高考英语作文评分标准详细解答

高考英语作文评分标准详细解答 xx高考英语作文预测汇总 xx高考英语作文常用加分句型汇总 一、 如何理解“应用了较多的词汇” 这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解： (一) 高级词汇的使用 评分标准第五档次的要求中提到，“词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。这里所说的“高级词汇”，指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等词，都可以算作是“高级词汇”。考生若能够适当地运用一些高级词汇，定会给评卷老师留下深刻的印象。 1. I cant find any way to solve the problem. (换作高级词汇：I cant find any solution to the problem.) 2. The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes her. (换作高级词汇：The pet dog is so cute that almost everybody likes her.) 3. The question is really difficult to understand. (换作高级词汇：The question is really confusing.) 4. He had to face all the possible difficulties. (换作高级词汇：He had to cope with all the possible difficulties) (二) 同义词的使用 英语中有些词的使用频率非常高，比如interesting, clever等，在表达时大家都很喜欢用，这样很容易令文章入千人一面的窘境中。但如果我们能够使用它们相应的同义词，就可以做到与众不同，给评卷者带来清新的感觉。例如： 1. It will be very interesting. (换作同义词：It will be a lot of fun.) 2. He was so clever that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.( 换作同义词：He was so smart that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.) 3. Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents. (换作同义词：Last summer I toured New Jersey with my parents.) (三) 适当利用短语取代单词 总体而言，使用短语的难度比单词要大一些，因此适当运用短语更能显出作者的功力。例如： 1. Suddenly I had a good idea. (换作短语：Suddenly I came up with a good idea.) 2. Take a moment to see what is happening around you. (换作短语：Take a moment to see what is going on around you.) 3. Everyone should do his or her best. (换作短语：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best.) 二、 如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构” 固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映写作者的语言运用能力。 (一) 使用固定句式 1. She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for help.(使用before one can do sth.结构：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help.) 2. The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it. (使用倒装结构：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.) (二) 使用现在分词结构 现在分词结构可以表达伴随、原因等状语，因此几乎在任何文章中都可以用得上。现在分词短语可以使句子的表达更加简洁、生动，而且也使前后两个动作的衔接更加紧密。例如： 1. Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures. (换作现在分词短语：Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another, thus bridging the gap among different race or cultures.) 2. People worked together on the assembly line.(换作现在分词短语：People worked together on the assembly line, moving quickly and efficiently.) (三) 使用定语从句 定语从句的使用，不仅能使上下文更加流畅，也同时能充分展示写作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。例如： 1. My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle. I think he is a genius. (使用定语从句：My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.) 2. My aunt bought me a book. The title of the book is All about USA. (使用定语从句：My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All about the USA.) 三、 如何理解“上下文的连贯性” 评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑”。这里说的连贯性，就是指通过连接词(包括并列连词，从属连词和连接性副词)、非谓语动词短语等语法成分，使两个或多个意义相互关联的事情或观点在同一个句子内得以表达，从而使整个段落或篇章浑然一体，连贯流畅。 (一) 连接性副词 连接性副词也被称为过渡词。它们的位置一般以句首居多。连接性副词承上启下，能够令读者对后续的句子产生心理上的期待和准备，因此整个篇章会因它们而紧凑连贯。常见的连接性副词有：also, furthermore, in addition, additionally, hopefully, meanwhile, however, instead, in other words, in brief, in a word, in my opinion, on the whole等等。例如： 1. We have many things to do. We believe we can finish before the day is over. (使用连接性副词：We have quite a lot to do. Hopefully, we will be able to finish before the day is over.) 2. The boy es from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through college. (使用连接性副词：Even though he es from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.) (二) 使用从属连词 常见的从属连词有after, as, when, while, as long as, as soon as等。例如： 1. You work hard and never give up. You will sueed in your studies. (使用从属连词：So long as you work hard, you will sueed in your studies.) 2. The teacher came in. the students were quiet. (使用从属连词：The students were quiet as soon as the teacher came in.) 四、 如何理解“语言的得体性” 评分标准要求考生应注意“语言得体性”，就是要求在表达时根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等因素来选择使用恰当的英语语言。 (一) 体裁和题材对得性的要求 不同体裁和题材的文章有不同的用语要求。比如，书面通知中就不适合用“I will tell you a piece of good news.”或“May I have your attention, please?”等句子。这些句子只有在口头通知中才算得体的语句。xx年高考的书面表达要求“你”给一位外国朋友回信，介绍“你”帮他找的一套出租房。相当一部分考生没有理解“你”与说话对象的关系，所以话语中没有给对方提出异议的余地，叙述的方式和口吻上缺乏礼貌性，像“The house is very suitable for you.”等语句显得相当主观，若改为“Do you think it is suitable for you? If not, I will try again.”就比较得体。 另外， 英语中还有正式语和非正式语，书面语和口头语之分。写作前，还应该认真分析题目的体裁，根据不同的体裁，确定用语的类别。正式用语或书面语的句子结构严格遵循语法规则，所采用的单词使用频率不是很高，比如：permit, inform, discover, depart等词都属于正式用语;而非正式用语或口头用语则较多地使用短语，所采用的单词使用频率高，也比较短。比如let, tell, find out, leave等等。费正式用语也经常使用简略语或缩略词。 (二) 文化和思想内涵对得体性的要求 只有了解社会、历史、文化、政治及思维习惯等因素对语言 * ，才能使选词更贴切、更得体。例如： 1. People who live on the farm can hear cocks crow every morning. (rooster 和cock 都可表示“公鸡”，但cock通常听起来比较粗鲁，所以应把cock改为rooster才比较妥当。) 2. Because he was ill, he had to stay at home yesterday. (本句话想要表达的意思是“因为他病了，所以他不得不呆在家里”。汉语思维中常常是先原因，后结果，而英语则刚好相反。所以句子应该改为：He had to stay at home yesterday because he was ill.) 五、 如何理解“紧扣主题的适当发挥” 所谓“紧扣主题的适当发挥”，就是指在合乎情理、合乎规范、力所能及的前提下添加一些要点中没有提及的信息。请看xx年全国高考的一篇优秀考场作文(节选)： I am very pleasant to learn that you will e to China to study Chinese. I have found an apartment for you. The apartment is on the third floor of a quiet tree-lined streetFangcaosix-storeyed building, which is located on a where you are?Street. It is only one bus stop away from Jianxin Chinese School, planning to study this summer. The apartment has a bedroom, in which there is a a single bed. Inside there is a for office and ? fortable sofa, a desk ? bathroom and a kitchen. The apartment oupies an area of 25 square meters. The rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope that the apartment will meet your expectation. 出开头和结尾外， 本文适当发挥的地方有五处(见文中标注)，都是稍加扩展又立即收题，而且无一例外都是定语。这些信息的添加，不仅增强了文章的个性，而且使文章内容更加丰富。可见信息的添加不能旁逸斜出或标新立异，否则就会适得其反，突然增加一些出错的机会。 高考英语书面表达评分标准 一、评分原则 1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。 2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。 5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际 * 程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、内容要点：(略) 三、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第五档次(很好)：(25-30分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。 -覆盖所有内容要点。 -应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 -语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强 的语言运用能力。 -有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)(