2013广州二模基础写作太阳能汽车

2013年广州二模基础写作,你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报的“科技与发明”栏目写一篇环保产品介绍写作内容请根据以下信息，介绍太阳能汽车,审题：TIPS,Tense(时态)Information(信息组合)Person(人称)Structure(句子结构),一般现在时(说明文),S1:名称+原理+外形S2-3:优点S4-5:缺点,第三人称,在NOTADIDAS中选择恰当的结构,非谓语,定语从句,Usingsolarpanelstogetenergyfromthesun,solarcarslooksimilartoordinarycars.,Solarcars,whicharesimilartoordinarycarsinshape,getenergyfromthesunthroughsolarpanels.,形容词做状语,Similartoordinarycarsinshape,solarcarsworksbygettingenergyfromthesunthroughsolarpanels.,先弄清信息之间的逻辑关系,因为低噪音和污染，所以(太阳能汽车)是环保的因为(太阳能汽车)车身小，所以易驾驶和易停车,因为低噪音和污染，所以(太阳能汽车)是环保的,Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,sotheyaregoodfortheenvironment.,Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,whichisenvironmentallyfriendly.,因为(太阳能汽车)车身小，所以易驾驶和易停车,Astheyrecomparativelysmaller,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.,Withsmallsize,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.,不仅价格昂贵而且动力不足xxx尽管价格昂贵，但是却动力不足,Expensiveasitis,itislesspowerful,withamaximumspeedofonly70km/h.Inspiteof/Despiteitshighprice,itis.,Thebiggestproblemofallisthattheycanonlybedrivenabout100kmbeforetheirbatteryneedsrecharging/tobecharged.,Whatgreatlydisappoints/troublestheusersisthatsolarcarscanonlycover100kmafterbeingcharged.,表语从句,主语从句+表语从句,有一些出彩的表达，但卷面要改善,语言简洁明了，但没必要分这么多段,卷面让人心情舒畅,表达丰富，逻辑连贯好,Usingsolarpanelstogetenergyfromthesun,solarcarslooksimilartoordinarycars,buttheyhaveseveraladvantages.Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,whichisgreatfortheenvironment.Also,astheyrecomparativelysmaller,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.However,solarcarsaremuchmoreexpensivetobuythannormalcars,andtheyremuchlesspowerful,withatopspeedofonly70km/h.Thebiggestproblemofallisthattheycanonlybedrivenabout100kmbeforetheirbatteryneedsrecharging/toberecharged.,Solarcars,whichgettheirenergyfromthesunthroughsolarpanels,looksimilartoordinarycars,buttheyhaveseveraladvantages.Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,sotheyrequitegoodfortheenvironment.Also,astheyrecomparativelysmaller,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.However,notonlyaretheymuchmoreexpensivetobuythannormalcars,theyrealsolesspowerful,withatopspeedofonly70km/h