口语+写作辅导-例证法.ppt

TipsforUsingIllustration(例证法),1.selectgoodexamples.2.useanexampleofpersonalexperience.3.Groupsimilarorrelatedexamplestogetherandarrangethemingoodorder.4.Balancethegeneralwiththespecific5.Dontmakeageneralstatementwithoutsupportingitwithenoughdetails;dontgiveadetailthatdoesnotservetoclarifyyourpoint.,Checking,代词you,me,she,him,they是否全篇文章一致。动词时态是否统一，名词单复数是否得当。表达论点是否有连接词表层次：first,second,third,finally表示观点时是否有表总结的词：inmyopinion,inmypointofview,tosumup,inaword，finally，theabovementioned.例子是否恰当，有代表性.细节与主题是否有联系,考虑去掉联系不够紧密的细节内容与提纲是否一致.措辞是否恰当，例如书面语以及词汇多样性。书写是否整洁，词语拼写是否正确。,Topic1:ManandEnvironment,CopenhagenClimateChangeConference2009endsinfailure,becausetherichcountriesdidntwanttocommittheclimateaidpromise.Pleasediscusstheimportanceofenvironmentissuestodaywithsomesupports,andexpressyouropinionintheconclusion.,Comparison&Contrast,Comparison:examiningsimilarities.Contrast:examiningdifferences.Examples:ipadvs.notebookTrainvs.MetroOrangevs.Grapefruit(西柚),1.toshowthatAisbetterthanB.2.toshowdifferencesbetweenseeminglysimilaritems.3.toshowsimilaritiesbetweenseeminglydifferentitems.4.toshowbothdifferencesandsimilaritiesbetweentwoitems.5.topresentsimilaritiesanddifferencesbetweentwoitemsforaspecialpurpose.,Purposeofwritingcomparison&contrast,subject-to-subjectpatternSubject1Point1Point2Point3Subject2Point1Point2Point3,pointbypointpattern,Point1Point2Point3,tototo,Point1Point2Point3,Subject2,Subject1,Tipsofwritingcomparisonandcontrast,1)Onlyitemsofthesamegeneralclass2)Comparison/contrastessayusuallyfollowsoneofthetwopatternsmentionedabove.3)Thetwoitemsbeingcompared/contrastedshouldbebalancedandgivenequaltreatment.4)Concreteandrelevantfactsshouldbeusedtosupportthecomparison/contrast.5)Similaritiesanddifferencesarepresentedforaspecialpurpose.,Aloneorgetmarried?,Inrecentyearsthereisatendencytowardslivingalone.Accordingtoacensusreport,householdsconsistingofjustonepersonhaveincreasedto14percentinthepastyear,comparedwith4percent20yearsago.Whyarepeoplelivingalone?Pleasediscussthematter,usingcomparisonandcontrastmethod,andexpressyouropinionintheconclusion.,Homework-TwogreatpresidentsofUSA,Pleasechooseoneofthepatternmentionedabove.Payattentiontotheskillsofcontrastandcomparison.Dontforgetyourconclusion.,富兰克林D罗斯福,美国第32任总统富兰克林D罗斯福(FranklinD.Roosevelt19331945)，一直被视为美国历史上最伟大的总统之一，是20世纪美国最孚众望和受爱戴的总统，也是美国历史上惟一连任4届总统的人，从1933年3月起，直到1945年4月去世时为止，任职长达12年。曾赢得美国民众长达7周的高支持率，创下历史记录。,亚伯拉罕林肯AbrahamLincoln(1809-1865),美国第16任总统，领导了结束奴隶制度的南北斗争，是美国历史上最伟大的总统之一。1858年，发表了著名演说家庭纠纷，从而声名大振，1860年，林肯作为共和党候选人，当选