【名师A计划】2017高考英语一轮总复习 第三部分 写作指导 提分策略六 精简句子课件 北师大版.ppt

策略六精简句子,在英语短文写作中,提倡使用并列句、复合句,因为使用并列句、复合句能增强句子间的逻辑关联。同时,还要追求语言的简洁性,合理地使用一些写作技巧将松散的简单句、并列句或过度复杂的复合句简化,从而达到长短句结合紧凑,言简意赅的效果。为避免句子冗长,通常可采用以下方法:利用非谓语动词、名词短语、介词短语、同位语、with的复合结构等将从句内容浓缩成表意不变的短语;使用省略或替代来简化句子;避免不必要的或易引起误解的迂回表达和累赘表达;避免使用空洞、多余的短语。,典例(2015陕西高考)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。,写作要点:1.表达写信意图;2.陈述应征目的;3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。DearMsChen,ImLiHua,astudentfromClass2,Grade3.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua,【参考范文】DearMsChen,ImLiHua,astudentfromClass2,Grade3.Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionasastudentvolunteer.Ireallywanttoobtainthepreciousopportunitybecause,byofferingmyservice,Iwillbeabletoimprovemyorganizationalability,communicationskillsaswellasmyconfidenceinspeakingEnglishinpublic.Asanoutgoinggirl,Igetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistanttomyEnglishteacher.Successfully,IhavelentahelpinghandtoherinseveralEnglishactivitiesofmyclass,whichhavebeenappreciatedbybothteachersandmyclassmates.,IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua,【思路点拨】试题要求考生阅读校报英语专栏有关“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。所以在提笔前务必要理解所提供材料信息,明确写作方向。试题要求以李华的角度作文,所以用第一人称,一般现在时。1.表示写信意图。参考词汇和句型:Imwritingtoapplyfor.,position,volunteer等。2.陈述应征目的。参考词汇和短语:opportunity,improvemyorganizationalability,improve等。3.说明应征条件。参考词汇和短语:outgoing,getalongwellwith,haveagoodcommandof等。,(一)(2016河北“五个一名校联盟”质检)假如你是李华,你校即将举行一年一度的“校园书市(campusbookfair)”活动,其目的是给同学们提供一个交换、利用图书的机会。请你用英语写信给你的加拿大笔友Mike,介绍此次活动的有关情况。内容应包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容:买书,卖书,交换图书;3.活动意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。,DearMike,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Yours,LiHua,【参考范文】DearMike,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Aimedatprovidingaplatformwherestudentscanhaveachancetoexchangeandmakeuseoftheirbooks,theannualcampusbookfairwillsoonbeheldinourschool.Thefairwillattractahugecrowdfromtheentireschool,whoaretosell,purchaseandexchangetheirsecond-handbookswiththeirpeers.Asaregularvisitor,Ivefoundmyselfincreasinglydrawnbythefair.Foronething,thefairexhibitsbooksofhundredsoftypesondiversetopics,motivatingustofurtherdevelopourreadinghabitsandhelptobroadenourhorizons.Foranother,mostbooksaresoldatalowerpricethanwhatthebookstoresoffer.Pleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanysuggestionsonhowtohostsuchabookfairbetter.Yours,LiHua,(二)最近在学校的论坛上,你看到有不少同学用英语在交流听力如何突破的问题。根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语网帖参与交流。内容包括:1.掌握听力技巧和方法,多向老师和同学求助;2.听、说相结合,多听的同时注重口语训练;3.充分利用网络、英文电台等听力资源。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当展开联想。,【参考范文】EverystudentmayfeelitalittledifficulttoimprovetheirlisteningabilityinEnglishlearning.NowIwanttosharesomeexperiencewitheverybody.Ihopeitcanhelpyouinaway.First,listeningskillsandmethodsareveryimportant.AndIthinkyoumayturntoyourteachersandclassmatesintimewhennecessary.Besides,dontalwayspracticelisteningonlybecauselisteningandspeakingaretightlyconnected.OnlyifyouroralEnglishisperfectisyourlisteningabilityperfect,too.Soyouneedtopracticelisteningandspeakingatthesametime.Third,makef