2015高考英语作文全攻略(汤玉花)

,Beautifyyourcomposition英语作文的华丽变身,2,1、所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活,具有时特点，紧扣与学生相关的社会热点及学生的生活与学习。2、词数要求从100提高到120，既要求表达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。3、开头或/和结尾都已经给出，无文体要求，主要考查考生的表达能力。,命题特点,3,1、词数都符合试题要求;覆盖了所有要点;基本上是3段2、所用句型以简单句为主，但是使用了一定量的高级词汇，大量的短语和句型，丰富的句式结构增强了表达的效果；3、都有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,参考答案特点,4,一：语言第一位（语言高级）二：内容第二位（要点齐全）三：结构第三位（文章分段）,书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则,5,词汇使用的四原则,2、地道原则。,3、避免重复原则,4、后、高、长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。,6,应用了较多的词汇,Itsveryhelpful.,Itbenefitsalot./Itisofgreathelp.,SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.,anincreasingnumberofpeople,Youreffortswillbeveryimportant.,Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.,moreandmorepeople,SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.,强调句,名词性从句,常用谚语,with复合结构,非谓语动词,高级句型,8,实战（1）,Shecantcorrectlypronouncetheword.,Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.,SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredtome.,Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.,9,实战（2）,他昨天下午来的,Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.,Hedidntcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.,Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.,Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.,10,10,将陈述句改为感叹句,TopreventthepollutionisveryimportantSheisaclevergirl,Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!,Whataclevergirlsheis!,将陈述句改为倒装句,Wecanachievesuccessinthisway.,Itissoeasythatevenachildcandoit.,Soeasyisitthatevenachildcandoit.,Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccess.,将简单句改为强调句,Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.,HowcanweimproveourEnglish?,Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.,HowisitthatwecanimproveourEnglish?,12,合并为同位语从句,LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.Hewonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.,Thewordistrue.Theactorwillgiveusaspeech.,LiuXiang,anexcellentathlete,wonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.,Thewordthattheactorwillgiveusaspeechistrue.,13,合并为定语从句,The2008OlympicGameswasheldinBeijing,anditssloganwasOneWorldOneDream.,YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.,The2008OlympicGames,whosesloganwasOneWorldOneDream,washeldinBeijing.,YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,whereweboughtalotofclothes.,14,15,一：肯定不如双否好二：陈述不如倒装妙三：主动不如被动巧四：分词结构不能少,四不如,肯定不如双否好,Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.,Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.,IcouldnthavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.,16,陈述不如倒装妙,Hedidntcomehereuntil5pm.,Travellingcannotonlyrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.,Notuntil5pm.didhecomehere.,Itwasnotuntil5pm.thathecamehere.,Notonlycantravellingrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.,17,主动不如被动巧,Wecanborrowfivebooks,andwecankeepthemforamonth.,Themainproblemnowishowwecanpreventthisfromhappeningagain.,Themainproblemnowishowthiscanbepreventedfromhappeningagain.,Fivebookscanbeborrowedandtheycanbekeptforamonth.,18,Ifweatherpermits,wewillgohiking.,Weatherpermitting,wewillgohiking.,Beingastudent,Idliketoknowthediscount.,分词结构不能少,19,一去（去连词）二看（看主语）三改（改分词）,BecauseIamastudent,Idliketoknowthediscount.,20,写规范不要少,逻辑混乱,高考链接-2011年湖北卷,请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Workingingroupsatschoolisanopportunitytolearnmoreaboutteamwork.Teamworkshowsushowotherpeoplesrolesfitthepurposeofthegroup,anditteachesustobepatientandhowtorespondtodifferentpeople.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为100左右,23,高考链接-2011年湖北卷,Workingingroupsatschoolisanopportunitytolearnmoreaboutteamwork.Teamworkshowsushowotherpeoplesrolesfitthepurposeofthegroup,anditteachesustobepatientandhowtorespondtodifferentpeople.,24,高考链接-2011年湖北卷,Workingingroupsatschoolplaysanimportantroletousstudents.Notonlycanwebecomepatient,butalsowecanlearntheskillswhichweneedtodealwithdifferentpeopleandthings.Itishightimethatweshouldworkinateam.Onlyinthiswaycanwebeanablemanwhenwestepintosociety.,25,高考链接-2011年湖北卷,Workingingroupsatschoolplaysanimportantroletousstudents.Notonlycanwebecomepatient,butalsowecanlearntheskillswhichweneedtodealwithdifferentpeopleandthings.,26,高考链接-2011年湖北卷,27,Itishightimethatweshouldworkinateam.Onlyinthiswaycanwebeanablemanwhenwestepintosociety.,高考链接-2010年湖北卷,请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个实例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。Thebestexampleofuniversallyunderstoodbodylanguagemaybethesmile.Asmilecanhelpusgetthroughdifficultsituationsandfindfriendsinaworldofstrangers.Asmilecanopendoorsandteardownwalls.注意：无须写标题；内容只需涉及一个方面；词数为10