高考英语写作之一 如何写好并列句与复合句

写作步步高之一如何写好并列句与复合句在高考英语写作中应避免使用过多结构单一，长度相当的简单句，因为这样会使句子间缺乏逻辑性，文章自然而然地会平淡无奇，缺乏生气，读来使人索然无味。为了增强句子之间的逻辑关联，提高文章表达的流畅性，应合理地使用并列句或复合句。由两个或两个以上不分主次、相互独立的简单句构成的句子叫并列句。并列句通过并列连词、并列副词或分号三种方式连接起来。依据并列句前后分句的逻辑关系，并列句可表示添加关系、转折关系、选择关系、因果关系、时间关系、对比关系，以下为各类并列句的常见并列连词。类型连 词添加关系and, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor, when转折关系but, yet, whereas选择关系or, otherwise; or else, eitheror, notbut因果关系for, so, therefore, thus对比关系while复合句由一个主句和若干个从句构成，主句和从句都具有完整的主谓结构，主句是主体，从句是一个成分，不能独立存在。复合句包括名词性从句(主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句)，定语从句和状语从句。恰当地使用从句可以使句子间逻辑关系紧密，使文章富有变化。及时巩固1以下是在写作中常用的由并列连词构成的句式，请根据汉语提示完成这些句子。Study hard, _ (否则你就考不及格)._(再试一次), and youll make a success.We were about to set off _(这时突然下起雨来了).Youd better put on your sweater, _ (因为外边相当冷).She could neither speak the language _(也不会写).2. 以下是在写作中使用并列句时易出现的错误，请改正它们。Not only he speaks English correctly, but also he speak it fluently. _.Although I was very tired then but I felt very happy. _.Neither could theory do without practice, nor practice could do without theory. _.Because / As he was ill so he didnt go to school that day. _.I finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang. _.3. 请把以下简单句变为并列句或复合句。We are busy all day. Everyone knows that. 并列句：_. 复合句：_.He enjoys playing football. He also likes playing basketball. 一般并列句：_. 倒装并列句：_.He was late. It made me angry. 主语从句：_. 定语从句：_. 简洁简单句：_.The child knew so much. We all are surprised. 主语从句：_. 简洁简单句：_.The 2008 Olympic Games was quite a success. We all know it. 主语从句：_. 定语从句：_. 宾语从句：_.4. 根据写作要求和内容，用适合的连词填入空格处(每空一词)，并背诵该范文。请根据以下提示，结合你与同学交往中的一个事例，就容忍(tolerance)这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Tolerance means respecting others and valuing differences. It matters when you try to gain friendship from othersTolerance is a virtue for everyone. Being tolerant means keeping an open mind _treating others with a heart full of mercyIn fact，I didnt realize the significance of being tolerant _I had a fierce quarrel with my best friend LilyWe had been getting along well with each other, _two weeks ago，Lily misunderstood me for something I didnt know _avoided talking with meI was_angry that I quarrelled with herThus，we separatedI thought she was to blame for thatHaving learned the whole thing, my mother advised me to talk to her first，_neither of us would feel at easeI followed her advice, _now we are as close as beforeI think its being tolerant that has helped me regain our friendship答案：1. or youll fail (in) the exam Another try/Try it another timewhen it suddenly began to rain for its rather cold outside nor write it2. Not only does he speak English correctly, Although I was very tired then, I felt happy.或I was very tired then but I felt very happy.Neither could theory do without practice, nor could practice do without theory.Because /As he was ill, he didnt go to school that day. 或He was ill so he didnt go to school that day.I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang.3. 并列句：We are busy all day and everyone knows that. 复合句：We are busy all day, which everyone knows.或As everyone knows, we are busy all day.一般并列句：He enjoys not only playing football, but also playing basketball. 倒装并列句：Not only does he enjoy playing football, but also he likes playing basketball.主语从句：It made me angry that he was late./That he came late made me angry. 定语从句：He came late, which made me angry. 简洁简单句：His coming late made me angry./ I was angry at his being late.主语从句：It made us surprised that the child should have known so much. 或It came as a surprise to us that the child knew so much. 简洁简单句：Much to our