写作技巧讲解.ppt

1,SkillsinCompositions,-complexstructuresandadvancedexpressions,2,写作的评分标准：第五档（2530分）：很好地完成了试题规定的任务。*对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述,清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。*语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。*语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。*有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,3,Howtowriteagoodcomposition,实战演练,4,一、学会使用丰富的句式,“既求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判的依据，所以要讲究句式结构的变化，避免单调、呆板和千篇一律的句子，尽量多使用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。,5,使用分词,Onceitisheld,itwillbringalotofchancestoBeijingandmakeitmoreprosperousandmodern.,Onceheld,itwillbringalotofchancestoBeijing,makingitmoreprosperousandmodern.,Facedwiththeenvironmentalproblemstobesolved,somepeopledontapproveofit.,Weighingtheadvantagesanddisadvantages,weshouldwelcometheOlympicGames.,6,使用定语从句,Manypollutionproblemscanbemoreserious,anditcaneventuallydodamagetooursurroundings.,Manypollutionproblemscanbemoreserious,whichcaneventuallydodamagetooursurroundings.,MorevisitorsfromallovertheworldwillfloodintoChina,whichfinanciallybenefitBeijing.,Whatsmore,morepeoplewillbeattractedtoBeijing,whichwillcontributetothedevelopmentoftourismtoagreatextent.,7,使用with结构,Whenthenumberoftouristsisincreasing,trafficwillbecomemorecrowded.,Withthenumberoftouristsincreasing,trafficwillbecomemorecrowded.,WithmoreandmorevisitorsgoingtoBeijing,tourismwillbeflourishing.,Witheveryonedoinghisbit,thegamewillbeagreatsuccess.,8,使用被动句,Measuresshouldbetakentoavoidthebadeffectmentionedabove.,OnlyinthiswaycanweholdasuccessfulOlympicGames.,使用倒装结构,9,二、学会使用较高级词汇,用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得高分。,10,Howtouseadvancedexpressions,Inmyopinion,itisdifficulttoholdtheOlympics.,Inmyopinion,itischallengingtoholdtheOlympics.,ItwillhaveagreateffectonthedevelopmentofBeijing.,far-reachingprofoundsignificant,11,Inaword,theOlympicGameswillmakeBeijingmorebeautiful.,fascinating,Inthelongrun,hostingtheOlympicswillplayanecessarypartinprosperingeconomyaswellasboomingtourism.,anindispensable,TheadvantagesoftheGameisoverheavierthanitsdisadvantages.,outweigh,12,Tourismisbecomingaboomingindustrywiththedevelopmentofthecity.,Chinawillenjoyaboomineconomy.,促进繁荣经济旅游发展,Somestudentsseeitasagoodopportunitytoboosteconomyandacceleratethepaceoftheconstructionofourmodernsociety.,HoldingtheOlympicGameswillpromotethedevelopmentofeconomy,makingthecitymoreboomingandmodern.,13,“中国位于太平洋西岸，地大物博，历史悠久，面积960万平方公里”。,ChinaliesonthewestbankofthePacificOcean.Itisverybigandhasalotofthings.Itshistoryisverylong,anditsareais9.6millionsquarekilometers.,Practicetochallengeyourself,14,China,whichliesonthewestofthePacificOcean,isrichinnaturalresources.Itisagreatcountrywithalonghistory,coveringanareaof9.6millionsquarekilometers.,China,alargecountrywithalonghistory,liesonthewestofthePacificOcean.Itisabundantinnaturalresources,coveringanareaof9.6millionsquarekilometers.,15,Replacetheunderlinedexpressions,Amongallthepeoplegoingtowork,cardriversmakeup18%.2.TheInternetcanhelpusfinishmanytasks.3.Thelibraryisimportanttous.4.Onecanonlybecomeaskilledoneaftermanyfailures.5.Lastyearsawamoreandmorefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.6.Hetriedtopasstheexam,butfailed.,complete,accomplish,fulfill,vital,essential,endless,countless,numerous,witnessed,attemptedto,amountto,accountfor,getthrough,16,7.Somestudentsdontvaluetheirmoneyatall.,8.Itisalsoessentialthatyougetsomeskillsfortakingexams.,treasure,cherish,acquire,obtain,gain,9.Itwouldtakemeagreatdealoftime,whichwouldsurelyinvitenumerousinconveniencestome.,undoubtedly,unquestionably,10.Moreandmorepeoplecometobigcities,whichcausesserioushousingproblems.,floodinto,crowdinto,pourinto,definitely,17,ACampaignSpeech,ImsureIwellsatisfytheconditionsforworkingaschairman.Sinceseniormiddleschool,Ivebeenservingasmonitorofmyclass,whichhasofferedmeinvaluableexperience.Moreimportantly,myjobhasalwaysbeensunghighpraiseofbybothmyclassmatesandteachers,whichhasfullyprovedmystrongcapabilityofbeingastudentleader.Asfarasmycharacterisconcerned,Imoptimistic,enthusiastic,18,easygoingandalwaysreadytoofferhelp.Inaddition,Ienjoyavarietyofhobbies,rangingfromliteraturetosports.AlloftheabovedemonstratesthatIcanbeaqualifiedandcompetentchairman.IfIwereelected,Iwouldtryeverymeanstocopewithwhateverproblemwemightencounter.Moreover,takingallourinterestsintoconsideration,Iwouldorganizediverseactivitiessoastoenrichouruniversitylifeaswellasimprove,19,ourabilityinacomprehensiveway.Tosumup,Iwoulddevotemyselftoservingyouaswellaspossibleandtryingtodevelopeveryonespotential.Ifyoubelieveinme,pleasecastyourvoteforme.Thankyouforyoursupport.,20,precious,various,diverse,reveal,indicate,comeacross,priceless,ability,different,dealwith,meetwith,show,able,valuble,runinto,talent,21,Assignment,假如你是一名大学生，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有己见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。,22,Deareditor,Imwritingtoyoutotalkabouttakingupoccupationsforcollegegraduates.Nowadaysmanygraduatesarelookingforwardtoobtainingemploymentinbigcities,notwillingtoworkinthecountryside.Asamatteroffact,therearenotenoug,23,opportunitiestosatisfymostofthehuntersinbigcitieswhileinthecountryside,