问题食品应向报社投诉或报警，叫人不要再买。 It is well-known that the safety of food is closely（密切地）related（相关的）to our health. However ,at the beginning of the year 2008,the low-quality milk products by SANLU Company killed many babies. So everybody began to pay much attention to food safety problems.Now many people have no confidence in food that was made in our country. They are afraid to buy things in the supermarket, because the quality of these things is not good. Eating these things is bad for our health. Some people even grow vegetables by themselves.In order to solve these problems,I think our government should make some strict laws to make sure the food is safe.Second ,we should learn more knowledge (知识) about food quality.Third when we buy something that has bad quality,we should call the newspaper or the police and ask all the people not to buy it. If we can do these , I think our food will be safer and safer. Our life will be happier and better.十The Chinese mainland saw a faster increase of deaths from the A/H1N1 influenza in the past weeks, according to the Ministry of health.A total of 74 deaths were reported in the week from November 23 to 29, said a notice issued on the ministrys website Wednesday. Reported deaths in the previous(先前的) two weeks were 28 and 51 respectively（各自地）.About 91 percent of all the flu cases reported last week were of the A/H1N1 strain, compared with 89.8 percent in the previous week, the notice said.The ministry advised the public to keep warm in the cold weather, wash hands frequently and keep rooms ventilated.As of Monday, more than 27 million people nationwide had been inoculated（给注射疫苗） with China-made A/H1N1 vaccine, according to the ministry.Four deaths had been reported after vaccination（接种） and three had been confirmed irrelevant（不相干） to the vaccines, while cause of the other is not clear yet, the ministry said.病菌在人流密集的地方肆虐，学校是病毒传播场所之一。假设你识Doctor Li,你被邀请到学校做疾病防控演讲，请你用英文写一篇发言稿，从学校卫生，个人卫生和饮食，作息等方面谈谈如何预防疾病。要求：1）包含至少三点建议。 2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺。 3）不少于80个单词。发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。 How to defend the disease in schoolDear teachers and students， _ Doctor Li写作指导1.写作的主体失调应为一般现在时。2.可以采用first, second等表示分点的词汇，使文章结构更加清晰。Dear teachers and students， There are many ways to protect us from getting the disease. First of all, try to keep the classroom clean, and tidy. We need