英语四六级写作PPT课件

.,1,四六级写作,.,2,Whichoneisbetter?,Itmakesmefeelpainfultothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.,Itpainsmetothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.,ItwillbeouraimtoensureproperhealthcareforeachandeveryoneoftheChinesepeople.,OuraimistoensureproperhealthcareforallChinese.,.,3,Whichoneisbetter?,Thesearchoftheforestthattheyconductedwasentirelycomplete.,Thesearchoftheforestwascomplete.Theyconductedacompletesearchoftheforest.,Hehasnosenseofprinciples,whetherheisinpublicorinprivate.,Hehasnoprinciples,publicorprivate.,.,4,Whichoneisbetter?,Wheneveranyonetelephonedhertoaskherforhelpwiththeirhomeworkshealwaysobligedrightaway.,Sheimmediatelyobligedanyonewhotelephonedforhelpwithhomework.,.,5,Whichoneisbetter?,Anotherimportantaspectisgoodhealth.Itisoneofourgreatblessings.Itmaybeachievedthroughproperdietandexercise.Restisalsodesirable.,Thegreatblessingofgoodhealthmaybehadthroughproperdiet,exercise,andrest.,.,6,写作技巧-简洁才是美,策略之一：用介词短语替代从句。Wordy:Whiletheywereplayingtennis,shestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Better:Duringtennisshestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Wordy:Whenyoucometothesecondtrafficlight,turnright.Better:Atthesecondtrafficlightturnleft.,.,7,写作技巧-简洁才是美,策略之二：删除诸如whois”或thatis之类的关系代词，变从句为短语。Wordy:Thenovel,whichiswritteninthreeparts,toldastorythattookplaceintheMiddleAges.Better:Thethree-partnoveltoldastorysetintheMiddleAges.,.,8,写作技巧-简洁才是美,策略之三：剔除你不需要的单词Twojointpartnerswillpresenttheirviewsoveralong-distancetelephonecall.写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词joint和telephone，注意删去不必要的词。,.,9,写作技巧-简洁才是美,策略之四：表达否定意义时，尽量避免使用否定词。英语中很多词不用no或者not也能表达否定含义的词汇。Thuscollegestudentswhodonothavesufficientfinancialbacking,也就是collegestudentswholackssufficientfinancialbacking。,.,10,Whichoneisbetter?,TheArtofStrategywaswrittenbySunTzu.Itisafifty-six-hundred-wordChineseclassicalwork.Thewriterputforthasetofprinciplesinaverytightlycompressedmanner.Theydealwithhowtodefeatoppositionsandwinbattles.,Inhisfifty-six-hundredwordclassic,TheArtofStrategy,SunTzuputforthatightlycompressedsetofprinciplesforachievingtriumphoveropposition.,.,11,Whichoneisbetter?,Ofcourse,theweaponsatSunTzustimewerequiteprimitive.Thearmieswereverylarge.TheywerenearlyaslargeasthoseinWorldWarTwo.ThedevastationandhumansufferingswerejustasprofoundasinWorldWarTwo.,ComparedwithWorldWarTwo,theweaponsatSunTzustimewerequiteprimitive,butthearmieswerenearlyaslargeandthedevastationandhumansufferingjustasprofound.,.,12,Whichoneisbetter?,Proverbsareshortsayings.Theyaredrawnfromlongexperience.,Proverbsareshortsayingsdrawnfromlongexperience.,.,13,Whichoneisbetter?,Thisisawreck.ItwasformerlythestatelyImperialGarden.Itispreserveddeliberatelyasareminderandsymbol.,Thiswreck,formerlythestatelyImperialGarden,ispreserveddeliberatelyasareminderandsymbol.,.,14,Whichoneisbetter?,Beijingstreetsarecrowdedwithtaxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluent.Thenumberhasbeenrisingrapidlyinthelastfewyears.Thelateststatisticsshowtherearenow1.2millionvehiclesinBeijingalone.,Taxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluenthavecrammedBeijingstreetsinrisingnumbersinthelastfewyears-1.2millionvehiclesatlastcount.,.,15,写作技巧-变化才是真,LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.,Aftergraduatinglastsummerwithanengineeringdegree,LuHaosoonjoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchun.,.,16,写作技巧-变化才是真,LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.,Anengineeringdegree-holder,LuHaojoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinhangchunlastsummersoonaftergraduation.,.,17,写作技巧-变化才是真,LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.,Havinggraduatedwithanengineeringdegree,LuHaojoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunlastsummer.,.,18,切忌过于依赖从句妙用倒装平行结构少用关系代词语态同位结构独立主格结构规范使用标点,.,19,真题演练-提纲式（现象型）,Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAttendYourClassesRegularly.youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:1.现在大学校园里迟到、早退、旷课是常见现象2.如何避免这种现象发生3.作为一个大学生应该怎么做,.,20,真题演练,Nowadaysitisaverycommonphenomenonthatsomeuniversitystudentsarelatefororevenabsentfromclasses.Andstilltherearesomestudentswhoslipoutoftheclassroombeforetheclassisover.Classattendancehasbecomeathornyproblemtoboththestudentsandteachers.,.,21,真题演练,Itisurgentimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation.firstofall,thewholeuniversitystaffshouldcommitthemselvestoestablishingabetterlearningenvironmentandsafercampusforthestudents.Furthmore,theteachersshouldincreasepunishmentsformisbehavior.Lastbutnotleast,othermeanstosolvetheproblemaretoreduceclasssizeto,.,22,真题演练,improvetheattendance.Actually,thewaystotackletheproblemarecountless.AsfarasImconcerned,itisveryimportantforthestudentstoattendtheirclassesregularly.Foronething,itwillensureyoutocatchupwiththeteachersinyourlearning.Thatisveryhelpfultoyouifyouwanttodoagoodjobinyourstudy.Foranother,attendingclasses,.,23,真题演练,regularlyisawayofshowingrespecttoyourteachers,too.Meanwhile,attendingclassesregularlywillhelptoformagoodhabitofpunctuality,whichisofgreatimportanceforthestudentstodoagoodjobinthefuture.,.,24,真题演练,Directions:Youreallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quitingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.Ivedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youdwriteatleast120wordsbutmorethan180words.,.,25,真题演练-谚语警句型,Thehumoroussaying,Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.Ivedoneithundredsoftimes.canbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofastrongwill.Justas“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”,ifyouarereallyresolvedtodosomething,nomatterhowdifficultitmightbe,nevergiveup.Itakethisopinionquitereasonable.,.,26,真题演练,Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.TakeThomasEdisonasayupicalexample.Hecouldnothavefoundtheidealmaterialforelectricbulbsifhehadgivenupafterthousandsotrials.Foranotherexample,ifwithoutthestrongwilltosaveChinesepeoplefromheavydisasterandbuildaprosperous,democraticandcivilizednewcountry,howcouldChairmanMaodriveJapaneseinvadersoutofChinaandbecomesuchafamousleaderintheworld?,.,27,真题演练,Judgingfromtheevidencesoffered,wemightsurelydrawtheconclusionthatnothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.Besides,weshouldmakefullpreparation,thoughastrongwillwillhelpusovercomedifficulties,itisnotforapersonwhohasnopreparation.Toconclude,westudentsshouldhavestrongwillsorwewillnotsucceedifgoodopportunitiesareoffered.,.,28,真题演练-应用文（书信）,Directions:Forthispart,youreallowed30minutestowritealettertotheeditorofanewspapercomplainingaboutthepoorserviceofabookstore.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutmorethan180words.,1.事情的起因2.与书店交涉的经过3.呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量,.,29,真题演练,DearEditor,IamZhangFang,asophomorefromHarbinUniversityofCommerce.NowImwritingtoinformyouthatIfoundthequalityofsomepublicationnotverysatisfactory,andIwouldliketodrawyourattentiontotheproblemofsomepoorservicesoftheserviceindustry.Thecauseofmycomplaintisadi