读后续写 (4)ppt课件

Legendofbutterflylovers,梁祝,1,高考新题型读后续写训练1,2,Myfatherisaliartome.,3,Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions,whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention.,Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo?,Selflesslove,4,5,6,7,8,第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面350字短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为180左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；,若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。,9,Briefinformation,acoupleoflovers,God,thewomandoctor,_coupleofloversledan_(envy)lifeinatown._(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_(injure).Thewoman_(attend)himdayandnight._herloverwasstillsleeping,_(hope),shemadeadeal_God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangeforthemans_(recover),_wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.,A,enviable,Unfortunately,injured,attendedto,But,hopelessly,with,recovery,which,10,Summary,Theplot（情节）ofthestory,Development,Ending,Beginning,Climax(高潮),A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.,A,C,B,11,Endingsofourstudents,12,Endingsofourstudents,13,Endingsofourstudents,14,logic（逻辑）,15,白猫掉到河里，黑猫奋尽全力救它上岸，上岸后，白猫对黑猫说了什么？,Continuethestory,Youshouldfindthecluesinthestory.,16,logic,thetitle,thegivenstory,theunderlinedwords,thetwogivensentences,Theyarethecluestohelpyoucreateyourwritinglogically.,17,underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-stricken,underlinedwords（选5个以上）who(人物）：Godthebutterflywhere（地点）：thechurchwhat（事件）：enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearslovebutterflysweetheart-stricken,clues（线索）“Icanhelpyouforthreeyears”“Yes,Ido!iwontregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”,18,logic,thetitle,thegivenstory,theunderlinedwords,thetwogivensentences,19,Paragraph1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestonthemansshoulderoffandon._,Singleissimple,doubleistrouble,triangleisterrible.,利用已给信息将情节推向高潮,Howtodealwiththewomandoctor?,Whentogetmarried?,20,Paragraph2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”_,利用已给信息得出一个完美结局,21,Creation,Thepossibleversionsoftheending,e.,b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.,Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.,c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.,d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.,negative,negative,positive,negative,22,thetwogivensentences,theunderlinedwords,Thetwoleadyou,helpyou,andcontrolyoutogointherightdirection.,23,Readingforbriefinformation,Readingforsummary,Readingforcreation,Readingforwriting,24,Therewasonceaplacid平静的；温和的；沉着的andbeautifultowninwhichtherewereacoupleofloverswhowouldoftenstaytogetheronthetopofthemountainenjoyingthesunriseandbytheseaappreciatingthesunset.Everyonewhoknewthemcouldnothelpenvyingthemandprayingfortheirhappylove.,25,Competition,26,GroupA(paragraph1)1.目睹；见证(vt)2.他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词sweet）3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(tears)4.变深；使加深(v)5.第三年的最后一天6.他们的爱已成为回忆。GroupB(paragraph2)被打动的；受感动的(adj.)揭露真相3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词regret,用倒装句式）4.唤醒(vt.)5.遭受许多挫折6.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚（提示词thefeelingofregrets/guilt）,27,1.目睹；见证vt._,2.他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词sweet）_,3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。（提示词tears）_,see/witness,Thesweetestwordshehaseversaid,Thebutterflycouldnthelpburstingintotearssadly.,/Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears.,28,5.在第三年的最后一天_,Onthelastdayofthethirdyear,4.变深；使加深vt./vi._,deepen,6.他们的爱已成为回忆。_,Theirlovehasbecomememories.,/Theirlovehasbecomeapast.,29,Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestonthemansshoulderoffandon._,draft,Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldntbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilently.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldntknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.,30,2.揭露真相_,1.被打动的；受感动的adj.be_by,touched,uncoverthetruth,/expose/reveal,/moved/impressed,3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词regret,用倒装句式）_,NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.,31,4.唤醒vt._,awaken/arouse,5.遭受许多挫折_,gothroughmanyobstacles,suffermanystruggles,6.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚（提示词thefeelingofregrets/guilt）_,Themangotshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.,setbacksfrustrations,32,Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”_,draft,Thebutterflysaid,“No.NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.”movedbyherwords,Godwaslostinthought:shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldntdeservethat.So,thedaybeforethemanandthedoctorswedding,Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim.Obviously,themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened.Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewomansforgiveness.Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewontlethergo.Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime.,33,Step3polish（润色）,Step2draft（拟稿）,Step1compose(构思）,Readingforwriting,34,Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestonthemansshoulderoffandon._,draft,Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldntbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldntknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.,35,Howtopolishyourwords?,“小”心思丰满人物内心Innerthoughtstoportraythefigures,36,Tip1：“小”心思丰满人物内心,悲伤,快乐,2016年10月高考作文23分,37,Tip1：“小”心思丰满人物内心,震惊,2017年6月高考作文23分,38,Howtodescribeyourinnerthoughts?,1.Feelinghappy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed,2.Drivenbycuriosity/asenseofsympathy(同情)或者是Deeplytouched/movedby3.，fullofregret/anger/fear/gratitude（感激）4.具体的动作描写standfrozen,jumpwithjoy,tremblewithanger,withtearsfillingoneseyes,withoneseyeswideopen等等,39,Letshaveatry!,1.Godsaidtothewoman,“Doyouregretforwh