读后续写指导讲义

Step3:Prediction,课后续写（25分）提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容：1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4.上下文的连贯性。,Step3:Prediction,评分原则：1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。21-25,16-20,11-15,6-10,1-5,02.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次,Step3:Prediction,STEPS:1.通读全文，把握文本的脉络和串起文本的关键词，在此基础上确定故事情节发展的方向。2.判断划线的关键词语与主题内容的关联程度，然后确定要选用的词语，以及所在的段落位置（1,2）。如果是意林体的文章，还要考虑取舍表达message的句子。3.阅读每一段中的首句，进行布局、解读。在布局第一段的内容时，要兼顾两段的首句：第二段的首句决定着第一段的走向。Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.,Step3:Prediction,STEPS:4.在解读首句时，可以采用Given-New策略。Thenonebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.onebyone+lateatnight-cantwaittomake.changehismind,see,Whydidtheygothere?,Whatdidtheysee/dothere?,Whatstheturningpoint?,effect,Step3:Prediction,STEPS:4.在解读首句时，可以采用Given-New策略。Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.attract-focusofattention,attention,Whoseattention?,Focusonwhat?,Whatstheturningpoint?,effect/result/ending,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度(内容+逻辑）4.上下文的连贯性。Thenonebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.Thenextday,differentpeoplemadetheirhousedifferent.Forexample,Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Drivenbycuriositymanyjournalistscameandasked“Whathaveyoudonetoyourhouses”Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Drivenbycuriosity,manyjournalistscameandasked,“Whathaveyoudonetoyourhouses?”,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度4.上下文的连贯性。Whichonedoyoufavor?-therefore,besides/plus/additionally/furthermore,however,onthecontrary,-Luckily/fortunately,unexpectedly,surprisingly,happilyforhim,Inspiredby,Outofcuriosity/Drivenbycuriosity,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；丰富性：关注故事情节的跌宕起伏Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Wheneverastrangercametothestreet,hewouldsay,“Thisisnotaneatstreet.”Theyfeltpuzzledaboutwhatthepeoplehaddonetotheirhouses.Thenallthepeoplewouldsay,“Ourstreetisusandweareit.Ourstreetiswhereweliketobe,anditlookslikeallourdreams.”,updown-up,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlongandwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmonthslater,everybodyshouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.,Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theydrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlong.,Andanyonewhohadvisitedthehousesetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreamsthenextday.,Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.,Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theydranklemonadeandtalkedabouttheirdreamsallnightlong.Andanyonewhohadvisitedthehousesetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreamsthenextday.Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmonthslater,everybodyshouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlongandwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmonthslater,everybodyshouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.,Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theyweretreatedtolemonadeandsharedtheirlong-lostdreamsallnightlong.,Thenextday,InspiredbyMr.Plumbean,anyonewhohadvisitedthehousechangedhismindandstartedtopainthisownhouse,basedonhisdream.,Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouseandlettheirdreamsfly.,Severalmonthslater,withsomanyamazinghousesliningthestreet,ittookonanewlook,asifbymagic.,Step3:Prediction,Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlongandwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmonthslater,everybodyshouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.,Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theyweretreatedtolemonadeandsharedtheirlong-lostdreamsallnightlong.Thenextday,InspiredbyMr.Plumbean,anyonewhohadvisitedthehousechangedhismindandstartedtopainthisownhouse,basedonhisdream.Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouseandlettheirdreamsfly.Severalmonthslater,withsomanyamazinghousesliningthestreet,thestreettookonanewlook,asifbymagic.(83words)nowonderthestreetbecamea,长短句交错,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；,verygood-amazinglygoodbadlyill-criticallyillworkhardat-applyoneselfto,Step3:Prediction,5.Polishthestyle.3.两段相对平衡4.不可滥用直接引语5.字数严格控制110-150,Step3:Prediction,Thenonebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlongandwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaywouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmonthslater,everybodyshouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.,Step3:Prediction,Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Wheneverastrangercametothestreet,hewouldsay,“Thisisnotaneatstreet.”Theyfeltpuzzledaboutwhatthepeoplehaddonetotheirhouses.Thenallthepeoplewouldsay,“Ourstreetisusandweareit.Ourstreetiswhereweliketobe,anditlookslikeallourdreams.”Allofthemfeltproudoftheirstreetandtheyledahappylife.,Step3:Prediction,确定主旨大意，明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下，在大脑思维中建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括，在此基础上，继续建立顺序思维，确定接下来在理解前文的基础上如何安排下面继续可能或者应该出现的内容，续写部分内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用，语言的润色等，更重要的是，你要明白你应该如何调理续写内容，以使得其和前文形成统一连贯的能够表述完整信息的表达内容。续写是读和写的统一，之间穿插了对阅读能力，概括能力，思维转化能力，语言领悟能力，语言组织能力的考查。续写对于前文文本的选择