industrialgoods概要写作.ppt

,概要写作Summarywriting,高考新题型,Summary五步法,1.阅读并理解大意,把握文章结构2.找出主题句，要点主题句，关键词。3.用自己的语言整合信息。4.修饰文章使之更有连贯性。5.检查语言，语法，和标点。,step2:Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?,（例子-expensive）,（例子-suchasusedcarsandtheexpensivepackagingmaterial）,.,（信息整合-后果+措施）,step3:Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.,（例子-expensive）,.,_,industrialgoodsweremade_.Andtheywereveryexpensive.Andtheycostalargesumofmoney.,Sometimeago;Inthepast;,tofunctionwellforalongtime;,step3:Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!Productsnowadayscannotlastlong._,_,（例子-suchasusedcarsandtheexpensivepackagingmaterial）,Peopleperfer,tothrowthemawayratherthanrepairthem,whichisawasteofearthsresources,Whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearthsresources,hascaused/hasresultedin,step3:Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?1.后果+2.措施1.Thiswastefulness_nowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.hasbroughtusgreattrouble2.Weshouldtakeimmediateactiontostopwastingresources.,.,（信息整合）,hascausedgreattroubleforus,step4.连贯性Inthepast,industrialgoodsweremadetofunctionwellforalongtimeandtheywereveryexpensive.Nowadays,productscannotlastlong.Peopleprefertothrowitawayratherthanrepairit,whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearthsresources.ThisWastefulnesshascausedgreattroubleforusnowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.Weshouldtakeimmediateactionstostopwastingresources.,However,Therefore,Step5.检查Inthepast,industrialgoodsweremadetofunctionwellforalongtimeandtheywereveryexpensive.However,productsNowadayscannotlastlong.Peopleprefertothrowitawayratherthanrepairit,whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearthsresources.ThisWastefulnesshascausedgreattroubleforusnowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.Therefore,weshouldtakeimmediateactiontostopwastingresources.,Decadesago,industrialgoodswereofhighqualityandcostalot.(要点1)Butthisisnotagoodideatomanufacturers.过渡句Theyadvisedustothrowthemawayratherthanrepairthem,whichhascausedagreatwasteoftheworldsresources.(要点2)Thiswastefulnesshasbroughtusgreattrouble.Nowwearerunningoutofresources.Therefore,weshouldactimmediatelytosavewhatwehavebeforeitstoolate.(要点3)69W,Modelessay,Writingskills,Skill2:Rewritesentences.,Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Sometimeago,manufacturersmadeindustrialgoodslastforever.,改变语态（主动被动）,2.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintogreattrouble.Wehavegotintogreattroubleduetothiswastefulness.,改变主语（人物）,3.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem.Itismoreexpensivetorepairthemthantothrowthemaway.Peoplewouldratherthrowthemawaythanrepairthemasitischeapertodoso.,改变主语（形式主语）,正话反说、反话正说,Step1：Step2:Step3:Step4:,Understandthewholepassageandgraspthekeypoints.(Reorganizeinformation.),Organizethekeypointslogically.,Howtowriteagoodsummary?,Conclusion,Begintowrite.,Paraphrasesomewordsorphrases.Rewritesentences.Usetheminimumofwords.,Readandcheck.,Polishyourwriting,Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforeverandtheywereveryexpensive.Nowadays,however,industrialproductscantlastlonganditischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairit.Thishasledtoagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroublewearein,soweshouldtrytoactimmediatelyandbuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue.(78W),Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurable,peoplewouldratherthrowthemaway,thanrepairit,whichhasresultedin,broughtusgreattrouble,everyonestopswastingresources,(64W),1.wandering2.account3.seek4.scene5.adventure6.permits7.appearance8.stared9.spotted10.contrary,1.seekout2.accountfor3.wasbroughtup4.stareat5.earnedmypassage6.onthecontrary7.ca