大学英语四级写作专题辅导PPT课件

-,1,大学英语四级写作专题辅导,-,2,大学英语四级作文评分标准,一、评分原则1CET检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(AwardScores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。,-,3,4避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。5.字数不足以应酌情扣分。二、评分标准1本题满分为15分2阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一份。3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。,-,4,分数档,4评分标准2分(33)条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分(39)基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分(45)基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分(57)切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分(67)切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。,-,5,CET4写作评分标准,高分作文基本要求：思想表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误高分要求：句型的多样性经典词组短语的运用亮点词汇,-,6,写作题型,议论文1.主题型（topic）健康对人类的幸福必不可少；如何保持健康；结论2.观点对比型（AIsaw;Iconquered.JuliusCaesarGovernmentofthepeople,bythepeopleandforthepeople,shallnotperishfromtheearth.AbrahamLincolnStudiesservefordelight,forornament,andforability.FrancisBaconSomebooksaretobetasted,otherstobeswallowed,andsomefewtobechewedanddigested.FrancisBacon,-,34,排比句式Itcannotbedeniedthattechnologydoeshelpusalot.Internetprovidesuswitheasyaccesstovariousaspectsofknowledgeandinformation;mobilephonesmakeitmoreconvenientforustocommunicatewithoneanother;agrowingnumberofman-madesatelliteshavebeenlaunchedtoprobeintothesecretsoftheuniverse.Withouttechnology,theworldwouldstopdeveloping.Thatiswhyweshouldbeproudofadvancedscienceandtechnologyinthecontemporaryage.,-,35,排比句式somediscardlitterseverywhere;somecheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somethrowoffensive/insultingremarksatothers;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.,-,36,2009.12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建设绿色校园很重要2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境.3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该.,-,37,1.建设绿色校园很重要Theconceptof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesecitizens.Almosteveryuniversityhasbeenawareoftheimportanceofbuildingagreencampus.Withoutgreenenvironmentitisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyable/agreeablelifeintheIvoryTower.Furthermore,agreencampusisofbenefittobroaden/consolidatestudentsawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.,CreatingaGreenCampus,-,38,2.绿色校园不仅仅指绿色的环境Inadditiontogreenenvironment,greencampusesalsorefertodecentbehaviors.However,takingalookaround,wecanfindagoodmanyexamplesofinappropriateones:somediscardlitterseverywhere;somecheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somethrowoffensive/insultingremarksatothers;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.Infact,ithasbecomeatrendformanystudentstoturnablindeyetotheirownbadacts.,-,39,3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该Accordingly,itisimperative/urgentforustotakemeasurestomaintaingreencampuses.Foronething,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttobanthesenegativebehaviors.Foranother,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestorefusealluncivilizedacts.Ifwedoourutmosttodoso,thefutureofourcollegelifewillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.,-,40,友情提醒：高分句式灵活运用NowadaysEnglishlearningisverypopularinChina.Inrecentdecades,Englishlearninghasgained/isenjoyingwidepopularityamongChinesestudents.NowadaysEnglishlearningismoreandmorepopularinChina.Inrecentdecades,Englishlearninghasgained/isenjoyinggrowingpopularityamongChinesestudents.Inrecentdecades,EnglishlearninghasfounditsgrowingpopularityamongChinesestudents.,-,41,首段首尾句句式选择（呼应式写法）1)_has/havegained(is/areenjoying)widepopularityamong_.2)_has/havefoundits/theirwayamong_.3)Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendfor_to_.Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendthat_.4)Thereisagrowingtrendof_.Thereisagrowingtrendthat_.注：首句前加上适当的时间状语,-,42,2011-06现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚Inthecontemporarysociety,onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularitythroughouttheworld.Forthesakeofconvenience,agrowingnumberofpeoplemakepurchasesonavarietyofshoppingwebsiteseveryday.Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforyoungsterstoshoponline.,-,43,Inthecontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforyoungsterstoshoponline.Forthesakeofconvenience,agrowingnumberofpeoplemakepurchasesonavarietyofshoppingwebsiteseveryday.Onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularitythroughouttheworld.,-,44,Inthecontemporarysociety,thereisagrowingtideofyoungstersshoppingonline.Forthesakeofconvenience,agrowingnumberofpeoplemakepurchasesonavarietyofshoppingwebsiteseveryday.Onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularitythroughouttheworld.,-,45,2009-12建设绿色校园很重要Inthepresent-daysociety,theconceptof“GreenCampus”isenjoyingwidepopularityamonguniversities.WithoutgreenenvironmentitisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyableandagreeablelifeintheIvoryTower.Thusithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforuniversitiestocreategreencampuses.,-,46,2010-06如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视单词拼写Inrecentdecades,Englishlearninghasgainedwidepopularityamongstudents.Thereisagrowingtrend/tideoflearningEnglishinChina.However,-,47,题目：MyViewonDoubleBADegree提纲：1.现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见2.对此，人们看法不一3.我对这一现象的看法,练笔,-,48,MyviewonDoubleBADegreeInthecontemporarysociety,thesystemofdoublebachelorsdegreehasgainedwidepopularityamonguniversitiesorcolleges.Onmanycampusesithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforstudentstohavetwomajorsatthesametime.,-,49,Tothisphenomenon,differentstudentstakedivergentattitudes.Somestronglyapproveofitinthatadoublebachelorsdegreecanbroadentheirvision,thusputtingtheminamorefavorablepositioninthejob-seekingmarket.Onthecontrary,thosewhostandfirmlyopposedtoitalsohavecogentreasons.Foronething,twomajorsmakeitdifficultforthemtofocusononeparticularfield;foranother,theycanexpandtheirscopeofknowledgebyreadingextensivelyratherthanpursuingadoublebachelorsdegree.,-,50,Personally,Iamslightlynegativeaboutdoublebachelorsdegree.Inthisdayandage,themoreskilledweareinonespecificrealm,thebetterwecanmeetthesocietysneeds.Accordingly,itisadvisablethatweshouldmakethemostofourcollegelifetoacquiremorespecializedknowledgeandskillstosetthestageforourfuture.,-,51,观点对比型模板提炼Tothisphenomenon/issue,different_takedivergentattitudes.Somestrongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocateitinthat/as_.Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitcogently/convincinglycontendthat_.,-,52,Tothisphenomenon/issue,different_takedivergentattitudes.Somewhostrongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocateitarecogentlyconvincedthat_.Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitcontendthat_.,-,53,Tothisphenomenon/issue,different_takedivergentattitudes.Somestrongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocateit.Theyholdtheviewthat_.Moreover/Furthermore,_.Inaddition,_.Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitalsohavecogent/soundreasons.Foronething,_;foranother,_.,-,54,(时间状语),_has/havegained(is/areenjoying)widepopularityamong_.Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendfor_to_.Some_strongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocate_inthat/as_.(Some_strongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocate_.Foronething,_;foranother,_.)Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitalsohavecogent/soundreasons.Accordingtotheirpointofview,_.Moreover/Furthermore,_.Inaddition,_.,-,55,五彩斑斓的英语句子,什么样的句子更加吸引阅卷老师？优美句子的艺术张力何在？优美的句子如何形成？,复杂多样变幻莫测,-,56,如何避免句式单调?被动式It形式主语/宾语分词作状语TherebeWith复合结构非限制性定语从句倒装主语从句名词化,-,57,被动式人们普遍认为理论与实践是不可分的。It