TEM-4 Writing.ppt

TEM-4Writing,a)作文要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲)写一篇200词的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟。b)便条要求根据提示写大约5060词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。,作文评分标准,满分15，分项可以打0.5分。1.思想与表达2.语言运用能力3.写作规范,1.思想与表达（IdeasandArguments）：,满分为7分，其中1-2分较差，3分一般，4-5分良好，6-7分优秀。思想内容：（ideawant应改为wants.改为：Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo).,英语写作中典型的病句实例,2SentenceFragments句子不完整Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.剖析：本句后半部分“ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。改为：Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.TherearemanyinterestingperformancesintheCCTVSpringFestivalGala.Forexample,crosstalk,shortsketch,PekingOperaandsoon.改为：TherearemanyinterestingperformancesintheCCTVSpringFestivalGala，forexample,crosstalk,英语写作中典型的病句实例,3DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如：Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.剖析：句子中“attheageoften”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时。改为：WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.剖析：句子中不定式短语“todowellincollege”的逻辑主语不清楚。改为：Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.,3DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语,Asthemostimportantfestival,peoplealwayshavealotofwaystocelebratetheSpringFestival.改为：Asthemostimportantfestival,theSpringFestivalcanbecelebratedinalotofways.,英语写作中典型的病句实例,4Run-onSentences不间断句子Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.剖析：这个句子包含两层完整的意思：“Therearemanyways.”以及“Wegettoknowtheoutsideworld.”。简单地把它们连在一起很不妥当。改为：Therearemanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld./Therearemanywaysthroughwhichwecanbecomeacquaintedwiththeoutsideworld.TherearemanypeopleshownointerestintheGala.改为：TherearemanypeoplethatshownointerestintheGala.,英语写作中典型的病句实例,5Redundancy累赘写作时避免多余的词和不必要的句子。例如：Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。改为：Diligent,caringpeopleusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.IthasbeenoveramonthsincetheSpringFestivalended.,英语写作中典型的病句实例,6Incoherence不连贯句子前言不搭后语，或是结构上不畅通。例如：Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.剖析：Thefreshwater与逗号后的it不连贯。It与things在数方面不一致。改为：Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.TheshortsketchperformedbyZhaoBenshan,itisalwaysIexpectmost.改为：TheshortsketchperformedbyZhaoBenshanisalwayswhatIexpectmost.,英语写作中典型的病句实例,7TroubleinDiction措词毛病Diction是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题。学生应养成良好的推敲斟酌的习惯，避免随心所欲，拿来就用。8MisuseofPartsofSpeech词性误用,TEM-4Practice,Somepeoplepreferactivitiesthatmainlyinvolveworkingwithpeople.Otherschooseactivitiesthatmainlydealwithobjectsorma