高考英语写作之邀请信定

基于高考范文指导下的写作训练专题邀请信,Aninvitationletter,Whatdoesitimpressyou?,Whyiswritingsotough?,Input,Output,2004-2015十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析,BrainstormingDefinition:Aninvitationletterisatypeofletterthatistoinvitethereceivertotakepartincertainactivity.Itcanbeformalandinformal.,必备句型:Beginning1.Itsagreathonorformetoinviteyouto2.Itakethepleasuretoinviteyouto3.Imwritingtoinviteyouto4.Idliketoinviteyouto5.MayIaskyoutoconsidercomingto.?6.Ithinkitwouldbeagreatideaifyoucouldparticipatein,必备句型:Ending1.Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.2.Wehopethatyouwouldcomeandlookforwardtoseeingyou.3.Ifyouareabletocomewithus,pleaseletusknowandwewillwaitforyou.4.Wouldyoupleasedropmealinetoletmeknowifyoucancome?5.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.,Model(模板)：Dear_，Iwouldliketoinviteyoutojoinusto_for_(内容)on/at_(时间)at/in_(地点).Wewouldbehonored/delightedtohaveyoutherewithus.The_(活动)willstartat_(具体时间).Itsabout_(主题).Wewill_.(活动具体内容)Ataround_(时间),wewill_(具体安排)Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldacceptourinvitation.LookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplyYourssincerely，LiMing,CharacteristicsBeginning(Paragraph1)：Writingpurpose.Body(Paragraph2)：Detailsoftheactivity,includingthetheme,time,place,andsomerequirementsetc.Ending(Paragraph3)：Politelyexpressthegratitudeandexpectation.,Head(Aim),Body(Details),End(Expectation),Whatmakesagoodinvitationletter?,Discussion,揭开高考真题神秘面纱：2015年全国卷1假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约400词汇4.交稿日期：6月28日前注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。,提炼要点：,1.写信约稿（目的）；2.“外国文化”栏目介绍；3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文；4.稿件长度：约400词汇；5.交稿日期：6月28日前；（2-5：具体内容）6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Appreciating（品味佳作),要点提炼：1.写信约稿:2.“外国文化”栏目介绍:3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文：4.稿件长度：约400词汇5.交稿日期：6月28日前6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,25,DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitsinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua,25,Content,Everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整),Everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整),Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)*Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences,Everythingneededshouldbeincluded.(内容完整）,DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitsinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua,Step1(head)：Writingpurpose,Step2(body)：Well-organized,smoothlyandclearlydeveloped.,Step3(end)：Expectation,Structure,*GoodEverythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtEeeEEEEEoyourview.(内容要完整)tweensentences,Goodbeginningandending.（好的开头和结尾）,Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped.（结构合理、行文流畅）,Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences.（恰当的连接词）,DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitsinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua,25,*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns.(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)*NoChinglish.(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes.(避免语法错误),Language,2010年全国卷1英语书面表达（满分25分）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信.英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话484876655）欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。DearMs.Smith,_Bestwishes,LiHua,DearMs.Smith,IamLiHua,theleaderoftheStudentsUnionofYucaiMiddleSchool.IsincerehopeyoucansetasidesometimeforourEnglishSpeechContestandajudge.Thecontest,thethemeofitis“ManandNature”,willbeholdingintheRoom501from2：00to5：00intheafternoonofJune15.Whatsmore,therewillhavetenstudentstakepartinit.Iamsurethatitwillbeagreatsuccessifyoucangivewesomepreciousremarks.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvite.Mytelephonenumberis44876655.Iamlookingforwardtoreceiveyourreply.Bestwishes,LiHua,15,2010年全国卷1英语书面表达（满分25分）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信.英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话484876655）欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。DearMs.Smith,_Bestwishes,LiHua,DearMs.Smith,IamLiHua,theleaderoftheStudentsUnionofYucaiMiddleSchool.IsincerehopeyoucansetasidesometimeforourEnglishSpeechContestandbeajudge.Thecontest,thethemeofitis“ManandNature”,willbeholdingintheRoom501from2：00to5：00intheafternoonofJune15.Whatsmore,therewillhavetenstudentstakepartinit.Iamsurethatitwillbeagreatsuccessifyoucangivewesomepreciousremarks.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvite.Mytelephonenumberis44876655.Iamlookingforwardtoreceiveyourreply.Bestwishes,LiHua,【分析】基本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了连接手法；内容连贯；准确性不够。,15,Agoodessayshouldbe,plete（要点齐全）2.coherent（行文连贯）3.accurate（用词准确）4.fluent/clear（表达流畅）5.various(句式多样)6.neat（书写工整）,Concluding,Strikewhiletheironishot.,2015年全国卷2书面表达假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursinghome）陪老人们过重阳节（theDoubleNinthFestival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结尾已为你写好。,Strikewhiletheironishot.,2015年全国卷2书面表达假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursinghome）陪老人们过重阳节（theDoubleNinthFestival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结尾已为你写好。,Step1analyzetherequirements(认真审题)Step2