高考应用文写作指导之建议信.ppt

高考英语应用文写作指导之建议(recommendationletter),Objectives:,2.Masteranduseusefulexpressions,structureandformworkoftherecommendationletter.,3.Completeawritingofrecommendationletter.,Inthisclass,wewillbeableto,1.Knowhowtoanalyzethematerialoftherecommendationletter.,高考常见的应用文类型有：,二找,三列,一审,四写,五润,纠正错误和润色文章,写建议信,找结构,列要点,审题目,建议信的写作步骤,Sample：假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。,第一人称,建议信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,第一步：审题目,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,结构三部分,Heading点题一两个句子；概括性2.Body陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由；层次分明3.Ending总结全文，表明希望；呼应主题,第二步：找结构,readEnglishaloudeveryday/spendoneorhalfhourinreadingEnglishbooks,WatchEnglishmovies/films.,第三步：列要点,listentoEnglishsongs/learntosingEnglishsongs,第三步：列要点,practiceyourspokenEnglishwithanative-speaker.,Howtobeginanrecommendationletter?第一段：开头是成功的一半,Dear.:(开门见山，点明意图）IknowyouhavesometroublesinlearningEnglishafterreadingyourletters.Therearesometipsforyou.(2)IamgladtohearyouwanttolearnEnglishwell.Inmyopinion,.(3)IamwritingtosharemyadvicewithyouonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Itwillbewiseofyouifyoutakethefollowingactions.,读了你的信后，我知道你在学习英语上有困难.,我很高兴听到你想要学好英语.在我看来,我写信和你分享如何学好英语方面的建议。如果你能采取以下措施，将是明智的选择。,第四步：写作文,建议信重点,第二段：说明建议的内容；（是什么）提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,Tolistyoursuggestions亲们，别东拉西扯，闹糊涂啊,First,Secondly,Finally,Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,Whatismore/besides/moreover/furthermoreTobeginwith,Inaddition,Lastbutnotleast(注意连贯和逻辑，合理使用连接词或短语）,Aperfectending!第三段：完美的Ending，可不是说灰姑娘的故事哦。,Inaconclusion/inaword（结论简洁，指明观点）Practicemakesperfect！NothingisdifficultIfyouputyourmindintoit.(2)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.(3)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovements.,适当运用模板,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到的问题.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youshould_,because_.Thirdly,youdbetter_.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_.Whatsmore,_.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,第五步：该错误、美文章,Summary,建议信的写作步骤,第二篇建议信：对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。,Practice:,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses.Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudontknowwhattodowithit/howtohelphim.Well.Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou.Myadviceareasfollows.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely.Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses,heisnotgoingtodowellatschool.Secondly,youcane-mailhimorleaveamessage.Thirdly,youshouldtellhimtheimportanceofstudy.Becauseeveryoneofusjusthasonechancetogotohighschool,heshouldstudyhardandnotwastetimeinindulgingontheInternet.Inaword,Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,Editor,ThankYou!,假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：1.课堂上认真听老师讲课；2.多和同学和老师用英语交流：3.坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多练、多问等。4.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。,Homework:,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,ImgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._Bestwishes,LiHua,Homework:,DearPeter,ImsorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsonhowtolearnChinesewell.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,becauseyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.Second,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinese.Third,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingit,youlllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanmakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.LiHua,DearWangNan,Imsorrytohearthatyouarefeelingannoyedthesedaysbecauseyouarenotabletocommunicatewithotherseffectively.Iwillgiveyousomeusefuladvice.Myadviceareasfollows.First,asasayinggoes,everymanhashisfaults,Inoticesomepeoplearoundusarenotgoodatcommunication.Soyoudonthavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Second,goodcommunicationisnotonlyhelpfultoourstudybutalsogoodforoursuccess.Third,behonestandfranktothosewhomyoutalkto,soyoucouldbeunderstoodbyotherseasily.Whatsmore,youdbettertrytounderstandotherswhentheytalkssothatyoucanexchangeideasw