读后续写讲解ppt课件

截图发朋友圈sharethepictures,1.张博（3）班2.黄心悦（6）班3.曹旭辉（4）班4.陈琳（3）班5.冯圣杰（4）班6.郭子瑕（3）班7.邱新特（4）班8.金宸如（3）班9.朱澄镕（6）班10.林子心（6）班,1,读后续写,1.读懂全文,who,when,where,what,how,why,2.从文中获得重要的隐藏的线索,3.分析给你的两段的开头句,第一段给你的第一句要与第二句有衔接,第一段最后一句与第二段第一句有衔接,三步走,2,1.vacationingv度假2.theFoggyFigurefgifg(r)雾影3.haunth:nt时常出现在4.ghostlygstli可怕的5.creaturekri:t(r)生物6.sniffsnf嗅，深深吸入7.thefaintscentfentsent微弱的气味8.strikestrakstruck侵袭9.dockdk码头，船停靠码头10.scaryskeri胆小的，可怕的,11.shrugrg耸肩12.barelybeli几乎不13.lowerl(r)降低14.hughg拥抱,3,who:when:where:weather:What:,JustinandMary,UncleThomas,onedayduringthevacation,at5:00am,firstattheiruncleslakehouse,thenattheboatdock,Foggy,Thefoghadsettledoverthelake,makingitimpossibletoseeanything,UncleThomastoldJustinandMaryabouttheFoggyFigurethathauntsthelake.,TheydeterminedtoseetheFoggyFigure.,1.读懂全文,ghostly,frightening,scary,4,WhetherdidtheyseetheFoggyFigure?,Thinking？,IstheretheFoggyFigure?,DoyouthinkUncleThomaswasjusttryingtofrightenuswiththatstory?,2.隐藏的线索thehiddencluesabouttheFoggyFigure,5,JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMaryshand.JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthen.,3.分析两句开头句,thingshappenedontheboat.,theirfrightenedfeelings.,TheFoggyFigureappeared.,whatistheFoggyFigure.,_atmosphere,nervousandfrightening,6,存在问题：,1.没有下划线,2.对话太多,3.第一段最后一句与第二段第一句没有衔接,张淑雯郑慧琳夏晨辉蔡佳佳钟淇，张博，罗慧杰王佳慧程卓瑶朱芮莹,五个档次：,第五档：21-25第四档：16-20第三档：11-15第二档：6-10第一档：1-5,7,JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMaryshand.Maryclimbedintotheboatandsatbesidehim.Shewasgettingnervousnowthattheywereonthewater.“Seeanything?”Theylookedaround,andgradually,thefogbegantolift.Maryturnedaroundandscreamed.“TheFoggyFigure!”Itwasintheboatwiththem!,8,JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthentheyheardalaugh.JustinmovedtowardtheFoggyFigure.“UncleThomas?”“Iknewthatstorywouldgetyoutwooutofbedearlyenoughtotakeaboatridewithme.”Marysighed,happytherewasnoFoggyFigureafterall.Justinlookedrelieved,too.UncleThomaslaughed.“Whatdoyousay?Ipackedabreakfastforus.”Marysmiled.Shehadsmelledthescentofcoffee.AndUncleThomashadpackedsweetcakesforthem,too.“Letsdoit,”MaryandJustinsaid.,9,JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMaryshand.Maryclimbedintotheboatandsatbesidehim.Shewasgettingnervousnowthattheywereonthewater.“Seeanything?”Theylookedaround,andgradually,thefogbegantolift.Maryturnedaroundandscreamed.“TheFoggyFigure!”Itwasintheboatwiththem!JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthentheyheardalaugh.JustinmovedtowardtheFoggyFigure.“UncleThomas?”“Iknewthatstorywouldgetyoutwooutofbedearlyenoughtotakeaboatridewithme.”Marysighed,happytherewasnoFoggyFigureafterall.Justinlookedrelieved,too.UncleThomaslaughed.“Whatdoyousay?Ipackedabreakfastforus.”Marysmiled.Shehadsmelledthescentofcoffee.AndUncleThomashadpackedsweetcakesforthem,too