书面表达专项突破13.慰问信

13.慰问信,文体概述慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞；要围绕一个中心，鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情进行安慰和帮助鼓励其努力再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。,常用语块很抱歉/震惊得知_2.听到我深感难过_3.请接受我最深切的慰问_4.我想送你我最美好的祝愿_5.我无法相信_,Icouldntbelievethat,Iwassosorry/shockedtolearnofthenewsthat,Iamdeeplysorrytohearthat/IjustcanttellyouhowsorryIamtohearthat,Pleaseacceptmydeepestsympathy,Iwanttosendyoumybestwishesfor,6.对表示同情_7.我们充满了_8.请转达我对的同情_9.最好的祝愿_10.我们都希望_,have/showsympathyfor,Wearefilledwith,Pleaseconveymysympathyto,Bestwishesfor,Weareallhoping,11.我相信你会成功_12.取得完全康复_13.出院_14.我祝愿你快速康复_15.渡过难关_,gothroughthedifficulty,Iamsureyouwillsucceedin,makeafullrecovery,leavethehospital/bedischargedfromthehospital,Iwishyouswift/quick/speedyrecovery,套用句式听说火灾毁了你漂亮的住宅，我难过极了。2.我们感到很悲痛。,1.Iwassosorrytohearofthefirethatdestroyedyourbeautifulhouse.,2.Wearefilledwithdeepsorrow.,3.请转达我向你家人的慰问。4.祝你很快康复。5.大家都希望你早日归来。,3.Pleaseconveymysympathytoyourfamily.,4.Bestwishesforyourspeedyrecovery.,5.Weareallhopingyouwillbebacksoon.,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearJohn,Iamshockingtohearthatyouhaveseverefluandnowareinhospital.Igetthisnewsfromyourmotherandknewyoumustbeabsentforhalfamonthattheclasses.Doarecarefulwhileyouareill.DontworryaboutyourlessonandIamwillingtohelpyoulearnfromthemwhenyoureturn.,shocked,know,from,be,lessons,WearebestfriendssoIwillneverallowyoutofallbehind.Youcanwatchtelevisionorlistentoradioprogramstohelppassthetimebutforgetyourpainswhileyourecover.IdidhopethatIcanseeyousoonandbringyouanyfunnycartoons.Yourstruly,LiHua,and,some,do,1.shockingshocked主语是人，要用shocked。2.在severeflu前加a因为flu是可数名词。3.knewknow要与并列谓语get时态保持一致。4.atfrom固定搭配beabsentfrom意为“缺席”。5.arebe祈使句，故要用be。,6.lessonlessons根据后面的them可知要用复数。7.去掉them前的from根据文意可知，此处是指“帮助你学习功课”，而不是“向功课学习”。8.butand此处显然是“顺承”关系，而非“转折”关系。9.diddo全文主体时态是一般现在时。10.anysome肯定句要用some。,课堂练习假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡10月4日遭受台风“彩虹(TyphoonMujigae)”袭击，洪水毁坏了家园，你作为班长给正在抗洪的他写一封慰问信，要点如下：1.对该同学表示关心。2.向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和补习。3.表达希望和对其重建家园的信心。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearWangGang,WeresosorrytohearthatahorribleandsevereTyphoonMujigaehityourhometownandyourhouseisinruins.Werefilledwithdeepsorrow.Pleaseconveymysympathytoyourfamily.Thinkingaboutyourpresentsituation,wecannotwaitaminutetomakeeverybitofourefforttohelpyou.I,asamonitor,onbehalfofourclass,expressourmostsincerepityandcareforyou.,Besides,wemakeadonationofsomemoney,expectingthatitcanhelpyougothroughthedifficulty.Webelievethatwiththehelpofsomanykindpeople,abetterhousecanberebuilt.Finally,wereallhopingyoullbebacksoonandwewillmakeupthelessonsforyou.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua,课外作业假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音(TheVoiceofChina)比赛，没有进入决赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点如下：1.表示难过和理解。2.失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故。3.勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearLiMing,IamdeeplysadtohearthatyoucouldnotenterthefinalsofTheVoiceofChinaofthisyear.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow.Youhavebeendoingwellandyourfailureisnotyourownfault,Iamsure.However,asweknow,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Idohopeyouwontloseheartandwillgetreadytotryagain.,Stillyouhavemanymorec