中考英语书面表达PPT课件

.,1,EnglishWriting英语书面表达训练,写过去的事,.,2,主要特点,记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明,.,3,空间顺序,时间顺序,能力要求,逻辑顺序,.,4,主要问题,要点不全,线索不清,原因：步骤不对,.,5,书面表达,六步法,.,6,书面表达六步法,.,7,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何时何地何人为何如何做了何事,.,8,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,Whathappened?,.,9,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Whodidwhat?,.,10,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间空间细节连贯呼应,.,11,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,.,12,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,.,13,课堂练习,请用六步法写一篇短文,.,14,五个“W”一个“H”,第一步审题,认真读题然后找出,把答案写在题中相应的位置,.,15,书面表达经典示例,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好。_AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.LiHua,.,16,附图,1,2,3,4,.,17,At7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2000,Isawawomandrivingacarhitthemaninthestreet.,.,18,第二步抓要点,一幅图，一要点,时态直达语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点，配动词,.,19,第三步扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副词,.,20,第四步连句成文,增加细节呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,.,21,第五步查错改错,主谓一致吗？,时态正确吗？,时态正确吗？,有“半截话”吗？,.,22,第六步誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！,.,23,作业选评,要改进吗？,为什么？,.,24,精彩范文赏析,.,25,At7:15a.m.onthemorningofFeb.8th,2000,IwasheadingeastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.,精彩范文赏析,.,26,Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreetmadeasuddenrightturnatthecrossing.,精彩范文赏析,.,27,Thecarwassofastthattheoldmanevendidnthavetimetododgeandthecarhittheelderlyhard.,精彩范文赏析,.,28,Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidnt.Instead,shejustdroveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllyingonthegroundinpain.,精彩范文赏析,.,29,Fortunately,Inoteddownthedetails:itwasayellowcar,theplatenumberofwhichwasAC864,andthedriverwasayounglady.Afterthat,Iwentovertocheckouttheoldman.,精彩范文赏析,.,30,AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.LiHua,精彩范文赏析,.,31,图1,.,32,图2,