中考英语作文专题复习指导ppt课件

.,1,Writing,中考作文指导,.,2,Learningaims:,学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。,2.能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3.通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。,.,3,中考英语写作评分标准,一档文（17-20分）,写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少2-3个，基本无语法错误，只有1-2个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。,.,4,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?,.,5,第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition?(Haveadiscussion!),具体做法：用笔勾画,.,6,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(HelpingHandsClub)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,1.,.,7,要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟；4.词数：70左右。,.,8,第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,.,9,WriteanOutline,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,Iwanttojoin,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,看表格,看表格,看图,自拟,Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,可以用英文或中文,姓名/性别,易漏掉的要点！,.,10,自荐信,Whatwillyouwrite？,王林,Whoareyouinthisletter?,人称:I,Whatsyourpurpose?,加入该俱乐部,时态：一般现在时为主,Thinking:,.,11,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.,扣分原因一词数不够！,.,12,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.,Introduction,本人特点,加入目的,扣分原因二遗漏要点！,.,13,WriteanOutline,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,Iamaboy,Idliketojoin,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,无法拿满分！,.,14,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.IgetonwellwithmyclassmatesIfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin,少了两个重要部分，扣5-6分，只得9-10分！,缺少“爱心”表现,也缺少Conclusion,.,15,“爱心”表现(examples),Picture1,helpwith,helpclassmateswithlessons,我的,Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.,看图,.,16,Picture2,helpcross,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,helpoldpeoplecrosstheroad,Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.,.,17,Picture3,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,givemyseatto,givemyseattopeopleinneed,Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.,.,18,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,Picture4,cleanupthepark,helpcleanupthepark,Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.,.,19,“爱心”表现(examples),1.Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.,2.Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.,3.Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.,4.Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.,.,20,Conclusion,IllbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,.,21,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.IlikehelpingothersIgetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin,IllbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlessons.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgivemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.,不但要点完整了，词数也够了。,.,22,写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,？,.,23,DearChairperson,Iamaboystudentfromclass1Grade9.IdlikebeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardlyatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlesson.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgavemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,hecandomoreforothers.IllgladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.YoursWangLin,C,to,lessons,give,I,be,1分,其它六处错扣2分,只得12分,.,24,作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误：时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。,.,25,写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,检查,.,26,另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。,解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,.,27,Letspractice!,.,28,你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是Learningtogetalongwithourparents.请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,.,29,Letsenjoyourowncompositions!,.,30,Samplewriting,Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Todaymytopicislearningtogetalongwithourparents.Thesedays,mostofusfeelitishardtogetalongwithourparents.Weeasilygetangryfornoreasonandevendonttalktothemfordays.Ithinkthecausesareasfollows.First,ourparentsonlycareaboutourmarksanditmakesusstressed.Second,weareunwillingtocommunicatewiththem.Itstimeforustochange.First，wecancommunicatewiththem,bysharingourjoysandworrieswiththem.Then,wecanhelpdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Finally,weshouldachieveabalancebetweenourschoolworkandhobbiessothattheywontfeelworriedaboutus.Thatsallfo