英语建议信43225.ppt

书面表达专题,-建议信Howtowritealetterforadvice,讲解内容包括:,一、建议信简介二、建议信谋篇三、建议信模板四、建议信练习五、常见作文句型六、拓展延伸篇：,一、建议信简介,（一）什么是建议信？1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,建议信写作的注意事项：a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,二、建议信谋篇,第一部分：建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1.Imsorryyouarehavingtroublein./Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.2.Itisnicetoreceiveyourletter.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutyourproblem.Hereismyadvice.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_(问题),andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.,4.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat5.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto6.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-7.Thanksfortrustingme.Itsmypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice.8.Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.,第二部分：介绍详情，表达建议（body）1.Ithinkyoushould.Ifyoudothis,youcan.2.Itisimportantto.Inthisway,youcan.3.AsfasasIamconcernd,itwouldbeagoodideato.Bydoingthis，youcan.4.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat5.IfIwereyou,Iwould6.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.7.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan,第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复,1.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/advicepractical/useful/helpful.2.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.3.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.,作文中常用的过渡语：1.并列关系and,furthermore,morethanthat,also,likewise,moreover,inaddition,whatismore,forinstance,forexample2转折关系although,however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof,nevertheless,yet,otherwise,despite3.顺序关系first,second,third,then,after,before,next4.因果关系asaresult,for,thus,because,forthisreason,so,therefore,as,since,consequently/inconsequence,becauseof/owingto/onaccountof/asaresultof5.归纳关系asaresult,finally,therefore,accordingly,inshort,thus,consequently,inconclusion,so,inbrief,inaword,三、建议信模板,如何学好英语?,1、上课认真听课，课后及时复习listentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandreviewthelessonintimeafterclass2、大声晨读readloudlyinthemorningreading3.看英语电影和听英语歌watchEnglishfilmsandlistentoEnglishsongs4.识记单词rememberthenewwords5、和外国人交谈talkwiththeforeigners.,下一步学会套用模板写作,如何学好英语？(学会如何运用模板？),Dear_ImsorryyouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglish(英语学习问题).However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First,itisimportantto（上课认真听课，课后及时复习).Ifyoudothis，（你能学好）,.Secondly,youshould（大声晨读）.Inthisway,youcan.(提高你的英语口语)Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideato（看英语电影和听英语歌）.Bydoingthis,（你会对英语变得越来越感兴趣）Ihopeyouwillfindmyadviceuseful.Yours,MissYang,listentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandreviewthelessonintimeafterclass,youcanlearnwell,readloudlyinthemorningreading,improveyourspokenEnglish,watchEnglishfilmsandlistentoEnglishsongs,youcanbecomemoreinterestedinlearningEnglish.,如何学好英语？(背诵范文模板一),Dear_ImsorryyouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglish(英语学习问题).However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First,itisimportanttolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandreviewthelessonintimeafterclass.Ifyoudothis,youcanlearnwell.Secondly,itisimportanttoreadloudlyinthemorningreading.Inthisway,youcanimproveyourspokenEnglish.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideatowatchEnglishfilmsandlistentoEnglishsongs.Bydoingthis,youcanbecomemoreinterestedinlearningEnglish.Ihopeyouwillfindmyadviceuseful.Yours,MissYang,最近，我们对于如何学好英语作了激烈地讨论。但是，不同的人对学习英语有不同的看法。在我看来，掌握好英语并不是很容易。首先，如果你要提升你的英语，你应该扩大你的词汇量，掌握大量的短语和句型以及练习说英语。除此之外，毫无疑问，了解一些谚语也是很有用的。第三，制定学习英语的时间表也是很重要的。比如：你可以每天早上大声朗读，这将会使你的口语变得很流利。最后但同样重要的是，你应该掌握一些语法规则以便于你在写作文时可以少犯错误。总之，冰冻三尺非一日之寒。只要你更加努力的学习，更加勤奋的练习，你一定会学好英语的。,Recently,wehaveaheateddiscussiononhowtolearnEnglish.However,peoplesviewsonitvaryfrompersontoperson.Inmyview（opinion）/AsfarasIamconcerned/Frommypointofview，itisnevereasytomasterEnglish.Firstandforemost/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,ifyouwanttoimproveyourEnglish,youaresupposedtoenlarge/enrichyourvocabulary,masteralargequantityofphrasesandsentencepatternsandpracticespeakingEnglish.Whatsmore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore,thereisnodoubtthatitisusefultoknowsomesayings.Thirdly,itisalsoofvital/significantimportancetomakeatimetableforlearningEnglish.,Forexample,youareabletoreadaloudeverymorning,whichwillmakeyourspoken/oralEnglishfluent.Lastbutnotleast/Atlast,yououghtto/should/aresupposedtomastersomegrammarrulessothatyoucanmakefewermistakesinwriting.Allinall/Inshort/Inaword/Inbrief,Romewasntbuiltinaday.Aslongasyouworkharderandpracticemore,youcanlearnEnglishwell.,写作模板三Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto_.Then,italsohelpsto_Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato_.Youcanalso_.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto_,Isuggest_(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,_(其他建议).Imsure_(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto_(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,_,写作任务与要求(2008年全国卷),假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June8,2008DearPeter,ImgladtorecerveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell._Bestwishes,LiHua,（一）分析题材建议信（二）时态与人称：时态：一般现在时态和一般将来时态人称：第二人称（三）词汇储备参加中文学习班takeaChinesecourse看中文书刊、电视watchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinese学唱中文歌曲learnandsingChinesesongs交中国朋友makeChinesefriends,四）组词成句,学习中文课程很重要，因为你将能够向老师学习，和你的同伴练习。ItisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents看中文书刊、电视对你学好中文也很有帮助ItalsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinese.学唱中文歌也是一个很好的方法，这样你就会很容易的记住中文单词。ItshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.4.你可以交更多的中国朋友，他们会告诉你关于中国的一些事情并且帮助你