四级考试作文写作概要.ppt

四级考试作文写作概要,2012年,一、评分原则,1、作文是否体现主题思想。2、组织结构是否合理。3、语法文字是否有重大错误。4、卷面布局是否整洁。,启示,重视文章的内容与语言尽量避免语法错误语言要有闪光点,二、评分标准,命题作文：满分15分14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量的语言错误。8分：基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。,便条：满分为10分作文格式：格式需正确。内容：内容完整，不能遗漏。语言：语言要简单明嘹，用词平易。语言得体性：语言风格还应与情景一致。行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。,举例,SectionBNote-writing(10min)WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Jane,yourclassmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Andyouwouldliketorecommendonetoher.Writeanote,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,范文：May20DearJane,IhaveheardthatyouarethinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Idliketorecommend21stcenturytoyou.Thepaperisalsocharacterizedbyitssimplelanguageandlotsofinformation.YoucannotonlylearnEnglishbutalsobroadenyourhorizonbyreadingitregularly.Ihopeyoucanfindthenewspaperthatyouwant.Yours,Mary,便条种类,1、祝贺2、慰问/安慰3、邀请4、接受/拒绝邀请5、致歉6、询问/建议7、留言8、告示/广告,1.邀请便条：发出邀请（告知、解释、询问、确认p62）发出邀请aApril20,2008DearFiona,Iamgoingtoholdadinnerpartywithseveralotherfriendsofours.ThepartywillbeheldinRoom6ofLijingHotelat5:00p.m.Today,Isincerelyhopeyoucanattendandwewillhaveaveryhappytimetogether.Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucanmakeit.Yours,Amelia,发出邀请bApril20,2008DearFiona,Hereisapieceofgoodnewsforyou.The*willgiveaperformanceinthe*tomorrowevening.Iamsurethatyouwillbehappytowatchit.Theperformancewillbeginatsevenoclocksharp.Iwillwaitforyouatthetheaterentrance.Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucanmakeitatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,Amy,发出邀请cApril20,2008DearProfessorZhou,IamAmeliafromclass052;Ineedyoutogivemesomesuggestiononmyproject.Ifitdoesnttroubleyoutoomuch,shallwehaveameetatyourofficetomorrow?Timeisuptoyou.Respectfulyours,Amelia,发出邀请d（通知）April20,2008DeargirlsandboysinClass0403,ThisSaturdayevening,from7p.m.to9p.m.,atSingeingdininghall,therewillbeaballheldbyClass0301.Wewarmlyinviteyoutotakepartinit.Thereyoucanenjoyyourselveswithdance,musicandvariousgames.Andwellhaveachanceofcommunication,whichwillenhancethefriendshipbetweenus.Comeandenjoyourselvestogether.Yours,MikeMonitorofClass0301,接受邀请(致谢、取悦、期待、希望）April20,2008DearAmelia,Itssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty,Iwouldliketocome.IwillgototheplacerightafterIfinishmyworkatabout5p.m.thisevening.(如果是办在家里：IshallbeveryhappytocallatyourhouserightafterIfinishmyworkat6:30thisevening.)ThankyouagainforyourwonderfulhospitalityandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,Fiona,拒绝邀请（致谢、取悦、抱歉、解释、留机会、祝福）April20,2008DearAmelia，Itssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty,IwouldliketobutIhaveameetingtoattendthisevening,pleasegivemybestregardstothemallandIhopemyabsencewillnotcauseyouanyseriousinconvenience,havefun.Yours,Amelia,2请假条April20,2008DearMs.Jiang,IamterriblysorrythatIshallbeunabletoattendthismorningtwoperiodsofEnglishClass（ImterriblysorrytoapplyfortendaysleavefromtheAug.23rdtoSep.3rd）duetoabadcoldandhighfever.Iwillshowyouthecertificatefromthedoctortosupportmyapplication.IwillgobacktoschoolassoonasIrecover.（IpromiseIwilldomybesttocatchthemissedlessonsonafterIcomeback.）Wishforyourallowance.Yoursrespectfully,Amelia,3请求便条a讲清事情的因由（为什么请求）b请求行为c请求实现方式d致谢,套句：请求帮助：Wouldyoudomeafavor?Wouldyoubesokindasto?/CouldItroubleyoutosendthisbookforme?/Ifitisnottootroublesome,couldyou?/Ihopethisrequestwillnottroubleyoutoomuch.,April20，2008DearProfessorHu,Iamveryhappytohavethechancetolistentoyourlectureon“AmericanLiterature”.ButitisapitythatIwaslatethatdayduetoanaccidentonmywaytothelectureandfailedtogetthehandout.YourlectureisreallyinstructiveformyEnglishstudy,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlye-mailthehandouttotheaddress:zhang123.Heartfeltthanks.Respectfullyyours,Amelia,4抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain,dissatisfaction)a抱怨投诉行为b投诉内容具体描述c要求弥补纠正赔偿d抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁,套句：行为描述ImwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemsIhavehadwith.Herestheproblem解决方式的要求：Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutoaddressthisproblemsoon./takestepstorectifythissituationsoon./turnitdownalittle?敦促或威胁:Frankly,Ireallycantputupwiththesituationanymore.Youmustrectifythesituation,orIwilltakeittothecourt./Ifyoucantgivemeasatisfactoryanswer,IwillcomplainittotheConsumerAssociation.,5.祝贺（获悉、祝贺、取悦、祝愿、期望）强调对方的成就语言要真挚热情例子：Directions:youareJean.YouhavegotaletterfromyourfriendEric,whichtellsyouhismarriagelately.Writeanotetoexpressyourheartfeltcongratulationsandwishagoodfuturetothenewcouple.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,February14DearEric,Ihavejustreceivedyourlettertellingmeofyourrecentmarriage.Thishappyeventinyourlifepromptsmetoofferyoumyheartycongratulationsandgoodwishes.Youarelucky!Isincerelywishthatpeace,healthandhappinessmayattendbothyouandyourwifeforever.Allinall,Ioffermybestwishestoyou.Jean,慰问(获悉，慰问，鼓励，建议，期望，祝福）Directions:YounameisMary.YourfriendJacobsonwasnotdoingwellwithhisbusinessinrecentdays.Writeanotetoofferyoursympathyandcomforthim.,DearJacobson,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavenotbeensuccessfulinyourrecentbusiness.AlthoughIamsendingyoumysympathy,Ifeelyououghtnottobeundulydistressedattheresult.Rightnow,youdbetterrelaxandhaveagoodrest.Youarealwaysexcellent.Iamconfidentthatthesituationwillbebettersoon.Goodluck!Mary,致歉（致歉，解释，补救，请求原谅，再度致歉，期待回复）Directions:youareKatherine.YouhavemadeameetingwithyourbusinesspartnerSamonMar.6.Unfortunately,youhavetobeoutoftownthatday.Soyouwanttopostponethedatetothesametimetwodayslater.Writeanotetotellhimthedelayandmakeanapology.,DearSam,IamsorrytosaythatIshallbeoutoftownonbusinessonMar.6,soIamafraidIwillhavetopostponeourmeetingtoFriday,Mar.8atthesamehour.Ihopethatyoucanstillcome,andIamregretfulfortheinconveniencethatthispostponementbringstoyou.PleasetellmeifyoucancomeonFriday.Katherine,询问/回复（寒暄，询问事件，告知方式，感激，期盼）Directions:YournameisDavid.Youhaveattendedaconferenceonthepollutionissue.Duringtheconference,youheardSamanthasspeechandgotinterestedinheropinions.Writeanotetoaskforthecopyofherspeech.,DearSamantha,Congratulationsonyourexcellentspeechattheconference.Iamdeeplyimpressedbyyouruniqueopinionsaboutthepollutionissue.Iwouldbegratefulisyoudomeafavortosendacopyofyourspeechtome.Thankyouverymuchforyourkindness.Hopetohearfromyousoon.David,留言（留言原因，留言目的，详细解释，期待答复）Directions:YouareWangMing.Today,youwenttovisitLiHua,afriendofyours.YouheardanAmericanprofessorwouldgiveaspeechinyourschoolthisSunday,soyouweregoingtoaskLiHuaifhewasinterestedinit.However,hewasnotathomeatpresent.Leavehimanoteforthewholething.,DearLiHua，JustnowIcametoyourhouse,whileyouwereout.IwanttotellyouanimportantmatterthatanAmericanprofessorwillgiveaspeechinourschoolthisSunday.Ifyouwouldliketolistentothespeech,wecouldgotogether.Pleasecontactmeassoonaspossible.WangMing,告示/广告（告知，解释，宣传，资格，希望）Directions:Youareamemberoftheschooldramagroup.ThisSaturdayevening,yourdramagroupwouldgiveaperformanceintheschooltheater.Writeanotetotellallthosepeopletocomeiftheywouldliketo.Youshouldtellthemallthedetailedinformationabouttheperformance.,Dearschoolmates,TherewillbeaperformanceofourdramagrouponSaturdayevening,June7,atsevenintheschooltheater.Wehavepreparedforthreemonthsfortheexcellentperformance.Everyschoolmatewhoisinterestedintheperformanceiswelcomed.Weareexpectingyourattendance.TheSchoolDramaGroup,致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如Yourssincerely，Sincerelyyours，或Sincerely等。对上级、长者，除了可用上述较庄重的套语，也可用Yoursrespectfully或Respectfulyours。对一般朋友或熟人可用中提到的较庄重的套语语，也可用Yours等较为随便的套语。对密友则采用较随便的套语为宜。例如，Yours，Love，Withlove，Bestwishes，Bestregards等等。对亲属可用下列任何一种：Love，Withlove，Allmylove，Yoursaffectionately，Affectionatelyyours，Lovinglyyours，Yourslovingly，Yourlovingson(Dad?)；,语法错误,便条中的语法错误有多种，常见的有冠词、词性、动词的时与体、句子结构等错误。(1)冠词错误，如Imanxioustomakea(应为an)appointmentwithyou(2)词性错误，如Imustmakeanapologize(正确为apology)forfailingtoturnupfortheappointment,(3)动词的时与体等方面的错误，例如：aIfyouwillbefreetomorrow,weshallmeetagain(应把willbe改为are)bIamsorrytofailtoturnupfortheappointmentyesterday(正确为tohavefailed而不是tofail，因事情已发生),(4)句子结构错误，例如：ImverysorryIdidntturnupfortheappointmentwithyouBecausemymotherwasseriouslyillyesterdayandIhadtotakehertoseethedoctor(应改为ImverysorryIdidntturnupfortheappointmentwithyouyesterdaybecausemymotherwasseriouslyillandIhadtotakehertoseethedoctor),提醒：,考试时注意在看到题目要求后不要忙于动笔。虽说作文的字数充其量在一百多个单词左右，但是最好还是要在脑子里理清思路，打到腹稿。在仔细审题以后，认真列个提纲，这样更有利于思路清晰。写作时，注意表达清楚以下几个方面。首先交代清楚写信目的;其次为了让阅卷者对你的文章结构及表意一目了然，注意关联词或衔接词的运用;接下来，应该对个人的观点进行阐述(在写作有此必要的时候)。最后，行文间要注意简化描述。用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。,作文练习：Directions:YourfriendMaryinterestsinmusicalperformanceverymuch.Occasionally,youhavegottwoadmissioncardstotheItalianNationalBandsperformanceintheBeijingGrandTheater.Writeanotetoinvitehertotheperformance.Tellhertheexacttime,placeandotherdetails.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,Directions:Yourfriends.Mr.andMrs.Kramer,willholdacocktailwinepartyonApril18th.Theyhavesentyoutheinvitation.Youarehappytojointhem.Writinganotetoaccepttheirinvitationandexpressyourappreciationtothem.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,Directions:YouareDr.Smith.Severaldaysago,yourfriend,professorWang,onbehalfofhisinstitution,invitedyoutogiveaspeechinhisdepartmentonDecember20thAlthoughyouwouldliketoacceptit,youarenotfeelingwellrecently.Writeanotetorejecttheirinvitation.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,命题作文,35分钟（P12）审题：1-2分钟写提纲，组织素材，细节和关键词：4-5分钟；起草：20-23分钟；修改定稿：4-5分钟。,撰写：第一段提出的论点要简洁明了，开门见山；第二段论据要能充分说明论点，论证条理清楚；第三段结论要严谨完整，切忌草率。,检查和修改：拼写正确。搭配正确。语法正确。,(P20)1，如今，人们普遍在讨论是否应该在网上交友。Thereismuchdiscussiontodayaboutwhethertomakefriendsontheinternet.2.对于大学生或高中生打工这一现象，校园里存在着广泛的争论。Thereisageneraldebateonthecampustodayoverthephenomenonofcollegeorhighschoolstudentsdoingapart-timejob.,3.我们应该存钱还是花明天的钱呢？人们的观点各不相同。一些人认为存钱是个好习惯，另一些人觉得花明天的钱能够提高生活质量。Shouldwesavemoneyorspendtomorrowsmoney?Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Someregardsavingmoneyasagoodhabit.Othersbelievethatspendingtomorrowsmoneycanimproveourlivingquality.,4.我同意后者，有如下理由：Formypart,Iagreewiththelatteropinionforthefollowingreasons:Inmyopinion/Frommyperspective/Iwouldprefer/Astothisissue/Ithink/Asforme5.就我而言，我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点，有以下原因：Asforme,Iminfavoroftheopinionthateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation,forthefollowingreasons:,6.尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，骑自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消失，然而我却不这样认为。这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会中发挥极其重要的作用。Althoughmanypeopleclaimthat,alongwiththerapidlyeconomicdevelopment,thenumberofpeoplewhousebicycleisdecreasingandbicycleisboundtodieout,Ithinkquitedifferently.TheinformationIvecollectedovertherecentyearsleadsmetobelievethatbicyclewillcontinuetoplayextremelyimportantrolesinmodernsociety.,AlthoughthepopularbeliefisButIthinkquitedifferently./Noopinionismoredangerousthan/ButIcantacceptthat7.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.(Theeisatypicalexample/Recentstudiesindicate/Although,theavailableinformationshows),8.最近的研究显示，大学生能够寻求学业和兼职之间的平衡。Recentstudiesindicatethatcollegestudentscanmakeabalancebetweenacademicstudyandpart-timejob.9.通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，悠闲地生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Iamfullyconvincedthattheleisurelife-styleisundergoingadeclinewiththeprogressofmodernsociety,anditisnotnecessarilyabadthing.(Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusion/Insummary,itisimportanttoknowthat/Theevidenceuponallsidespointsto.),亮点词句,1.对年轻人的生活可能产生不好的影响。Somenegativeinfluencethismayexertonyoungpeopleslife.2.各行各业Everywalkoflife.3.各种文化背景。Diversifiedculturalbackground.4.即使他们住在遥远的村庄，或大洋彼岸。Evenistheyliveinaremotevillageorontheothersideoftheocean.,5.无拘无束地交流我们的想法。feelfreetogetacrossourideastothem.6.警惕潜在的风险。Befullyawareofthepotentialrisk.7.保护自己免受欺骗。Protectourselvesfrombeingcheated.8.现代生活的主要特征。Predominantfeatureofmodernlife.9.它给我们的生活带来了很多的便利，以至于有些人会想电话是否会取代书信呢。Itprovidesuswithsomuchconvenienceandpleasurethatsomepeoplearewonderingifphoneswillkillletterwritingsomeday.,10.不如晚年Gointotheirlaterstageoflife.11.众所周知。Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthat12.未雨绸缪FortherainydayEg.SavingfortherainydayisalongandfinetraditionofChinesenationality.13.我支持后面这种观点Imsupportiveofthelatterpoint.,14.考虑到手机和信件的优缺点，我们很自然地得出结论，Judgingfromtheprosandconsofphonesandletters,wemaysafelyarriveattheconclusionthat.15.随着科技的发展，电脑已经不仅应用于办公室中而且应用于许多家庭中。Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,computershavebeenfoundawideapplicationnotonlyinoffices,butalsoinmanyfamilies.,16.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效地措施。Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.17.应该采取适当的措施限制外国游客的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游也得不利影响。Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthenumberofforeigntouristsandthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotectlocalenvironmentandhistoryfromtheharmfuleffectsofinternationaltourism.,18.人民生活状况的改善原因有两点。首先，我们一直在贯彻执行改革开放政策。其次，国民经济正在迅速发展。Therearetworeasonsfortheimprovementinpeopleslivingconditions.Inthefirstplace,wehavebeencarryingoutthereformandopening-uppolicy.Secondly,therehasbeenarapidexpansionofournationaleconomy.,19.而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeandhavemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpactondevelopmentoftheircharacter.,20.我们可以使用替代汽油作为解决之道。Wemayusesubstitutioninsteadofpetrolasasolutiontotheproblem.21.最后，我们既不需要限制车辆的使用，也不需要减少车辆的数量。Asaresult,wewillnothavetoimposerestrictionsontheuseofvehicles.Norwillweneedtotrimdownthenumber.,22.现今，大学生心理健康成为一个普遍关注的问题。Nowadays,thementalhealthofcollegestudentshasarousedmoreandmoreattentionofthewholesociety.hasrecentlybecomeaheatedtopic.Nowadays,itisaheateddiscussedtopicthatMoreandmorepeoplepayattentiontoCurrentlyhasbecomeamatterofconcernMoreandmorepeoplebegintorealizetheimportanceof,23.一个人必须衡量有点和缺点两个方面来决定哪种方法好。Todecidewhichthebestwayis,onehastoweightheadvantagesanddisadvantagesonbothsides.24.Shewassympathetic,tolerant,andpeoplerespectedher.(p86)Shewassympathetic,tolerant,andrespectedbypeople.（improved）,25.ThePrimeMinistersteppedofftheplane.Journalistsimmediatelysurroundedher.ThePrimeMinistersteppedofftheplane.Shewasimmediatelysurroundedbyjournalists(improved)26.Wehaveanoldmusicalinstrument.Peoplecallitaclavichord.SomeonemadeitinGermanyin1681.Wehaveanoldmusicalinstrument.Itiscalledclavichord.ItwasmadeinGermanyin1681.(improved),27.Tocooperatewithotherswell,oneneedstoknowsomethingaboutcooperation.Tocooperatewithotherswell,oneshouldbetolerant,considerateandshouldhaveasenseofteamwork.(improved)28.Everygraduatehastheequalchance.Everygraduatehastheequalchancetogetasatisfactoryjobinjob-hunting.(improved),29.Ienjoysportsverymuch.Participatinginsportsactivitiesoccupiesmostofmysparetimeintheuniversity.(improved)30.Examinationisimportanttogettoknowthestudents.Testingstudentsbyexaminationshasalwaysbeenregardedasthereliablemethodtomeasurestudentslevel.(improved),31.TherewasastrongearthquakeinWenchuanin2008.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckWenchuanin2008.(improved)32.a).Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.b).Hefeltveryuneasy.1).Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.2).Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.3).Theyoungpilotsfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.,4).Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.5).Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.6).Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.7).Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.8).Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.,9).Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.10).Whentheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.11).Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.12).Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.,1.句子意思表达不完整原句：Thelecturewasgiveninsuchaninterestingway.修改：Thelecturewasgiveninsuchaninterestingwaythateveryoneenjoyeditverymuch.2.句子的主从关系模糊原句：WearegoingtovisitJohn,andheisourEnglishfriend.修改：WearegoingtovisitJohnwhoisourEnglishfriend.,3.连接词使用不当原句：Themainreasonhewasabsentwasbecausehewasill.修改：Themainreasonhewasabsentwasthathewasill.4.主谓不一致原句：Everyteacherandstudentwereinvitedtogototheparty.修改：Everyteacherandstudentwasinvitedtogototheparty.,5.中心不明白原句：Iwaswatchingafilmlastnight,IsuddenlyfoundMarysittinginfrontofme.修改：WhenIwaswatchingafilmlastnight,IsuddenlyfoundMarysittinginfrontofme.,避免中式英语,6月四日第X号合同项下的5万吨面粉，原定于九月底以前交货。你方在合同中保证提前交货并且以此为签订合同的条件。但是这批面粉迄今尚未装运。对此，我们深表遗憾。(p91),ThefiftythousandtonswheatunderContractNo.XofJune4thisscheduledtobedeliveredbytheendofSeptember.YouhaveguaranteedanearlydeliveryintheContractanditisonthisunderstandingthatwesignedthecontract.Uptonow,however,theshipmenthasnotyetbeenmade.Weverymuchregretforthat.,WeregretverymuchthatthefiftythousandtonswheatunderContractNo.XofJune4th,scheduledtobedeliveredbytheendofSeptember,hasnotbeenshippeduptothismoment,inspiteofthefactthatyouhadguaranteedanearlydeliveryintheContract,whichwasactuallysignedonthisunderstanding.,遣词用字,1.Heisagoodman.(p92)Heiskindandhonest.2.Thebathroomandthekitchenaregood.Thebathroomandthekitchenarewell-furnished.3.Hewasalwaysthefirsttospotacriminalinthecrowd.4.Severalwhalesweresighted.,5.Noonewitnessedthebankbeingbrokeinto.6.客人们在共进晚餐后都松弛下来，也随便多了。(p94)Afteragooddinnertogether,alltheguestsrelaxedandbecamequitecareless.(familiar)7.Lindawasdeterminedtokeepregularexercisessothatshewouldbeasdelicateasherdancingteacher.(slim),代词一致,1.Theuniversitystudentslikethetwo-dayweekendverymuchbecauseourstudyisveryheavyinaweek,andthetwodayscangivememoretimetorest,whichisreallybeneficialtotheirhealth.Universitystudentsapplaudthecurrentpolicythattheycanhaveatwo-dayweekend.Theyareheavilyloadedwiththeirstudyduringtheweekdays.Withatwo-dayweekend,theyareabletotakeagoodrest,whichwilldogoodtotheirhealth.(improved),2.Thefigureshowsthatmoreandmorestudentsdependoncomputers.Itcanhelpyoutostudyyoursubjects.Wecanalsoacquirenewsfromtheinternet.Thefigureshowsthatmoreandmorestudentsusecomputerswhichcandogreathelptotheirstudy.Whatsmore,byusingcomputers,theycanacquirenewsfromtheInternet.(improved),Practice:Directions:Nowadays,Englishprofi