2014高考英语二轮领航夺分专题复习课件书面表达开放作文湖北专版，含2013调研、真题

开放作文,不同于情景作文，(半)开放性作文属于非限制性作文，即试题中不给出详细的材料、图画、图表或其他提示内容等，而是要求考生根据所给的试题，展开联想，自由发挥，正确表达。同时，开放性作文没有标准答案，老师评卷不是根据考生所选观点是否正确进行评定，而是根据考生的表达水平给分的。,由于开放性作文一般没有提示和要点的限制，从而更好地考查了考生对英语语言的综合运用能力及考生的想象力和创造力，因此，这种题型也越来越受到高考命题人的青睐。原来只有北京一个地区使用开放性作文，慢慢地湖南、湖北、安徽、福建、江苏、江西等一些省份也相继采用了开放性作文或半开放性作文这种命题形式。,一、试题特征1命题式开放性作文，即给出作文题目，要求考生根据对作文题目的分析、理解，自由发挥。命题式开放性作文不像图片式开放性作文那样受到内容或文章体裁方面的限制，命题式开放性作文根据内容要求可以是记叙文、议论文、说明文，也可以是应用文等。,2图片式开放性作文，即给出一幅图片，要求考生根据图片内容及对图片的理解，写出英语作文。图片式一般有两种情况，一是事件或事故发生的图片，二是夸张式的寓意图。对于事件或事故发生的图片，一般采用记叙文文体；而对于寓意式的图片，一般采用议论文文体。根据不同内容的图片，考生可以套用不同的写作模式。3以湖北为代表的命题形式：不给出具体事例及提示的半开放性作文。,二、写作步骤开放性作文没有要点提示。面对一幅抽象的图画或一个标题，考生往往感到茫然，不知所措。为此，建议考生在写作时从以下几个方面入手：1虚拟目标，有的放矢首先，虚拟读者对象，以便具体地告诉读者某话题；然后，列出要点，写出提纲，从而变抽象为具体，使开放性作文成为限制性作文。,2理解题意，联系生活开放性作文的形式可分为图片式或命题式。对于图片式开放性作文，考生必须首先准确描述画面内容；其次，对图片的寓意深层解读；最后，结合生活实际进行联想，发表自己的看法，或给人们提出警示或建议。对于命题式开放性作文，首先必须准确理解题目意思，抓住标题中的关键词；其次，确定文章体裁，结合生活实际组织材料。,3确立主题，列出提纲不论是图片式开放性作文，还是命题式开放性作文，都要注意以下几点：一是审题，包括题目或图片的内容、命题老师的目的或意图、写作时需要使用的文章体裁等；二是定文章的主题、结构、层次；三是列出要点和提纲，即哪些东西需要写，哪些东西不需要写，做到心中有数；四是文章中所用的人称、时态、语态；五是文章所需要的词汇、短语、句型等。这就为后面的写作做好了充分的准备。,4根据体裁，快速写作不同的体裁，写作的方法和思路也不一样。考生要运用平时所了解到的文体特点，结合提纲，将文章要点组织起来，以便迅速写出文章。记叙文，通常第一段用一两句话交代事情发生的时间、地点、原因等，第二段叙述事情发生和发展的经过，第三段是事情发生的影响及人们对此的评价或看法。说明文，通常第一段用一两句话点出说明对象，第二段按照时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序进行讲解或介绍，第三段提出想法或建议。议论文，通常第一段用一两句话提出论点，第二段从正反两方面进行论证，第三段通过对上述第二段的分析，总结得出结论。应用文，首先注意应用文的格式，其次表达清楚所要讲的事情；最后要注意语言措辞及礼节等。,三、注意事项1认真审题，即审语境、审人称、审时态。2.要紧扣主题，首尾呼应。3注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识。4要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。5要有主次之分，详略得当。6必须符合逻辑。7要做到思想健康，积极向上。8内容新颖。新颖的内容能够充分体现考生的创造力，这正好符合新课标所提倡的素质教育的要求。,四、常用句式1The picture presents to us that.这幅画向我们展示了2As is seen in the picture./We can see from the picture that.从这幅图画中我们可以看到 3So it is a better choice to.因此是更好的选择。4On one hand，I dont think it is right to.一方面，我认为是不正确的。,5Therefore，when we.，it is wise to.因此，当我们时，是很明智的。6I think that this picture tries to tell us.我想这幅图是想告诉我们7I sincerely hope that.我真诚地希望8We must learn to.我们必须学会,写作题目(2013湖北卷)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”，but we should also be aware that words can hurt people，too.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。,写作策略一、“三准”确保作文上及格线这是一篇开放性作文。体现其特点的句型有：开始句(扣题介绍自己在语言方面的优势),My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.同位非常羡慕我流利的英语，我通常被他的话所鼓励。尾段(点明感悟，紧扣主题)We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.说话时，如果我们不能激励他人，我们应该避免伤害他人。,人称要对：第一人称时态要准：时态需要两种，举例部分用一般过去时，而总结反思和感想部分应该用一般现在时。要点要全：一个典型的事例。总结和感想。,核心词汇：羡慕我流利的英语：admire my fluent English造句：make a sentence突然笑起来：burst into langhter/out laughing辍学：drop out of school深深伤某人的心：hurt sb.deeply避免做某事：avoid doing sth.,要点一：My deskmate admires my fluent English very much.我同位非常羡慕我流利的英语。要点二：I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.他的话使我深受鼓励。要点三：One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.一天，我们在课上学习新单词“eccentric”，老师让我们用这个词造句。,要点四：I volunteered to do it.I said，“My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.”我自愿造句，说：“我同位是一个古怪的男孩，他的衣服穿着从不得体。”要点五：Hearing this，the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates face turned red.一听到这，全班同学突然笑起来，我同位的脸变红了。,要点六：After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate wanted to drop out of school，but we helped him.课后，我从老师那里得知，我同位想辍学，但是我们帮助了他。要点七：My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.我无意的话一定深深地伤害了他。,要点八：I didnt realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.直到那时我才意识到话语既有积极的方面也有消极的方面。要点九：We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.说话时，如果我们不能激励他人，我们应该避免伤害他人。,二、“四美”走出平庸创高分升级句式一：把要点四改为v.ing作状语。I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.”,升级句式二：用if引导虚拟语气改写句式六。After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others.升级句式三：用倒装句式升级句式八Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.,要点一句式之间存在并列关系，故可以用and连接句式。要点八、九之间有因果关系，故可以用过渡词语therefore连接。,第一段：点明自己英语语言优秀。第二段：一个典型事例。第三段：总结和感想。,My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.,One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.I volunteered to do it by saying“My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this，the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates face turned red.After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others.My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.Therefore we should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.,Test 1(2013湖北七市4月联考)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。We can go as far as we think.The great minds，more often than not，think more and have more aggressive ideas of their life than ordinary people.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】What we think is our direction and a goal of advancement.It guides us and makes us know what we really want and where we go.Then we spare our efforts to take active steps to make our dreams come true.,For example，Thomas Edison had a dream.He dreamed of a lamp that could be operated by electricity，and began where he stood to put his dream into action.Despite more than ten thousand failures，he stood by that dream until he made it a physical reality！And today，his dream lights up the world at night.We think.We choose.And as we think and choose，so are our lives formed.In the end，forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.,Test 2(2013湖北省鄂西示范校高中毕业班质量检查)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。Things that bring us pain make us grow.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】Growing up is not a very enjoyable time.It means we have to work hard.As for my childhood，my parents made me learn to play the violin so I had no time to play with other friends.I was very annoyed.I hated music，just because it was what they wanted me to do.Sometimes I felt puzzled and trapped.I even didnt understand why I was a child.,Now looking back，I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons.Music can enrich my life.I come to realize my parents are always pushing me along.Everybody is to experience growing pains，which are just small pains in life.A little hard work and sweat never hurt us.If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our road to success，we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.,Test 3(2013湖北省十堰市两校高三4月联考)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。The ability to focus ones attention is the key to success in doing anything.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】A person who is easily distracted by the surroundings will feel restless，unable to achieve his success.This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student.I was so excited to find that there were various student organizations and afterclass activities intended for us students.It seemed that many of them were suitable for me.During the first term，I was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it.As a result，I didnt spend enough time on my studies，nor could I settle down to my homework every day. Consequently，I failed an important exam.,I have learned a lesson from this experience that one should focus on one thing at a time before he can get it well done，which is especially important for a Senior Three student.Therefore，I intend to set a clear goal for myself first and then focus all my attention on it.I have been fully aware that only when I have a concentrated mind can I achieve my success in the end.,Test 4(2013湖北省武汉市武昌区高三年级联合考试)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。Difficulties arise in the lives of us all.What is most important is dealing with the hard times，coping with the changes，and getting through to the other side where the sun is still shining just for you.,注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】There is no denying that difficulties cannot be completely avoided in our lives.But what really counts is how we deal with them.,Three years ago，when I began my senior high school study，I found it extremely difficult to learn English well because there were so many new words and grammar rules to keep in mind.Hard as I might try，I still did poorly in the English exams.It was the hardest time in my life and I nearly lost heart and decided to give up when my mother found my problem.She encouraged me that it took a person a lot to deal with tough times and if I chose to keep on，I would be a strong person and on the way to success.In order to prove myself，I studied even harder than ever.Gradually I began to catch up with other students in my class.At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English.,So if we want to meet the shinning sun on the other side of the difficulties，we should first have the courage to overcome them and then enjoy the joy of success.,Test 5(2013湖北省武汉名校高三第二次调研测试)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。You will never change your life until you change something you do daily.The secret of your success is found in your daily routine.,注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】As the proverb goes，“Good habits benefit you all your life.” Indeed，a good habit is to me what water is to fish.Entering the high school，I took delight in having fast food and ate too much.Consequently，I was so heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance.,What made matters worse was the fact that my classmates played jokes on me at times.From then on，I made up my mind to avoid snacks and meanwhile to take up jogging to lose weight.Owing to the timely changes，it was not long before I did succeed in creating my new image.Only then did I start to appreciate the significance of forming a good habit.To be honest，the change in my habit means a lot to me，which contributes to my success as well as helps me regain confidence.,注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people，especially among youngsters._ _,【参考范文】In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people，especially among youngsters.Five years ago，several of my classmates and I once served as volunteers for the Beijing Olympic Games.In that period of time，I helped arrange for the sports courts，translate for foreign athletes and visitors，and sometimes guide them to right places.It delighted me a lot that I had made a contribution to the success of the Games and brought happiness to others.,As high school students, we should get actively involved in voluntary activities.In this way，we can learn how to work well in a team，how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability.Above all，we can benefit others and gain happiness ourselves.So we should take this chance to learn and to grow.,Test 7(2013湖北省八校高三第二次联考)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。For every individual，different seasons have different meaning for them.Which is your favorite season？Write down your favorite season and its meaning for you.,注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】My favorite season is autumn，a time of clearness and hope.After each long night，I am not exceptionally greeted with the clear sky，the amiable sunshine and the sparkling yellowness in this amazing season.Those fallen leaves seem naturally to invoke memories.,I was born in autumn.A number of autumns have seen my growth，happiness and sadness as well.No matter how bad the previous months were, I possess a new beginning and have the opportunity to make good use of what I failed to achieve yesterday and I have every reason to expect a more promising tomorrow since this season on.It is the season that never ceases to remind me of new beginnings of my different stages.It has the power and strength to bring contentment，love，hope and joy into my life.,Test 8(2013春季湖北省宜昌三校高三年级三月联考)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。Telling lies is what we are taught not to do，but in some cases，telling lies seems to be what we have to do.,注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。,【参考范文】With great importance attached to honesty，children are taught not to tell lies.However，there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.My best friend Li Hua used to be rather poor in English，especially his terrible and strange pronunciation.Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English.Bearing a heavy load in mind，he felt desperate and upset.He dared not speak English in class.When asked questions by our English teacher，he was always nervous and embarrassed.,The classmates always made fun of him，saying that he was speaking Japanese！Once I met him in the corridor and though