非谓语动词的写作运用

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用,高考非谓语动词回顾1.(全国)Thechildrenallturnedback_(look)atthefamousactressassheenteredtheclassroom.2.(北京)Forbreakfastheonlydrinksjuicefromfreshfruit_(grow)onhisownfarm.3.(上海)Asmallplanecrashedintoahillsidefivemileseastofthecity，_(kill)allfourpeopleonboard.4.Yourcompositionisgoodbutyourhandwritingstillrequires_(improve).5.(福建)Shereturnedhomefromtheoffice，only_(find)thedooropenandsomethingmissing.,tolook,tofind,killing,improving,grown,山坡,佳句赏析:,_(为了)protectourforests,Iwillusepaperwisely._(do)allthesesmallthingswillimproveourenvironment,_(make)ourworldabetterplacetolivein.,1)08四川卷你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。,Inoderto/Inabidto,Doing,making,佳句赏析I:,Whichmakes,2)07湖北假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学样经常举办联谊活动.你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，.向老人赠送礼物（鲜花、自制贺卡）；Wehaveplannedseveralactivities.Whenwegetthere，wewillvisittheelderlyintheirroomsingroups，_(给他们赠送鲜花)andselfmadecardstoshowourrespectandlove.,presentingthemwithflowers,佳句赏析I:,3)08湖北1问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换Itwasimpossibletofixitwithouttherightspareparts._(听到这样，我很绝望）,佳句赏析I:,Iwassodesperateonhearingthat.,大练习5邀请信1）讲座时间和地点3）约定见面事宜IwillbetherewaitingforyouinawhiteT-shirt,makingiteasierforyoutorecognizeme.,佳句赏析II:,17全国卷（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。AsTangpoetrystandsfortheessenceofChineseculture,tofitinwell,youdbettermakepreparationsbyhavingsomeacquaintancewiththebriefhistoryofTangDynasty,thusyoucanunderstandthepoemsintermsofitsbackground.,佳句赏析II:,大练习2邀请信Theconcert,scheduledtobeheldontheplaygroundnextFriday,isaimedatraisingmoneytohelpastudentcalledLiMingwhoissufferingfromaseriousillnessandcantaffordthecost.（byoneofyou),佳句赏析II,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致,1.Studyingalone,hisattentionisconcentratedonhislessons.,1.Studyingalone,heconcentratehisattentiononhislessons.,2、用动词原形充当主语,2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.,Inmyopinion,climbingmountainisanenjoyablething.,3、句中有两个谓语,3.Therearealotofstudentsplaysportsontheplayground.,Therearealotofstudentsplayingsportsontheplayground.,4、主动、被动含义混淆,4.Themancalledhimselfthesupercookisgoodatcooking.,Themancallinghimselfthesupercookisgoodatcooking.,用非谓语结构美化句子,1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。Becauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.2.发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发他们的兴趣。Theteacherfoundstudentssleepyintheafternoonanddideverythinghecouldtoarousetheirinterest.3.惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.4由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasbeengreatlyimproved.,用非谓语结构美化句子,1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。Becauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.,2.发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发他们的兴趣。Theteacherfoundstudentssleepyintheafternoonanddideverythinghecouldtoarousetheirinterest.用非谓语结构Findingstudentssleepyintheafternoon,theteacherdideverythinghecouldtoarousetheirinterest.,3惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.用非谓语结构Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.,4由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。因为我的英语进步很大，我确信我能考上更好的大学。Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,ImsureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.用非谓语结构Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasbeengreatlyimproved.,北京市有大量的出租车司机，他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务，对北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。他们起早贪黑，赚钱养家糊口。有一次，我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上，但当我和司机同志联系上之后，他立即开车把手机送到了我的家门口，让我感动不已。,实战演练：运用非谓语动词写短文,TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies,theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiIto