good高中英语基础写作―学会用复合句和非谓语动词

,提高句子档次的小结：1.用高级结构和词汇2.用分词短语合并句子用介词短语合并句子用独立主格结构合并句子用连接词连接句子3.用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句4.用不同结构和词汇5.合适的过渡性词汇,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,Kateisanewstudent.Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.Shespeaksadialect.Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.,Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudy,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy,方法2：,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters网络语言：weblanguage,要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容2.两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）：1.学生作文中出现很多错别字2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。,Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositions.,Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,合并句子：,Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,1.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters,第二句:1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。,Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.,2.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,3.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,合并句子：,Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,连接两句话：Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.Moreover,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,1.Iusedtolikereadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.2.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.3.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.,Iusedtobefondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.,Allofasudden,agoodideaoccurredtome.,Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.,Youhavenotrouble/difficultyinfindingmyhouse.,Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty.,一.advancedvocabulary较高级的词汇、短语,4.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.5.Theoldphotomademethinkofmyhappychildhood.,Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.,Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood.,6.Hisinventionwillbegoodforpeoplegreatly.,Hisinventionwill()people.Hisinventionwill()people.Hisinventionwill()people.Peoplewill()hisinvention.Hisinventionwill().Hisinventionwill()people.,beofgreatbenefitto,bringalotofbenefitsto,begreatlybeneficialto,benefitgreatlyfrom,benefitpeoplegreatly,domuchgoodto,1.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.2.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeast.Atthattime,anelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.,二.variedgrammaticalstructure丰富的语法结构,Onhearingthebadnewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.,IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.,3.TheflatisinabuildingonBeijingRoad.ItisnotfarfromourSchool.4.Heissurprisedthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,TheflatisinabuildingonBeijingRoad,whichisnotfarfromourSchool.,Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,5.Wecanachieveourgoalonlyinthisway.6.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.,Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.,Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.,Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened.,7.Theteacherrequiredallthestudentstohandintheircompositionsafterclass.(复合宾语),Allthestudentswererequiredtohandintheircompositionsafterclass.Theteacherrequiredthatallthestudentsshouldhandintheircompositionsafterclass.Itwasrequiredbytheteacherthatallthestudentsshouldhandintheircompositionsafterclass.Theteachersrequirementwasthatallthestudentsshouldhandintheircompositionsafterclass.,（被动语态）,（宾语从句）,（主语从句）,（表语从句）,1.恰当使用关联词,如:but,when，so，if，because，sothat等。,1)Peoplehavefoundmobilephonesveryconvenient_theycangetintouchwitheachotherwheneverandwherevertheylike.2)Thisvillageusedtobeverysmallandpoor_ithaschangedalotsince1978.,because,but,三.properlinkingwordsorsentences使用恰当的连接词,2.巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句如:First,Second,Third,Soon,mostexcitingly,Whatsmore,whatsworse,Asaresult等。,Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere._,theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thebirdsdodowerekilledforfoodonalargenumber._,theydiedoutatlast.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth._,itmaymakeusfat.,Asaresult,Whatsworse,Whatsmore,3.适当使用过渡性语句如:Thereasonsareasfollows.Everycoinhastwosides.AllroadsleadtoRome.Astheresult/surveyshows.Wecandrawanconclusion.等,Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool._.First，mostfamiliesaretoopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool.Second,someparentsthinkthereisnoneedfortheirdaughterstogotoschool.Third,Thereasonsareasfollows,Televisionisnotonlyaconvenientsourceofentertainment,butalsoacomparativelycheapone.But_,televisionalsohasdisadvantages,suchasitseffectsonyoungpeople.,everycoinhastwosides,4.适当使用过渡性语句如:Thereasonsareasfollows.Everycoinhastwosides.AllroadsleadtoRome.Astheresult/surveyshows.Wecandrawanconclusion.等,练习一：众所周知，词汇就像建造大楼的砖块，是语言的重要组成部分。(2010江苏)a.Aseverybodyknows,vocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage,justlikebricksinabuilding.b.Itiswellknownthatvocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage,justlikebricksinabuilding.c.Whatisknowntoallisthatvocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage,justlikebricksinabuilding.,1.鼠标是一个有用的装置。人们用它来和电脑进行对话。(2009江苏)a.Themouseisamosteffectivedevice.Itisusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer.b.Themouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer.(过去分词短语作定语),3我站在讲台上，很窘迫，不知该怎么做。(2009湖南)a.Istoodontheplatform,feelingembarrassedandnotknowingwhattodo.b.Istoodontheplatform,feltembarrassedanddidntknowwhattodo.c.Istoodontheplatform,andIfeltsoembarrassedthatIdidntknowwhattodo.,2我认为，仅仅送给父母贵重的礼物是不对的。(2006江西)a.Idontthinkitgoodonlytoprovideourparentswithexpensivegifts.b.Inmyopinion,itisnotgoodonlytoprovideourparentswithexpensivegifts.c.Weonlyprovideourparentswithexpensivegifts,whichisnotgood.,NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular.ButIthinkthatitsbettertohelpotherpeople.Weknowthatitsimportanttolearntohelpotherpeople.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.Peoplewillhelpyoubecauseyouvehelpedthemandyoullbehappy,Improvethiscomposition,try!,(1)NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.（用where定语从句）(2)Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.（合并句子）(3)Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular（用which定语从句）.(4)But(替换）Ithink（替换）thatitsbettertohelpotherpeople.(5)Weknowthatitsimportanttolearntohelpothers.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.(6)Peoplewillhelpyouinreturnandyoullbehappy（用Foronething,Foranother替换）.,NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.,Usually,apartyisheldwherebestfriendsaswellasrelativescangettogetherandhavefun.,Theyusuallybuyasmallgiftwithwhichtoexpresstheirbestwishes.,Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestoo,whichisbecomingverypopular