初二英语写作(教学课件).ppt

初三英语在线课程上课老师：蔡老师上课时间：18：45-19：45,初三英语寒假课程,第二讲：作文写作精讲,作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇,字：工整、清楚；词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；段：段落内容有逻辑性；篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；,绝对好用的替换词,Goodwonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;Importantsignificant,essential,necessary,carryalotofweight;ButHowever,Sotherefore,hence,Primarily,Firstly,oneofthemostessentialreasons,tostressfirstSecondly,abovefromthefirstpoint,InadditionThirdly,Lastbutnoleast,Inconclusion,tomakeaconclusion,tosummarize,举例,ForexampleForinstance,totake.asanexample,tostateafactasanvividexample,经典句型：,1、Itssaidthat2、Nomatterwhat/which/who/where/when/whose+从句3、Itis/was+被强调部分+that(who)+剩余部分,4、Ithappened(chanced)that+从句=sb.Happened/chancedtodosth.=sb.didsthbychance5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where,when引导的定语从句,6、It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）7、When/Solongas/Aslongas/Once+从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后）,8、Nosooner+had+主语+donethan+主语+did9、倍数表达句型倍数+morethan,倍数+asmuchas.10、形容词、副词、名词+as/though+主语+谓语+主句,句式多变化,要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。（1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。,原文Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.修正Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.,原文Theyoungmancouldnthelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.修正Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldnthelpcrying.,(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。强调句原文MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.修正MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.,由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所”，有很强的概括，如：原文Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.修正Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.,由with或without引导的短语。如：Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.分词短语如：Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.,倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.省略句Ifso,victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.,对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法如Failureisnotacrime,butfailuretolearnfromfailureis.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafteritIfeelrelaxed.,(3)通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。原文Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.修正Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.,原文Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.修正Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.,历年上海中考题分析,2007年上海市中考写作题：,Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent(s)”.(以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）,我的父亲母亲,先中文构思尽量避免复杂的词句将中文翻译成英文加入适当的连词，组成文章注意全文用过去式写作,关于职业的单词,scientist科学家detective侦探fisherman渔夫firefighter消防员journalist新闻记者lawyer律师barber理发师singer歌手engineer工程师,worker工人painter画家writer/author作家businessman商人pilot飞行员dentist牙医nurse护士accountant会计waiter/waitess服务员librarian图书管理员surgeon外科医生,pharmacist药剂师anesthetist麻醉师manager经理governor政府官员President总统policeman警察policewoman女警察waiter服务员waitress女服务员driver司机，驾驶员,真题举例,1）AStoryaboutMyParent;2)Inmumsfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mumsparents,mumstwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker;3)Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelptheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelpedtomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.,Mymumwasborninasmallvillage.Inherfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mumsparents,mumstwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker.Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelpedtheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelptomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.,比较型作文写作,常用词组:PreferAtoBIshowmystrongpreferencetoA.ComparedwithA,IshedmorelightonB.IncomparisonwithA,IfindthatBismore.,文章层次,1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。2、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横向与纵向。3、总结,开启段落,Infacingthehighschoolentranceexamination,wehavetomakechoicesaboutwhichschooltoattend.Betweenthetwochoices,Iwillchoose.Thereasonforthatisareasfollowing.,学会对比,南方大学:学费8000/年招生20人无优惠政策北方大学:学费5000/年招生10人加20分优惠选择南方：1、虽然学费贵，但是招生人数比北方的多；2、自己是南方人，适合南方的生活，离家近。选择北方：1、学费便宜；2、有加分政策；3、可以体验不同的学习生活，学会独立。,如何转折,ThoughthetuitionishigherinthesouthernUniversity,yetIpreferthewaysoflivinghereinthesouth.TheNorthernUniversityoffersanadditional20scores.However,IstillhaveastronginclinationtotheSouthernUniversity.,如何结尾,Concerningthereasonsabove,Iwouldnothesitatetochoose.Inconclusion,concerningtheconvenience,thetuitionandtheotherreasons,Iwillchoose.Inall,toconclude,toputallthereasontogether,上海2002年的中考英语作文,根据英文提示，以“我的心爱之物”为题写话，不少于50个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的3项要求，标点符号不占格：题目：MyFavoriteThing(s)Whatthething(s)is(are)Whenand/orwhere,andhowyougotif(them)Whyyoulikeit(them)andwhyitis(theyare)specialtoyou,MyFavoriteThing,Ihavemanysmallthingsinmyhomesuchasstamps,toys.Butamongthosethings,myfavoritethingisagreenwatch.Itisadig