写作教程第二版(邹申)-unit-3-Places--Development-by-Spaceppt课件

.,1,站长站素材OM,ArkeyWorks,Unit3DevelopmentbySpace,.,2,UnitObjectives,Becomefamiliarwithfeatureandorganizationalpatternofideasbasedonspaceorspatialrelationshipsinparagraphwriting;Knowhowtodevelopdescriptionaccordingtospacearrangement;Beabletoconstructaparagraphbyarrangingdetailswithlinkingwordsoflocationanddirection,.,3,DevelopmentbySpace,Beforewebegintodescribeaplace,whetheritisalargecountryorasmallroom,wehavetodecideontheorderinwhichtonamethedifferentpartsordetails.Forthiscase,weshouldfindoutthespacerelationshipsbetweenthemandarrangeourdescriptionaccordingly.,.,4,GroupWork,Whatsyouroverallimpressionoftheuniversity?Whichbuildingorlocationcatchesyourattentionfirst?Whichplacedoyouwanttodescribenext?Andthen?Whatdoyouwanttodescribelast?Whatorderdoesyourdescriptionfollow?Whydoyouchoosethisorder?,.,5,Importantlandmark,anddescribeotherlocationsinrelationtoit.StressanboundariesofanareaAlongtheroadAccordingtonorthsouthorwest-east5.Outsidetoinsideinsidetooutside,Tips,.,6,TiananmenSquare,GoldenWaterBridge,Monument,Museum,MemorialHall,GreatHall,.,7,gate,path,lawns,flowerbed,wood,pavilion,stonebenches,pond,lawns,.,8,Wearegoingtobuildasmallgardenoncampus.Thestraightnorthwardpathinsidethegateleadstoaconventionalpavilionwhichinfrontofsomedelicatestonebenches.Verdantlawnsareatthebothsidesofthepath.Thereisasmallpondinlaysthelawnatsoutheastpart.Ifyouchoosetheotherpathgoesacrossthegardenfromwesttoeast,thenyoucanenjoyluxuriantlygreenwoodbesidesthepavilionatnorthwesternpartandappreciateabeautifulflowerbedatnortheast.,.,9,AdditionalWork,Bath(bathtub)PlugShowerTowel-railBath-matShowercurtainWash-basin,8.Face-flanneltowel9.Nail-brush10.Razor11.Toilet(lavatory)12.Cistern13.Flushinghandle14.toilet-paper,.,10,DevelopmentbySpace,theCaspianSea里海里海位于亚洲与欧洲交界，是世上最大及蓄水量最多之湖泊，面积37万1千平方公里(143,000平方英里)，体积78,200立方公里，最深处1,025米，平均深度209米，湖面海拔负28米，最深处湖床海拔负1,054米，也是内流湖、咸水湖、海迹湖。,2.AsiaMinorAnatolia小亚细亚土耳其的亚洲部分被称为安纳托利亚，也称小亚细亚。安纳托利亚位于平均海拔高度米的高原上，山脉环绕四周，夏季的高原到处都是种植的谷物。这里白昼炎热，夜晚寒冷，即使在夏天也须穿御寒服。,3.Phoenicians腓尼基人腓尼基人是历史上一个古老的民族，自称为闪美特人，又称闪族人。生活在今天地中海东岸相当于今天的黎巴嫩和叙利亚沿海一带，他们曾经建立过一个高度文明的古代国家。公元前10世纪至公元前8世纪是腓尼基城邦的繁荣时期,.,11,SummarySample2,Itisadescriptionof“mygrandfathersbarn”Deplorablespecificwordsandarrangesthesedescriptivedetailsinanaturalorderoftheirphysicallayout:exteriortotheinteriorofthebarn.outsidefromtoptothebottominsidefromlefttotherightandtotheoverheadThereadercanvisualizethesceneveryvividlyandgrasptherelationshipsoftheobjects.,.,12,.,13,suit,.,14,KeysforSample3P26,AnathletesroomCloset/dresser/accordingtothespatialorder/thewriterpresentsanorderlydescriptionjustashiseyemightmovefromrighttotheleftaroundtheroom.,ClosettomyrightCapontheshelfBedthefarwallLamp-onthetopofanightstandtotheleftofthebed,ScheduleonthewallabovethenightstandDesktheleftwallMedalsontheshelvesWindownexttothedeskDresserbetweenthewindowandtheleftcorner,.,15,SummarySample3,1.Displayanartisticgroupingofdetailsinspace2.Thingsarerelatedtoeachotherbytheorderinwhichtheyareplacedinspace3.Withtheuseofspecificspacesignals,weareledbythewritertoexperiencetheroomvividlyfromrighttoleft,fromlargertosmalleronesasifwewereactually“seeing”it.,.,16,LinkingDevicesP28,Spatialsignalsareoftenusedtohelporganizedetailsindescriptiveparagraph.,E.G.inside,intheright-handside,outside,intheoppositeend,downthecenter,attheendof,theleft-hand,Thewriterorganizestheparagraphinaparticularorder.Readerswillnotgetlostwhilethedescriptionproceeds.,Question1,.,17,Depressing,Puppiesbehindglass,Unpleasantsmell,Chainedbirds,Rowsofcages,Dirtytubcontainingturtles,Stuffatmosphere,Kittensinthewindow,Soundsofcagedanimals,Droppingsandurineonnewspaper,Logicalarrangement,Transitionaldevices,.,18,4.sight,touch,hearingandsmell.Throughtherichperceptionsthereaderwillgainafullerandmorevividpictureofthescene5.Sight:black-and-whitekittenspiledtogether;alineoflargewoodenperches;parrotsfluttertheirclippedwings;stagnant-lookingwater;motionlessturtlesSound:clawing;shufflingsoundSmell:unpleasantmixtureofstrongchemicaldeodorizers;urine-soakednewspapers;mustysawdustTouch:lickthehumanhands,.,19,Words&Phrases,where,inwhich,under,below,beneath,down,over,above,along,through,north(en),totheleft,nextto,ontheoppositeside,totheleft(right),inback,nearby,beyond,intheforeground,inthebackground,.,20,SummarySample2,Itisadescriptionof“mygrandfathersbarn”Deplorablespecificwordsandarrangesthesedescriptivedetailsinanaturalorderoftheirphysicallayout:exteriortotheinteriorofthebarn.outsidefromtoptothebottominsidefromlefttotherightandtotheoverheadThereadercanvisualizethesceneveryvividlyandgrasptherelationshipsoftheobjects.,.,21,ReviewtheUnit,VerticalorderHorizontalorderDepthorderCircularorderCenter-to-circumferenceorder,.,22,KeysforExercises,P3033614752Relationship:Primarily,theorganizationoftheparagraphrepresentsmovementingeographicalspaceP31-41).In,Above,Infrontof,under,through,Behind2).Thecentralfocusis“ashockingexperience”.Tosupportthemainidea,thewriterusesalotofdescriptionsandorganizesthesedetailsaccordingtothespacerelationship,andthuscoherenceisachieved.,.,23,P315into,cr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