大学英语作文ppt课件

.,作文点评,.,通病,You,.,通病,Whythepreparationissoimportant?Weallknowthatwhenyoustartawork,itsimportanttoplaceemphasisonthebeginning.Whenyoumakeaplanorsearchthedataforthework,youllgraduallyhaveaclearthoughtsofthewholework.Youllalsofindsomeprobableproblemsduringtheworkandtrytoavoidthemwhentheworkhavestarted.,You,.,通病,Secondly,fullpreparationmeansthatyouaresureyourprojectionandyouwantpreparingmore,maketerrific,planforyourfuture,andthismeansyouwillspentshortertimetosucceed.,You,.,形式：bedonebyE.g.IthasbeenshownthatItcanbeseenthatIthasbeendiscoveredthatIthasbeendemonstratedthatIthasbeenclarifiedthatIthasbeenrevealedthatItissuggestedthatIthasbecomeapparentthatItishopedthat,被动句,通病,You,.,通病,Whythepreparationissoimportant?Weallknowthatwhenaworkisstarted,itsimportanttoplaceemphasisonthebeginning.Whenaplanismadeorthedatafortheworkaresearched,aclearthoughtsofthewholeworkwillgraduallyariseinminds.Besides,someprobableproblemswillbefoundduringtheworkandtrytoavoidthemwhentheworkhavestarted.,You,被动句,.,形式：we,第一人称,通病,You,Secondly,fullpreparationmeansthatwearesureourprojectionandwewantpreparingmore,maketerrific,planforourfuture,andthismeanswewillspentshortertimetosucceed.,.,Inthelongrun,tomakeyourselfmoreandmorebrilliant,itwilltakeyouaworldofhelptocometrueyourdream.Ifyouarenotgoodatthejobenough,eventhoughyouhavethejob,youwilllostitsloworfast.Becauseonlyifyouaregoodenough,youwilladjustthejobwhichismoreandmoredifficult.,通病,You,练习,.,通病,structure,.,三段论凤头（3-4）：introducingthetopic/stateyourchoice猪肚（8-10）：analyzingthephenomenon/supportyourchoice豹尾（4-5）：summarizing/emphasizing/recommending,英语作文结构,.,背景描述，引出话题,正反评述,观点重述,英语作文结构,.,背景式（社会主流观念中队问题的评论和价值取向）E.g.(1)Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessiswhatalmosteveryoneinthesocietystrugglestoachievefor,nomatterhowitisdefinedaccordingtodifferentculturesandreligions.(2)Notonlycansuccessbringusmaterialincentivessuchasmoney,fame,allofwhichenableustoupgradethequalityofourlives,butwhatismoreimportantis,itgivespeopleasenseofachievement,self-satisfactionandsocialrecognition.(3),英语作文结构凤头,.,背景式（社会主流观念中队问题的评论和价值取向）E.g.(1)Wearelivinginaworldwhichisfullofchangesandtendstowelcomenewchangesinthisfastdevelopinginformationera.(2)Itisimpossibleforonetokeepthesametrackallthroughhis/herlifesincenoonelivesseparatelyfromhis/hercommunity.(3),英语作文结构凤头,.,背景式（社会主流观念中队问题的评论和价值取向）E.g.(1)Withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandard,almosteveryfamilycanaffordtobuyatelevisionset.(2)Televisionisbecomingincreasinglypopularbecauseofitsvaluesinentertainingandeducating.(3)E.g.(1)TheChinesehavea5000-yearhistory,(2)andmodesty,industry,braveryandkindnessarethefloweroftheirvirtues.(3)Inmyopinion,theystillremaintrueinreality,英语作文结构凤头,.,提问式（反问句最好）E.g.(1)Changes,mostofwhichrefertotechnologicalinnovations,haveobviouslyenhancedtheoverallstandardoflivingandcomfortlevelofpeople.(2)Ontheotherhand,whiletechnologicalinnovationshavetakenplace,hastheoverallconditionofhumanitybecomebetterthanithasbeenexpected?(3)Technologyinessencefailstoimproveourlives.,英语作文结构凤头,.,引言式（名人名言/格言警句）E.g.(1)AsaChinesepoemsays,“whenyouareinamountain,itshardtoseeitsrealshape.”(2)Likewise,understandingourselvesonourownisrelativelydifficultsincewecannotassessourselvesobjectivelyandaccurately.(3)E.g.(1)“Readingmakesafullman”isasayingofthefamousEnglishphilosopherFrancisBacon.Itmeansthatanyonewhowantstobeafullmanmustkeeponreading.Butbooksareofvariouskindsanddifferentcontents,dealingwithdifferentthingsintheworld.Thenwhatkindofbookshouldweread?Andhowtoread?,英语作文结构凤头,.,引言式（名人名言/格言警句）FrancisBaconKnowledgeispower.Imaginationwasgiventomantocompensatehimforwhatheisnot;asenseofhumortoconsolehimforwhatheis.Readingmakesafullman;conferenceareadyman;andwritinganexactman.Silenceisthesleepthatnourisheswisdom.Ifwedonotmaintainjustice,justicewillnotmaintainus.Awisemanwillmakemoreopportunitiesthanhefinds.Whoquestionsmuch,shalllearnmuch,andretainmuch.,英语作文结构凤头,.,引言式（名人名言/格言警句）FrancisBaconInorderforthelighttoshinesobrightly,thedarknessmustbepresent.Somebooksaretobetasted,otherstobeswallowed,andsomefewtobechewedanddigested.Truthisthedaughteroftime,notofauthority.Ifamanwillbeginwithcertainties,heshallendindoubts,butifhewillcontenttobeginwithdoubts,heshallendincertainties.Travel,intheyoungersort,isapartofeducation;intheelder,apartofexperience.,英语作文结构凤头,.,类比式/比喻式（不同事物间相同的属性）E.g.(1)Whenwedancewaltz,whatwedoistwostepsbackwards,andthenonestepforward.(2)Withoutthefirsttwosteps,waltzwouldbelikeuglyjumps.(3)Similarly,failure,atmosttime,actsasanecessarypreparationforewarmingsuccessandforewarningpeople.,英语作文结构凤头,.,故事类（包括描述图片）E.g.(1)Inapicture,afatherwasaskinghisdaughterhowherschooldayhadbeenwhenseeingherbackhome.(2)Thelittlegirl,however,didnotstoptochatwithherfather,leavingbehindonlyonesentence,“Youcanreadallaboutitonmyblog.”(3)ItisnotdifficulttodetectthatwhatthecartoontriestorevealisthegreatimpactoftheInternetoninterpersonalcommunication.,英语作文结构凤头,.,主题句先行（表原因）(1)Thereareprobablymanyreasonsforthisissue/problem/phenomenon.(2)Theexplanationforthisissue/problem/phenomenoninvolvesmanyfactors.(3)Thecausesforthisissue/problem/phenomenonarevaried.(4)Thefollowingthreefactorsprobablycontributetothisissue/problem/phenomenon.,英语作文结构猪肚,.,主题句先行（表建议）(1)Confrontedwiththisissue/problem/phenomenon,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasures.(2)Agreatnumberofsolutionsarebeingoffered.(3)Thereareseveralmeasuresforustoadopt.(4)Peoplehavealreadyfiguredoutmanywaystosolvethisissue/problem/phenomenon.,英语作文结构猪肚,.,主题句先行（表利弊）(1)Aseverycoinhastwosides,thisissue/problem/phenomenonentailsbothpositiveandnegativeconsequences.(2)Everyrosehasthorns,andthisissue/problem/phenomenonisnoexception.(3)However,everyswordhastwoedges.Wehavetoadmitthatthisissue/problem/phenomenondoesbring,tosomeextent,somenegativeeffects.,六级作文结构猪肚,.,主题句先行（表不同观点）(1)Publicopinionsonthisissue/problem/phenomenonprobablydiffer.(2)Itisdifficult/noteasyforthepublictoreachaconsensusonthisissue/problem/phenomenon.(3)Itisevidentthatpeoplecannotagreewitheachotheronthisissue/problem/phenomenon.,英语作文结构猪肚,.,逻辑词紧随Firstofall,Secondly,LastbutnotleastTobeginwith,Moreover,FinallyForonething,Moreimportant,LastbutnotleastOntheonehand,Ontheotherhand,And=Meanwhile,inaddition,additionally,furthermore,moreover,But=however,nevertheless,nonetheless,inspiteof,despiteSo=therefore,thereby,hence,thus,consequently,asaconsequence,asaresult,英语作文结构猪肚,.,概括总结式（重述观点）展望式（针对目前需要改进或还没有实现的事情或事物提出一种希望）口号式（对问题分析完之后，提出一种解决方法以供读者参考，或是提出一种号召。这种结尾方法比较有感染力）引语式（注意：如果开头使用了引语，结论部分最好不要再用）,英语作文结构豹尾,.,结尾词先行Asaconsequence,InshortInawordIngeneralAsfarasIamconcernedTakingthesefactorsintoconsideration,IfirmlybelieveInsumToconclude,英语作文结构豹尾,.,通病,Sentence,.,开头段常用提出现象句型Nowadaysmoreandmorearecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.InrecentyearsisgaininggrowingpopularitywithRecentyearshaveseenaboominNowadays,therearemany.Nowadays,hasbecomeaverycommonmatterinNowadaysthereisagrowingtendencyinRecentlyhasarousedwideconcern./hasbeenbroughtintofocus.Mostofusmayhavesuchexperiencethat,英语作文句式,.,开头段常用引出他人观点句型Inreactiontothephenomenon,somepeoplesayWhenitcomesto,somepeoplethinkWhenaskedabout,mostpeoplesayNow,itiswidelybelievedthat,英语作文句式,.,开头段常用引出两种不同观点句型Therehassprungupaheateddebateastowhether.Somemaintainthat.However,othersbelievethatThereisapublicdebatetodayover.Somepeoplebelieve.OthersclaimthatPeoplesopinionsvarywhentheytalkabout.Somemaintainthat.Othersbelievethat,英语作文句式,.,中间段常用引出作用、重要性、优缺点、影响句型playsanimportantroleinTheadvantagesofliesinmanyways.,asisthecasewithmanyissues,hasbothmeritsanddemerits.willbringaboutanunfavorableeffectsonwillcauseasweepingchangetomaygiveriseto/resultinanumberofproblems,英语作文句式,.,中间段、结尾段常用引出原因句型Why?Threefactorscanexplainthis.Threefactorsweighheavilyfor.Foronething,foranother,.Athirdcontributingfactoris.ThefactorsthatcontributetoincludeTowmajorfactorsaccountfor.Ontheonehand,.Ontheotherhand,.,英语作文句式,.,中间段、结尾段常用引出解决方法句型Howto?Thekeywordsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,.Next,.Finally,.Suchwouldnotifweknewthefollowingwaystohandle.First,.Second,.Third,.Theimpactscouldbeminimizedifwefollowthesuggestionsasfollow.Onesuggestionis.Anothersuggestionis.Afurthersuggestionis.,英语作文句式,.,图表作文开头段常用引出总体（变化）趋势句型Ascanbeseemfromtheline/bar/chart/tablethatincreased/rose/grewdramaticallyfromAsisrevealed/illustrated/shown/reflected/displayedinthechart,thereis/wasanincrease/arise/anupwardtrendof.Itcanbeseen/concludedfromthechartthatdropped/declined/fell/reducedslightlytoTheperiodtosawincrease/dropinthenumber/percentageof,英语作文句式,.,形式：bedonebyE.g.IthasbeenshownthatItcanbeseenthatIthasbeendiscoveredthatIthasbeendemonstratedthatIthasbeenclarifiedthatIthasbeenrevealedthatItissuggestedthatIthasbecomeapparentthatItishopedthat,被动句,.,练习：我希望收入差距过大能早点解决。练习：从以上分析我们不难看出男性和女性生来就不是平等的。,被动句,.,形式：谓+主only+状语或状语从句置于句首,句子用部分倒装。E.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.具有否定意义的词或词组位于句首,句子用部分倒装。NeitherPeterwantedtheresponsibility,nordidhiswife.表语形容词放句首，be动词与主语倒装AbsentfromMoYansspeecharemanythankstohismotherland.,倒装句,.,练习：在任何情况下我们都不能放弃希望。练习：我爱我师，但我更爱真理。,倒装句,.,形式：由what引导的名词从句:“的(东西thing)”E.g.Whatyouneedismorepractice.Whatishardistodogoodalloneslifeandneverdoanythingbad.Whateverwassaidheremustbekeptsecret.WhateverIhaveisatyourservice.,ming词性从句,.,练习：我们在此刻所能抓住的东西和人是对我们最珍贵的。,句词性从句,.,形式：doing/done做状语E.g.Afterithasbeenpaintedred,thebuildingstandsoutamongtherestandlooksveryattractive.Paintedred,thebuildingstandsoutamongtherestandlooksveryattractive.,非谓语动词,.,练习：虽然我不同意你的看法，但我誓死也会捍卫你说话的权力。,非谓语动词,.,形式：itbethat/whoE.g.Itisnotonlyblindmenwhomakesuchstupidmistakes.Itwasthegoatseyesthathehadseeninthedarkness.Itwasin1992thatIwatchedtheTVserialFence,WomenandDogs.ItwasnotuntilshetookoffherdarkglassesthatIrealizedshewasafamousfilmstar.,强调句,.,练习：只有直到每个公民都有深刻的法律意识和道德意识，“中国式过马路”才能不会出现。,强调句,.,通病,Diction,.,翻译：阅读经典书籍非常重要。初中：Readingclassicsisveryimportant.高中：Itisofvitalimportancetoreadclassics.大学预科：Nothingismoreimportantthantoreadclassics.大学四级：Readingclassicsplaysaveryimportantrolenowadays.大学六级：Nothingplaysanindispensable/inalienable/essentialrolethantoreadclassics.,英语作文选词,.,翻译：如果你喝多了去开车，你很可能会发生事故。(a).Ifyoudrinktoomuchanddrive,thenyouarelikelytohaveanaccident.(b).Excessiveconsumptionofalcoholisamajorcauseofmotorvehicleaccidents.,英语作文选词,.,翻译：这个寺庙的历史已经很长了，是因为其非常牢固的建筑。(a).Thistemplehasenduredbecauseitwassolidlybuilt.(b).Theprolo