2015年《南方新高考》英语 第三部分 第6讲 美文鉴赏

第6讲,美文鉴赏,一、基础写作美文鉴赏,12011年广州市高三年级调研测试写作内容,亚运结束，作为最佳志愿者，你接受某英文报的采访，请,根据以下内容准备一段感言。,参考范文：,WhenIlearntthatIdbeenfinallyacceptedasavolunteerfortheAsianGames,Iwasveryexcited.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtoitwithsuchexpectation,butthenewsthatIwasassignedtodothelaundryworkintheAsianGamesVillageleftmealittledisappointed.Everyday,Ineededtowashabout1000itemsofclothing,whichwasreallyboringandtiresome.Butknowingthatitwasagoodchancetoimprovemyself,Iwasdeterminedtotrymybesttocompletethejob.Intheend,Iwasselectedasanexcellentvolunteerandthe16dayswasaonce-in-a-life-timeexperience,evenifIwasonlywashingclothes.,鉴赏,所给材料信息点不多，表格形式基本已将信息块划分好，因而，组织信息并不难。同时，表格的形式使信息呈现方式显得单调，在语言多样性方面对学生能力要求较高。,该文章逻辑紧密，句与句之间用whenIlearntthat,everyday,but,intheend等连接词和短语将材料逻辑外显。文章句式多样，表达自然流畅，多处用了状语从句、定语从句和同位语从句，第二、五句用并列句，第四句用分词作状语。本文语言准确地道，leftmedisappointed,once-in-a-life-timeexperience等表达避免落入俗套，又极为生动地传达了作者的心理状态。,22011年惠州市高三第三次调研考试,请根据下列提示要点，写一篇关于J.K.Rowling的短文。写作内容,1.J.K.Rowling是哈利波特的作者，她出生于1965年,7月，英格兰，从小就梦想着当一名作家。,2中学毕业后她的父母鼓励她去读法语，一年后她在巴黎,的大学毕业并在伦敦工作。,3就是在1990年她有了写关于HarryPotter的想法。4她的第一部HarryPotter的书出版于1997年，从那以,后，她成为世界上最受儿童欢迎的作家。,参考范文：,BorninEngland,July1965,JK.Rowling,thewriterof,HarryPotter,dreamtofbeingawriterfromanearlyage.Aftermiddleschool,herparentsencouragedhertostudyFrench.Ayear,later,JK.RowlinggraduatedfromuniversityinParis,andworkedinLondon.Itwasin1990thatJK.Rowlingfirsthadtheideaabout,HarryPotter.HerfirstHarryPotterbookwaspublishedin1997,andsincethen,JK.Rowlinghasbecomethemostpopularwriter,amongchildrenintheworld.,鉴赏,所给材料信息点较多，有八个之多，对学生组织信息和语,言表达的能力要求较高。,本文以时间为线索贯穿全文，逻辑清晰。文中长短句结合，错落有致，第一句以分词、同位语手段介绍人物基本情况，第二句是简单句，简洁明了，介绍其学术背景，第三句承接第二句，用并列句介绍其毕业和工作情况，第四句用强调句介绍其事业的转折点，最后一句用并列句介绍其成就。值得一提的是，第四句强调句用得恰到好处，强调罗琳人生的转折点，起到承上启下的作用，也极为巧妙地凸显强调句的意义。如若五句话中有一句复合句将会更加完美。,32011年湛江市普通高考测试(二),最近，你校学生会对分类垃圾箱是否进学校一事进行了调查，调查结果见下面表格。请根据表格提供的信息用英语写一篇作文，介绍同学们的不同意见和看法，并表达你自己的观点。,写作内容,学生对分类垃圾箱进学校的不同看法及所占比例,参考词汇：分类classification,参考范文：,Recentlythestudentsunionconductedasurveyonwhether,recyclingdustbinsshouldbesetatschool.,Opinionsaredividedaboutthisact.Morethanhalfofthestudents,60%arecompletelyforthisact,asitisnotonlybeneficialtorecyclingofresources,butalsocanhelpstudentsdeveloptheirgoodhabitofgarbageclassification.However,surprisingly,30%ofthestudentsholdtheoppositeopinionthatitistroublesomeandresisttochangingtheiroldhabits,andtherestcarelittleaboutitfortheythinkitisnoneoftheirbusiness.,Personally,Iminfavourofthisact,becauseIbelieveitsimportanttoraisepeoplesawarenessofgarbageclassification,fromwhichwewillgetgreatbenefitsforthefuture.,鉴赏,本文是正反观点类基础写作一个极佳的模板。作者不受表格的影响，篇章结构意识极强，遵循“提出问题总括意见正面观点反面观点个人观点”的结构，各用一句话阐述。文章句式多样，长短句结合，详略得当。第三句并列结构非常恰当，第四句用同位语从句，充实内容，最后一句用状语从句，层次鲜明。语言流畅自然，surprisingly,resist,therest,infavourof,raisepeoplesawareness等词和短语地道准确，给文章增色不少。,二、读写任务美文鉴赏,2011年佛山市普通高中高三教学质量检测(一),阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语,短文。,ThomasJeffersonHighSchoolDetention(留堂)Policy,Theschoolknowswellthatstudentsneedtogrowandmature.Partofgrowthinvolvesmakingpositiveacademicandlifestyledecisionsorchoices.IfstudentsdecisionsarecontrarytoThomasJeffersonHighsexpectationsandstandards,studentswillbeheldresponsible.Homeworktimeafterschoolmaybeoneoftheconsequences.,ReasonsforAfterSchoolDetentionincludebutarenotlimited,tothefollowing：,1Latehomeworkorincompletework(Adetentionwillbe,givenwhenafourthincompleteorlatehomeworkoccursinany,subject.),2Behaviorthatdisturbswithschoolpurposesoreducational,processes.Pleaserefertotheteachersclassroomrules,RulesofBehavior,andCodeofConduct,whicharepostedineach,classroom.,Undernormalcircumstances,astudentwillbegivenawarning(andpossiblyotherin-schoolconsequences)beforebeinggivenadetention.Theywillbewarnedthatfurtherbehaviorofthesametypewillresultinadetention.However,ifthebehaviorproblemissevereenough,thestudentmaybegivenadetentionwithoutawarning.,写作内容,1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。,2以约120词对留堂这一做法进行议论，内容包括：(1)你或你同学的留堂经历。(2)你对留堂制度的看法。,(3)其他督促学生认真学习的办法。,参考范文：IfstudentsfailtofollowThomasJeffersonHighSchools,requirements,they,would,be,given,detentions,as,punishment.Reasonsfordetentionincludelateorincompletehomeworkandotherdisturbingbehaviors.ThisremindsmeofmyfriendLiHuasexperienceinprimaryschool.Oneday,hewastalkingwithanotherclassmateinclassalthoughtheteacherhadwarnedhimseveraltimes.Asaresult,hehadtostayforanextrahourafterschool.,Inmyopinion,detentionhasitsadvantagesineducatingmisbehavedstudents.Foronething,withthedetentionpolicy,westudentswilllearnthatweshouldberesponsibleforourbehavior.Foranotherthing,thepolicycanmakeusfinishourhomeworkontime,whichisgoodforouracademicdevelopment.However,thereareotherwaystomakestudentsworkhard.Forexample,teacherscanrewarduswithsmallgiftsifwedoagoodjob.Besides,studentscanbed