高中英语写作课课件

,Writing,1002班孙琰,DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？,DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？Content:everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),1)Useproperlinkingwords(使用恰当的连接词）,Howtowriteagoodcomposition？,Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollow._,mostfamiliesaretoopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool._,theyhavenochoicebuttostayathomeandmakemoney.,asaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;However,Tobeginwith,Asaresult,使用恰当的连接词Useproperlinkingwords,_,someparentsthinkthereisnoneedfortheirdaughterstogotoschool.Therefore,theydontletthemgotoschool._,somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudies._,somewouldntliketogotoschool.,Inmyopinion;Finally;Tomakemattersworse;Inaddition,Inaddition,Finally,Tomakemattersworse,AsfarasImconcerned,allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated._,thewholesocietyshouldputgreatemphasisonchildrenseducation_theyllplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountryoneday.,besides;However;because;Therefore,Besides,because,1)Asfaras.isconcerned就而言,2)Manypeopleinsistthat.holdtheopinionthat很多人坚持认为.,Goodbeginningandending,4)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat.,3)Therefore,inmyopinion,itsmoreadvisable.,AvoidChinglish!1)TrafficinShanghaiistoocrowded.2)TherehasahighwayconnectedwithBeijing.3)Thoughthetransportisgood，butitfadesnexttoournaturalresources.4)Iforgotmydictionaryathome.5)Itwillcostusmuchmoneytobuyone.,Language,heavy.,left,is,take,改错,Itbuiltinthe1980s.Inourcity,thepublicorderisbetterthanotherplaces.Buyacellphoneistooexpensive.Thepublicorderisverywell.Atthelast，Ihopeyoucaninvesthere.Letmeintroducethiscityforyou.Thankyouforyoucome.Ithinkyoucanhappy.Tomysurprised,myfatheragreedtobuyone.,thatof,good,to,yourcoming,be,was,Buying,surprise,Language,改错,ImveryhappyIcanwritelettertoyou.Somearenotinterestinlessons.Ithinkeverychildisequality.Becauseoftheirparentsdonthaveenoughmoney.Icankeeptouchwithmyfamily.Someparentsthinkgotoschoolisnotgood.Everychildincludinggirlsshouldhavethechancetoaccepteducation.Therearemanyfamiliesarepoor.Someparentsinvillagethinkthatgirlsarenotimportantaswellasboys.,interested,equal,going,receive,the,in,a,Language,Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns使用较丰富的句式,Whenhearrived,hegavemeane-mailimmediately.(使用V-ing形式)2.Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(过去分词),_,hegavemeane-mailimmediately.,Whenarriving,/Onhisarrival,_,itcanneverbeforgotten.,Onceseen,3.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名词性从句)4.Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(改被动语态),_thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Whatsurpriseshimisthat,_theconferencebeputoff.,Itissuggestedthat,5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)6.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）,_hehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper_heknewwhathadhappened.,_thephysicsexam_yourhelp.,Itwasnotuntilthat,Icouldnthavepassedbutfor,without,7.Iwontbelievewhathesays.(使用状语从句)8.Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(用定语从句),_hesays,Iwontbelieve.,Thegirl_isspokenhighlyof.,Nomatterwhat,whosecompositionwaswellwritten,Whatever,9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10.HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句),_hecomebackfromBeijing_hewassentabroad.,_makerapidprogress.,Studyhard,andyoull,Nosoonerhadthan,Hardly.when.,assess,PleaselearntoYourcompositionwhenyoufinishitfromnow.,书面表达评价表项目自评他评1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?2.句子开头注意大小写了吗?3.有没有注意标点符号?4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段?5有单词拼写错误吗?几个?6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态?7.注意主谓一致了吗?8.有没有语态的错误?9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗?10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种?11.简单句表达正确吗?12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗?14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?,*Goodbeginningandending*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅),*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*Nospellingandgrammaticalmistakes*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),Agoodcomposition,first,firstly,firstofall,tobeginwith,tostartwith,inthefirstplace,一：高中英语中表层次的连接词,second,secondly,whatismore,besides,inaddition,furthermore;moreover,ontheotherhand,finally,eventually,last