2016届高考英语总复习短文改错课件

短文改错,ProofReading,大冶市第三中学徐双燕,Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.,课前导学,高考真题(2013新课标),hold,passed,well/clearly,shoulders,to/into,him,and,when,ever,Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethenforalltheseyearwehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!,高考真题(2014新课标),ago,of,years,have,a,everywhere,tasty,many,wonderful,课前导学,2015课标卷I,WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,welllivetoregretit.,thought,课前导学,with,serious,air,Many,find,our/the,and,Whatsthemaintroublewhencorrectingapassage?,1.看不出句子有错，感觉越读越对。2.看出句子错误,但无法改正。3.不能从篇章角度考虑问题。,Howtodotheproofreading?,看了答案什么都明白，做题时想不到，因为：这些错误也是我常犯的,1）短文长度依据高考近两年全国卷I和II进行分析，特别是2015年，词数都是106，故此题的短文长度应在105-110个词之间。行数：6至7行,命题原则,2）短文难度,难度只相等于高一下学生作文或高考作文答案,答案1.thinkthought2.incountry+the3.orand4.onwith5.删掉been6.seriouslyserious7.airsair8.Muchmany9.foundfind10.yourour/the.,难题,3）难题是如何命置的？,难题设置陷阱（1）：利用错误联想如WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.,都是后文惹的祸，影响了思路,甚至有同学改为will了,难题设置陷阱（2）：拦截正确思维Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.e.g._hisfatherworkhard?_yourfatherworkhard?,DoorDoes?,难题设置陷阱（3）：核心考点过关查Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.,八大动词，只要是大考就有他们！,切记：八大动词1.lielielay2.findfound3.windwound4.hanghang5.dress6.seat7.leave8.keep,1.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.,the,Wrongword,Missingword,of,Unnecessaryword,高考短文改错的考察方式（格式要规范）,设疑方式错词（8）、漏词（1）、多词（1）,短文改错错误设置规律及改正方法1、冠词错误类型：不定冠词a和an的误用；元音发音开头的单词前应用an修饰，辅音发音开头的单词前用a修饰定冠词the和不定冠词的误用。,例1Besides,afriendisalwaysgoodlistenerwhenyouneedone.例2JustbeforeIturnedcornerofParkStreet,Ihappenedtoseeanaccident.例3Besides,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.,a,the,an,2、名词错误类型：名词单复数错误；名词所有格错误。常考的不可数名词有fun,progress,advice,information,equipment,furniture,news等。,例1givemesomeadvicesonhowtowritelikearealwriter.例2Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool.例3WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelentmelotsofclothes.,advice,friends,friends,3、形容词和副词错误类型：形容词和副词的误用；形容词和副词的比较级和最高级的误用。,例1Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!例2IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.例3becauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.,hard,less,far,例1Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.例2Afterweleft,Isaid,“Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.ButIdidntthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.”“Neitherdidme,”saidMothercheerfully.,4、代词错误类型：人称代词主格和宾格的误用；代词前后指代的误用；不定代词的误用；反身代词的误用。,them,I,5、介词错误类型：多用、少用与误用介词。,例1Fromthenon,wevekepttouchwitheachotherthroughe-mails.例2ImsorrythatIwasntabletoreturntoyourbikeontimeyesterday.例3Twoyearsago,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.,in,动词当堂练,例1Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday.例2Thereexistnowaparkthathasasmallriverrunningthrough.例3ThemarketatthecornerofFriendshipStreetandXinhuaRoadhasbeengivenwaytoasupermarket.,were,exists,6、动词错误类型：动词的时态和语态误用；主谓一致误用。,7、非谓语动词错误类型：不定式符号to的多余与遗漏；to后跟动词原形或动名词的误用；介词后动词形态的误用；现在分词与过去分词的误用。动词与非谓语动词混用错误,例1Ilookforwardtoseeheragaininthenearfuture.例2Afterhearyoursadstories,hewillsaysomewordsthatisniceandwarm.例3IfindthattheneighborhoodwhichIusedtolivinginhaschangedalot.,非谓语动词当堂练,seeing,hearing,live,8、逻辑关系错误类型：否定词特别是not、never等的漏用；连词的多用、少用和误用；定语从句中关系代词和关系副词的误用，特别是which与that的误用；名词性从句中连接词的误用，特别是what和that的误用。,例1AllIhadtodowastowriteastoryorpresentit.例2Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup,thatshedleftontheshelfbymistake.例3Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.,and,which,until/till,Ibelieveinmyself.Ibelievenopains,nogains.IbelieveIcanconquerproofreadingthroughpractice.Ibelievetomorrowwillbebetterandbetter!,Ibelieve,Beingresponsibleisactuallynotthatdifficult.Iusedtothinkitishardtogrowupintoaresponsiblememberofthesociety.AnincidenthappeninginarainySundayafternoonchangedmyattitude.Iwasonmywaytothebookstoreandwaswaitingforthegreenlightwhileagirlwasknockeddownbypassingcar,whichdroveoffquickly.AmanimmediatelygaveherfirstaidandIhadjoinedinwithouthesitation.Soonmanyhelpwasgiventot