中考英语作文写作指导完整ppt课件VIP

.,1,中考专题复习课,Writing,.,2,检查口语,爱好与学业1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛，当然也喜爱踢足球；2.放学后，他经常花1个小时左右的时间和同学们一起踢足球；3.他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在5点半之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重要的，希望能得到父母的支持。,.,3,分析结构,HobbiesandstudiesMikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdontlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5.30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.Hewisheshecouldhavehisparentssupport.,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,.,4,Discussion,HowtoWriteEnglishCompositions,.,5,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,Writingskillssixsteps,.,6,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇:makegooduseof,interestgroupssocialactivities,dosports,netbar,.,7,第一步:审清题意,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息,具体做法：用笔勾画,.,8,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：,注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数,主题,体裁,人称,结构,时态,字数,已知信息,未知信息,以一般现在时为主,.,9,第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,.,10,IntroductionMainbodyConclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Writeanoutline,花太多时间在兴趣爱好上迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏-,-,合理安排时间参加兴趣小组-,.,11,Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.Phrases:_2.Listsomekeywordsaboutopinions.Phrases:_3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Phrases:_,第三步：抓住要点，列关键词,notgoodforstudyandhealth,Spend-on,hobbies,becrazyabout,-,.,12,Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutproblems.Sentences:_2.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutopinions.Sentences:_3.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Sentences:_,第四步：连词成句,Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandcantfinishtheirhomeworkontime.,Idontthinkitsgoodforourstudyandhealth.,.,13,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,Therearemanythingswecando.wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.,However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?,Forexample,Besidesthese,Andalso,we,We,注意添加主题句，连接词！,.,14,抓住要点，列关键词,Problemsbecrazyabout(7B4)playcomputergames(7A1)watchtoomuchTV(8A1)spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies(9A3)refusetodohomework(9A3)spend-on(7A2)Opinionsnotgoodforourhealthandstudy(7A2)focuson(9A3)Paymoreattentionto(9A1)Suggestionsplantimecarefully(9A3)achieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbies(9A3)takepartindifferentafterschoolactivities(7A2)joininterestgroups(8A2)dosomesports(7A4)dosomehousework(7B5),.,15,Letsenjoyourowncompositions!,.,16,二、评分档次：一档文(17-20分)写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构。二档文(13-16分)基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误。三档文(9-12分)写出大部内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。四档文(5-8分)写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。五档文(0-4分)言不达意，不知所云。,中考英语书面表达评分标准,一、评分原则：1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1分。2.通篇人称错误，统扣2分。3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。2个小错相当于1个大错。4.相同错误，只扣一次。字数不足90词扣3分。5.文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣3分。6.书写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。,.,17,范文展示,Hello,everybody!ItstimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Todaystopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdontknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycantfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,Whatsworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedontthinkitsgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Letsmakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!,.,18,ThestructureofthearticleIntroductionMainbodyConclusion,Summary,.,19,写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,查错改错,.,20,Homework,复习本课要点背诵精彩范文,祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！,.,21,ThankYou!,Youradviceiswelcome!,.,22,变换句式,并列句,复合句结果状语从句,Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycantfinishtheirhomeworkontime.,So