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必修1,必修一Unit1FriendshipWriting如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice,如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice,写作三步曲,说明写信目的提出建议以及改进措施,忠告表达希望采纳建议,或者期盼回复。,注意!,语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前,最好先肯定其优点。,建议信,三段式:第一段:点明主题第二段:陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由(是什么,为什么,怎么样)第三段:总结全文,表明希望,适当运用模板,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到的问题.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youshould_,because_.Thirdly,youdbetter_.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_.Whatsmore,_.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,建议信重点,第二段:说明建议的内容;(是什么)提出具体建议的原因;(为什么)指出采纳建议的益处。(怎么样)注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。,Openingsentences开头句,Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Thankyouforyourletter.3.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtoandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritinginreplyto5.Iamsorrytohearthat,表示建议的句子Youshould/mustDontWhat/Howabouttryinganewmethod?Whynotfindanewway?Youdbetterchangeyourformerplan.Idliketosuggestyoumakeanewplan.IfIwereyou,IwouldIdliketosuggestIstronglyrecommendYoumightaswell,学会用notonlybutalso表示并列含义亲爱的朋友们,去参加课外活动吧,这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩,还会改善你的学习。Dearfriends,pleasetakepartinafter-classactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollikecolorful,butalsoimproveyourlearning.,Closingsentences结束语,Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/useful.2.Atlast,IhopeIwillbeyourbestfriendsforever!Goodlucktoyou!3.Letskeepintouch.Idohopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.,ReadXiaoDongsletteronpage7andanswer:WhatisXiaoDongsproblem?Readtheinstructionsatthetopofpage7andfindoutwhatyouarerequiredtodo.,Hesnotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.Hefindsithardtomakefriendswithhisclassmates.,ILeadin,Toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes,Tojoinindiscussions,Toshowinterestinothersideas,Tosharehisfeelingswithothers,IIBrainstorming,YouradviceforXiaoDong,Presentingtheproblem,Proposingthesolution,Conclusion,DearXiaodong,Imsorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,whynot?Ifyoudothis,Secondly,youshould/canThen/Thatway,Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifBydoingthis,Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWang,Outlining,建议信重点,第二段:说明建议的内容;(是什么)提出具体建议的原因;(为什么)指出采纳建议的益处。(怎么样)注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。,Firstly,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingalone.Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatstudentmaybelonelytoo,Ifyoudothis,Imsureyouwillsoonhavenewfriends.Secondly,youshouldbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,Thatway,youwillsoonfindpeoplewiththesameinterests,becausethatisagoodwaytofindnewfriends.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoosideaifyoutrytojoininadiscussion.Youmayfeelthatisright.Bydoingthis,youarelettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Sothereshouldbenoproblem.Itshouldprovideyouwithsomenewfriends.,即时训练,你是我们学校一名很热心的学生,得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心,正在征求同学们的意见,请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。1.娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。2.最好在学生的课余时间开放。3.尽量不要收费。4.,写作分析:,第一段:引出话题,得知要建娱乐中心,想提建议。第二段:建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。第三段:建议课余时间开放,能使其得到充分利用。第四段:免费开放,有些学生经济困难。第五段:简单总结。,DearMr.President,Itscometomyattentionthatourschoolisgoingtobuildanewleisurecenter.Imwritingtoaskyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions.Firstly,Idliketosuggestthatthereshouldbeatable-tennisroomaswellasabadmintoncourt.Ithinkitwoulddogreatgoodifyoucouldbuildthecenterwithaneyetothosestudentswhoareinterestedinplayingtable-tennisorbadminton.Secondly,couldthecenteropeninoursparetime?Ifso,wewillhaveenoughtimetomakefulluseofit.Thirdly,wewillbemorethanhappyifthecenterisfree.Asweallknow,noteverystudentcanaffordtheextraexpense.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Ifthecenterisbuilt,itwillgreatlyenhancestudentlifehereoncampus.Yourssincerely,LiHua,范文,建议信模版,Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto(关于)_,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductive(建设性的)suggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_(建议的内容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.GoodLuckwithyour_(祝愿)Yourssincerely签名,English/exams,假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。建议内容:1.不要灰心,保持良好心态;2.掌握学习方法;3.培养对英语的兴趣爱好。,第一步:审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:,第一人称,一封信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生,在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。建议:1.保持良好心态;2.掌握学习方法:如坚持每天记单词,读英语课文;多练、多问等。3.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。developaninterestinlearningEnglish坚持每天记单词:insiston/persistindoinginsiston/persistinrememberingwordseveryday,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Thisisanormalproblemthateverystudentcouldsuffer,soIthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestions/adviceareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:参加中文学习班;看中文书刊、电视;学唱中文歌曲;交中国朋友。注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。DearPeter,ImgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._Bestwishes,LiHua,Homework:,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua,第二篇建议信:对于我的朋友花大量时间上网,耽误学习的建议信建议内容:1)和他面对面地交流、沟通;2)给她发邮件或短信;3)告诉他学习的重要性。,Homework:,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses.Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudontknowwhattodowithit/howtohelphim.Well.Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou.Myadviceareasfollows.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely.Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses,heisnotgoingtodowellatschool.,Secondly,youcane-mailhimorleaveamessage.Thirdly,youshouldtellhimtheimportanceofstudy.Becauseeveryoneofusjusthasonechancetogotohighschool,heshouldstudyhardandnotwastetimeinindulgingontheInternet.Inaword,Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou./Bestwishes.Yours,Editor,Homework假定你是某中学的学生李华,请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法,主要内容包括:优点:1.话题广泛:2.图片丰富3.有助于提高学习兴趣建议:适当降低词汇难度DearEditor,Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse._,常用关联词,表示并列的过渡词或短语aswell;or;too;also;aswellas;and;notonlybutalso.;bothand.eitheror;neithernorFirst;Second;ThirdForonething;Foranother(thing)2.表示递进的过渡词或短语Moreover;Whatsmore;Besides;Whatsworse,3.表转折对比的过渡词:insteadof,but,however,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,despiteinspiteof,Some;OthersOntheonehand,;Ontheotherhand,4.表原因的过渡词:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto(由于),5.表结果的过渡词:so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,6.表条件的过渡词:if,unless,aslongas7.表时间的过渡词:recently,finally,atthesametime,atlast,fromnowon,8.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast,9.表换一种方式表达的过渡词:inotherwords,thatistosay10.表进行举例说明的过渡词:forinstance,forexample,suchas11.表陈述事实的过渡词:Infact,Totellyouthetruth12.表目的的过渡词:forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto13.表总结的过渡词:Inaword(总之,简言之),inshort
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