高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课)PPT课件

-,1,Welcometomyclass!高三2部杨晓玉,-,2,Welcometomyclass!高三2部杨晓玉,-,3,Howtomakeyourwritingbetter?让你的作文起来,“亮”,-,4,Whatisagoodpieceofwriting?,1.neatwriting书写,2.content内容,3.structure结构,4.language语言,Goodfirstimpression,Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped,Everythingrequiredincluded,NoChinglishNoGrammaticalmistakesUsegoodwordsandmoresentencepatterns,-,5,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.合并为复合句,三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.,四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。,Task1:Makeyourlanguagebetter,-,6,一.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首.,2.Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.,Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.,Task1:Makeyourlanguagebetter,1.Thevolleyballplayerspracticedveryhardtowinthematch.,Towinthematch,thevolleyballplayerspracticedveryhard.,-,7,二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(写作中的句型转换),A.合并为简单句,1.把其中一句改为分词Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.,Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.,2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.,Hewasbroughtinhishandstiedbehindhisback.,with,-,8,B.合并为复合句1.TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.（同位从）,ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.,2.Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.（非限制定从）,which,Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfastmakespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasant,-,9,三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下句型：,倒装句,强调句,主从复合句,分词状语,With复合结构,.,感叹句,-,10,1.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.,Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.,Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.,2.Hedidntgetupuntil7oclock.,Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.,Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.,3.Itisnicetohearfromyouagain.,Hownicetohearfromyouagain!,-,11,2.Ihadagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cameto/hitme.,Icameupwithagoodidea.,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,四.use“complicated/advancedwords”,1.Illthankyouifyouthinkaboutmyapplication,Illappreciateitifyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsideration.,-,12,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.合并为复合句,三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.,四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。,Task1:Makeyourlanguagebetter,-,13,Task2:Makeyourstructurebetter文章结构,1.Inconclusion,weshouldtakeintoaccounttheproblem.(结论)2.Imagainstsmokingforthefollowingreasons.First,itsharmfultooneshealth.Second,itsawasteofmoneytobuycigarettes.Lastbutnotleast,itcausesairpollution.（顺序）3.Inadditiontothebeautifulscenery,touristscanenjoyavarietyofactivities.（递进）,2.有效使用，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。,1.通常使用段式。,三,连接词,-,14,-,15,A.Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesandasourrolemodels.D.Whatgreatchangestheyare!E.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagerslifeduringthepasttwentyyears.rightorder:_,ECABD,-,16,Example:国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括:自我介绍写信目的话题：我们应该感恩（thankful).推荐理由预祝活动成功注意：1.词数100左右;2.邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。,-,17,MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarefindingthemesfromstudentsallovertheworld.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommandatheme.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.Ourfatherandmotherthrowthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.Ourteachersteachushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead.weshouldthanktothem.asaChinese,weshouldbethankful,becausewherethereisthankful,thererehopestomaketheworldbetter,andwithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytheme.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveansuccessfulend.,As,lookingfortopics,recommend,topic,topic,throughthickandthin,thankfulness,分,16,-,18,1.MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.,2.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.,IamLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleschool.,Makethesentencesbetter!,Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthenewsthatyourelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.,（同位语）,（定从+同位从）,-,19,1.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.2.Ourfatherandmotherthroughthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.3.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytopic.4.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveasuccessfulend.5.Withathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.6.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommendtopic.,Haveatrytomakethesentencesbetter!,-,20,ourshowtime,-,21,Now,Letscheckwhetherourwritinghasbeenbetter?我们的文章亮起来了么？,-,22,ImLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthewonderfulnewsthatyourelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.Here,Imwritingtorecommendone.Inmyopinion,thatweshouldbethankfulisagoodidea.Firstly,itisourparentswhobroughtusupthroughthickandthin,soweshouldthankthem.Besides,weshouldthankourteachers,forwecouldntbewhowearenowwithouttheirhardwork.Whatsmore,thankfulnessisalsoourtraditionalChinesevirtue.Wherethereisthankfulness,therearehopestomaketheworldbetter.Onlywithathankfulheart,canwefullyrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Idappreciateitifmytopicwillbechosen.Wishtheactivityagreatsuccess.,24-25分,-,23,TipsinyourdailyEnglishlearning:1.Collectgoodwords/phrases/sentences;2.Readmore;3.Practicemakesperfect;4.Beconfidentanytime.,-,24,HomeworkHaveatry!每年12月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。主要内容如下：1推荐至少两项活动；2说明开展这些活动的理由；3谈谈你对体育节的看法；注意：1词数不少于120个2可适当发挥适当想象，增加细节，以便行文连贯。,-,25,writingst