高考英语写作公开课PPT课件

.,1,ByWangYinghuiMarch15th,2016,Outlinecompositionwritingtoproofandrationalcloze,.,2,LearningAims,1.Learntowriteanoutlinecomposition.2.Developagoodwritinghabitanalyzeorganizepolish.3.Developtheabilitiestosolvingtheoutlinecompositionwriting,theproofandtherationalcloze.,.,3,Whatisagoodwriting？,Content:*everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),.,4,Howtowriteacomposition,SixstepstowriteacompositionAnalyzingthetaskFindingoutthemainpointsThinkingofkeypoints/phrasesFormingsentencesCombiningthesentencesintoapassageCopyingnormally,.,5,(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。注意:词数100120个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。,.,6,【审题抓准信息快速推断】,书信（给编辑一封信）,一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用,第一人称为主,Step1.Analyzingthetask,“文明出国旅游”,.,7,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。【遣词】1.假日游客:2.出国旅游观光:3.不文明行为:4.引起了社会关注:【造句】Everyyear,agreatmanygoabroad,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthem,which.,Step2.Findingoutthemainpointsandformingsentences,holidaymaker,goabroadforsightseeingandrelaxation,behaverudely,causeabigconcern,holidaymakers,forsightseeingandrelaxation,behaverudely,causesabigconcern,.,8,第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。【点拨】扩充要点,使文章条理【运用】建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗；其次，不高声喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respectandfollowlocalcustoms2.高声喧哗：talkloudlyinpublicplaces3.插队：queuejumping【造句】Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourmanners.First,wemust_,Besides,wedbetter_toavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethat_isunacceptableinmanycountries。,respectandfollowlocalcustoms,nottalkloudlyinpublicplaces,queuejumping,.,9,第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客【点拨】适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。【遣词】1.代表国家形象：representourcountry2.注意：becautiousabout3.只有这样：onlyinthisway【造句】moreimportantly,weshouldbearinmindthatweare_whileabroad,soweneedto_howweact,_canweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.,representingourcountry,becautiousabout,onlyinthisway,.,10,DearEditor,Ivereadyourdiscussionsonhowtobehaveproperlywhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoabroadforsightseeingandrelaxation,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehaverudely,whichcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilizedtouristhasbecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourmanners.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocalcustoms,Besides,wedbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingisunacceptableinmanycountries,moreimportantly,weshouldbearinmindthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,soweneedtobecautiousabouthowweact,onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHua,Step3.Combiningthesentencesintoapassage,【连句成篇】,.,11,【书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错,DearEditor,Ivereadyourdiscussionsonhowtobehaveproperwhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoesabroadforsightseeingandrelax,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehaverudely,thatcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilizedtouristhavebecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourmanner.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocalcustoms;However,wedbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoidingdisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingisunacceptableinmanycountries,moreimportant,weshouldbearinmindthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,butweneedtobecautiousabouthowweact,onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHua,properly,go,relaxation,which,has,manners,Besides,avoid,importantly,so,.,12,DearEditor,Ivereadyourdiscussionsonhow1_behaveproperlywhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoabroadfor2_(sightsee)andrelaxation,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehave3_(rude),whichcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilized4_(tour)hasbecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessary5_(watch)ourmanners.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocal6_(custom）;Besides,wedbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingis7_(unaccept)inmanycountries,moreimportantly,weshouldbear8_mindthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,9_weneedtobecautiousabouthowweact,10_inthiswaycanweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHua,to,sightseeing,rudely,tourist,in,towatch,unacceptable,so,Only,【书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空,customs,.,13,假如你叫李华,你校同学正在就“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”这一主题展开讨论,请根据下面所给的信息,给某英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况,并谈谈你的看法。,注意：1.词数100左右；2.内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯；3.书写须清晰、工整。参考词汇：体育锻炼physicalexercise,Writingpractice,.,14,【审题抓准信息快速推断】,书信（给英文报社一封信）,“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”,一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用,第一人称为主,.,15,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第1段：点明话题高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼【引入6分】【信息】我给你写信谈谈在我们学校的一个热点话题,那就是,高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼。【遣词造句】普通表达:Iwilltellyouaboutadiscussion.ShouldstudentsofSenior3takephysicalexercise?高级表达:利用进行时态、非谓语动词、连接短语等。Im_youabouta_discussionamongusstudentsinourschool,_,whetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.,writingtotell,heated,thatis,.,16,第2段：提出一种观点并具体阐述理由【作文重点12】【信息】有55%的同学赞成参加体育锻炼。【运用】55%的同学认为我们应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。【遣词造句】普通表达:55%ofthestudentsthinkthatweshouldtakephysicalexerciseeveryday.Weshoulddomorningexercise.Weshouldplaytabletennisorbasketball.高级表达:利用同位语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等。55%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatweshould_everyday,suchas,_,playingtabletennisorbasketball.,takephysicalexercise,doingmorningexercise,.,17,【信息】赞成的同学认为参加体育锻炼有很多好处。【运用2】锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病。锻炼能使大脑得到休息；使学习效果更好。【遣词造句】普通表达：Itcanbuildourbody.Itcanreduceillnesses.Itcanmakeushavearest.Wewillhaveabetterlearningeffect.高级表达：利用并列句、非谓语动词和高级词汇等。Itcanbuild_illnesses,_(同时),itcan_(makesbadj)abetterlearningeffect.,andinthemeanwhile,makeusrelaxedfor,ourbodyandreduce,.,18,第3段：提出另一种观点，并具体阐述理由【信息】：锻炼浪费时间。【运用2】：45%学生持反对意见，他们认为锻炼浪费时间。【遣词造句】普通表达：However，45%ofthestudentsdontsupportthat.Theythinkthattheyshouldnottakephysicalexercise.Itisawasteoftime.高级表达:利用定语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等However,45%ofthestudentsareagainstthat，_complainthat_isawasteoftime.,who,takingphysicalexercise,.,19,第4段：表明自己的倾向，阐述理由【信息】:适度锻炼。【运用】:我认为适度锻炼是必要的,但是不能太剧烈.【遣词造句】普通表达：Ithinkthatproperphysicalexerciseisnecessary.Butweshouldnevertakeexercisetoohard.高级表达：利用宾语从句、高级词汇等。I_thinkthatproperphysicalexerciseisnecessarybut_.,personally,nevertoohard,.,20,Deareditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutaheateddiscussionamongusstudentsinourschool,thatis,whetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.55%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatweshouldtakephysicalexerciseeveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercise,playingtabletennisorbasketball,etc.Itcanbuildourbody,keepushealthyandreduceillnessesandinthemeanwhileitcanmakeuscompletelyrelaxedforabetterlearningeffect.However,45%ofthestudentsareagainstthat,whocomplainthattakingphysicalexerciseisawasteoftime.Itcanmakeustiredorfeeltooexcitedforfurtherlearning.Moreoverwemaygethurtduringtheplay.Ipersonallythinkthatproperphysicalexerciseisnecessarybutnevertoohard.yourssincerelyLiHua,【连句成篇】,.,21,【书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错,Deareditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutaheatingdiscussionamongourstudentsinourschool,thatis,whetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.55%ofthestudentsholdtheviewwhichweshouldtakephysicalexerciseeveryday,suchasdomorningexercise,playingthetabletennisorbasketball,etc.Itcanbuildourbody,keepushealthandreduceillnessesandthemeanwhileitcanmakeuscompletelyrelaxedforabetterlearningeffect.Therefore,45%ofthestudentsareagainstthat,whocomplainthattakingphysicalexerciseisawasteoftime.Itcanmakeustiredandfeeltooexcitedforfurtherlearning.Moreoverwemaygethurtduringtheplay.Ipersonallythinkthatproperphysicalexerciseisnecessarybutnevertoohard.yourssincerelyLiHua,heated,us,exercise,that,doing,healthy,However,or,in,.,22,书面表达-短文改错-新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空,Deareditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutaheateddiscussion1._usstudentsinourschool,thatis,whetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtake2_(physics)exercise.55%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatweshould3._(take)physicalexerciseeveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercise,playingtabletennis4._basketball,etc.Itcanbui