高考英语开放作文讲解ppt课件

.,1,开放作文,.,2,2010年开放式作文（生活*社会*.）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.,.,3,开放作文（15分，分为四档）第一档：13-15第二档：9-12第三档：4-8第四档：1-3以内容和语言定档定分,.,4,第二档（912）基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、逻辑和交际等方面基本符合要求；所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（48）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。表达未能切题；所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对写作内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。,.,5,开放作文评分原则:以内容和语言定档定分立意明确，逻辑清晰(立意-细节描述）语言达意,.,6,2010年北京卷请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.,立意-细节描述,.,7,立意1：勇于克服困难（小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长）立意2：成功来自于不懈的努力（小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光）立意3：多给孩子成长的空间。（楼房的不规则造成了小树的扭曲）立意-细节描述,.,8,把图中的内容描述清楚4-6分过渡句1-2分含义2-5分,.,9,1描图句,Inthepicture,ThepictureshowsthatAscanbeseenfromthepicture,Aswecanseeinthepicture,FromthepictureIcanseeAsis(vividly)showninthepicture,.,.,10,怎样用语言描述图片？在描述图片时，推荐一下三种模式：a.常量主语推进模式例1：Whataninterestingpictureitis!(Whatastrangepictureitis!)Atreeistwistedbytwoclosely-locatedbuildings.Itbendsinthemiddle.Butitstruggles(triesitsbest)allthewaytoreachthesky(theSun).Whataninterestingpictureitis!(Howinterestingthispictureis!)Atreeisencircled(surrounded)bytwoclosely-locatedbuildings.Itcannotgrowwell.Itbendsinthemiddle.Butittrieshardtoreachthesky(theSun).Whataninterestingpictureitis!Atreeisstandingbetweentwoneighbouringbuildings.Thetreeisnotstraight(outofstraight,bendsinthemiddle),becauseitisaffectedbythebuildings.Butitstruggles(triesitsbest)allthewaytoreachthesky(theSun).,.,11,b.总说-分说(-总说)推进模式例1：Inthispicture,wecanseetwobuildings,atree,and(thesun).Thetwobuildingsarecloselylocatedtoeachother(arecloselystandingoppositetoeachother.).Thetreebendsinthemiddleandsqueezesitswayoutofthebuildingssoastogetmoresunshine.,.,12,例2：Inthispicture,wecanseetwobuildings,atree,and(thesun).Thetwobuildingsarelocatedoppositetoeachother.Thetreeisstandingbetweenthetwobuildingsandbendsinthemiddle.Thesunisshiningabovethetree.Thoughtwistedbythesetwobuildings,thetreestillstrugglesallthewayuptotheair.,.,13,过渡句（描述图片-个人看法）如:ThispicturetellsusthatWhatimpressesmemostaboutthispictureisthat.ThispicturemeansthatThepicturemakesmethinkof.ThispictureshowsusthatThepicturerevealsthefactthat.Thispicturedemonstratesthat.Thispictureremindsmeof.ThispictureintendstotellusthatThesituationinoursocietyisthesameaswhatthepictureportrays.MorethoughtscanbefiguredoutfromthispictureFromthispicturewefind(begintorealize)that.Thepictureconveysanimportantmessagetous.ThepictureconveysadeepmessagethatWhatthepictureconveystousisthat,.,14,意义延伸（Icon-Index）a.常量主语推进模式例1：Formypart,thispictureintendstotellushowtopursuesuccessinreality,withthetreestandingforthoseindifficultiesandthetwobulidingsforbarriersandfru