八年级下册英语作文辅导技巧.ppt

EnglishWriting英语书面表达专项讲解,你家楼上来了一位新邻居，他们经常做一些事干扰了你的生活，请根据下面的内容写一封信，向他们合理提出要求。,Beginning:,1.Welcometobeourneighbors,2.Itsverynicetobeourneighbors,3.Imsorrytosayyoubringsometroubletous,1.Wouldyoumind/notdoingsth?2.Couldyouplease/notdosth.?,写作第二步,列,PlaythedrumlateintonightSingtooloudintheearlymorningDroplitteraroundinthehallwaysPlayathome,加,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,1.Assoonas2.So3.whatsmore4.Thanksfor5.however,Endingandcomments:,连,恰当运用关联词语，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进:and,bothand,2.表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折:but,however,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,关联词,6.表示对比:notbut,ontheonehandontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,whatsmore,infact,10.表示结论:altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Welcometobeourneighbors.However,Imsorrytosayyoubringsometroubletous.Mr,Jack,wouldyoumindnotplayingthedrumlateintonight?Wecantsleepwelluntilyoustopit,Mrs.Jack,youaresoactive,youalwaysgetupearly.,Sowouldyoumindnotsingingtooloudintheearlymorning?Andyoursonsplayingballathomeallday.Wouldyoumindaskinghimnottoplayitthere?Thereisabigplaygroundinfrontofourneighborhood.Whatsmore,yourdaughterplaysmusic,too.Mylittleboystartstocryassoonassheplaysthecrazymusic.,Thankyouforyourunderstanding.,Beginning:Ifeelsonicetohaveyouasmyneighbor.,However,Ihavetotellyouhavealsogivensometroubletome.First,wouldyoumindtalkingwithyourwifeinalowvoice?IcantdoanythingwhenIhearthenoiseeveryday.,Next,Icanusuallyfindsometrashoutsidemyhouse.Itsmellsterrible.Socouldyoupleasenotdropitthere?Finally,yoursonisalwaysplayinghisCDstooloud.Wouldyoumindaskinghimtoputonhisearphones?,Thankyouforyourunderstanding/cooperation,写出高质量的句子：如,Ihaveahappyfamily.,WhatahappyfamilyIhave!,Thestoryisveryinteresting.Everyonelikesit.,Thestoryissointerestingthateveryonelikesit.,Hewasill.Hedidntcometoschool.,Hedidntcometoschool,becausehewasill.,IamgoodatEnglishandIamgoodatmathstoo.,IamgoodatnotonlyEnglishbutalsomaths.,书面表达容易出现的错误:大错误指：句子结构，谓语构成，词序，语态，时态等方面；小错误指：名词单复数，第三人称单数，拼写，标点符号，大小写方面。,一般语法项目的错误,人称:Mr.Greenworkshard,sheisthebestworkerintheiroffice.时态:Oneday,theyaregoingtotheisland.主谓一致:Everyoneinourclassworkhard.习惯用法:HehelpsmeinmyEnglish.,注意语序(感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句),Jimworksveryhard.SodoesJack.(前后主语非一人)A:Jimworksveryhard.B:Sohedoes.(前后主语为一人)Hedidntknowwherethebookshopwas.Theboyswanttoknowhowtheyshoulddoit.,是否符合习惯Myworkisverybusy.,Iverymuchlikeit.,Imverybusywithmywork.,Ilikeitverymuch.,语言是否正确,规范地道。避免中国式英语,Ispent10yuanbuythebook.Hebybiketoschool.,如何写出高质量的书面表达A.平时注重解题技巧的养成,准备工作.仔细审题，明确要求。罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要点。,.紧扣要点，寻求思路。草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结尾（可适当发表自己的观点）。,写作之中,.开门见山，紧扣主题。,.语言正确,规范地道。,手机的用途：,句型、结构，避免中国式英语。标点符号,Mobilephonehasalotofusage.,Bringingacellphonecanbebothharmfulandhelpfulforamiddleschoolstudent.,.重短轻长,就易避难。,.过渡自然,表达流畅。,以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。,正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。不重复使用可置换的词。,a.表并列或递进:and,bothand,neithernor,notonlybutalso,aswell,aswellas,besides,whatsmore,also,b.表选择：or,eitheror.,c.表转折或让步:but,although,though,yet,however,nomatter,afterall.,为了使行文连贯流畅，巧用连接词与过渡语可使句子简洁、明了，句子间的逻辑关系更加密切，使文章更具有条理性，层次更加分明，文字连贯流畅、自然，从而达到更好的表达效果,常用的过渡用语有：,d.表对比:like,unlike,while,comparedwith,e.表举例：forexample,suchas，takeforexample,inonesopinion,inotherwords.,f.表强调：infact,ofcourse,besides,firstofall,Worsestill,Whatsworse,g.表时间顺序：when,after,before,assoonas,soonafter,sincethen,then,later,next,atlast,first,secondly,thirdly,finally，atthesametime,afterwards,meanwhile,表结论：inaword,inoneword,inshort,onthewhole,totellthetruth,Itshowsthat,Itsquiteclearthat,Itsknowntoallthat,aseverybodyknows,h.表因果关系:because,since,as,for,forthisreason,becauseofthis,inthiscase,therefore,so,j表插入：Ithink/believe/hope/suppose/guess,Iamafraid,k.表比较和对照：justas,inthesameway,instead,l.表空间：ontheright/left(of),ononesideof，ontheothersideof,ontopof,infrontof,closeto,opposite.,写出高质量的句子：如,Ihaveahappyfamily.,WhatahappyfamilyIhave!,Thestoryisveryinteresting.Everyonelikesit.,Thestoryissointerestingthateveryonelikesit.,Hewasill.Hedidntcometoschool.,Hedidntcometoschool,becausehewasill.,IamgoodatEnglishandIamgoodatmathstoo.,IamgoodatnotonlyEnglishbutalsomaths.,.适当评论,发表己见。,Howfriendlytheyare!Wecanlearnfromthem.Theyenjoyedthemselvesverymuch.Whatahappyfamily.,书面表达,六步法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一