summary writing高考样卷说明文2017版.ppt

SummaryWriting,Summary,.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.,Supportingpoints(s1,s2),1.UseyourownwordsUsedifferentwordswiththeoriginalone.Dontcopythelanguage.,研究背景+研究发现（第一句）,1.具体研究内容：对象，方法，过程，结果2.研究未来展望/总结(第2-4句）,概要的构成：,2.LengthYoumayusefewerwordsthanthenumberprescribed(60words),butinnocasemayyouexceedthelimit.,Tomakethesummarybrief,weshould:-generalizethedetails-reducetheexamples-simplifythedescriptions-eliminateallrepetitions-shortenthetransitionse.g.however,then,thus,yet,and(atthesametime,ontheotherhand,etc.),要进行概述的文章体裁有哪些？记叙文Narration议论文Argumentation说明文Exposition,explainingormakingclearbygivingdetails,-Dividethewholepassageinto_partsPart1:Part2:Part3:,Paragraph1,Paragraph2-3,Paragraph4,backgroundandfindings,thestudy,furtherstudy,TenseToreportthegeneralideas:usepresenttenseTorefertopastexperiencesusepasttenseToquoteindirectspeechusepasttense,3,Part.1backgroundandfindings,AnewstudyfromtheUniversityofTorontosuggeststhatfastfoodmightmakeithardertostopandsmelltheroses.ResearcherspointedoutthatAmericanshavegainedmoreandmoreleisuretime,yettheyarentanyhappier.Theproblemcouldbethatmodernconveniencesmakeusmoreimpatient,andthereforelessabletoappreciatesmallmomentsofjoy.,Studentsversion:Inmyopinion,theresearchtellsusThearticleindicatesastudyfromaUniversityofTorontoAnewstudyfromtheUniversityofTorontosuggests,Polishedversion:AstudyfromtheUniversityofTorontoshows/indicatesTheUniversityofTorontomakesastudy/conductsaresearchthat.(8words),Part.1backgroundandfindingsCouldFastFoodMakeItHardertoStopandSmelltheRoses?,AnewstudyfromtheUniversityofTorontosuggeststhatfastfoodmightmakeithardertostopandsmelltheroses.ResearcherspointedoutthatAmericanshavegainedmoreandmoreleisuretime,yettheyarentanyhappier.Theproblemcouldbethatmodernconveniencesmakeusmoreimpatient,andthereforelessabletoappreciatesmallmomentsofjoy.Totestthetheory,theUniversityofTorontoresearcherscarriedoutafewdifferenttestsfocusedonfastfoods,thetypicalAmerican“symbolsofthecultureofimpatience,”andhappiness,eliminateallrepetitions,Part.1backgroundandfindingsCouldFastFoodMakeItHardertoStopandSmelltheRoses?,AnewstudyfromtheUniversityofTorontosuggeststhatfastfoodmightmakeithardertostopandsmelltheroses.ResearcherspointedoutthatAmericanshavegainedmoreandmoreleisuretime,yettheyarentanyhappier.Theproblemcouldbethatmodernconveniencesmakeusmoreimpatient,andthereforelessabletoappreciatesmallmomentsofjoy.Totestthetheory,theUniversityofTorontoresearcherscarriedoutafewdifferenttestsfocusedonfastfoods,thetypicalAmerican“symbolsofthecultureofimpatience,”andhappiness,fastfood_appreciatesmallmomentsofjoy,useyourownwords,willpreventus,enjoyingthings,因果关系,sowewillbelesshappy,thusmakinguslesshappy,/affectsourabilityto,enjoythings,Studentsversionbecauseoffastfood,peoplecantenjoythings.fastfoodmakespeopleunhappy,fastfoodwillpreventpeopleenjoyingthings,+结果,sowewillbelesshappy/thusmakinguslesshappy,+原因,becausepeoplecantenjoythings,Polishedversion:AstudyfromtheUniversityofTorontoindicatesthatfastfoodwillpreventpeopleenjoyingthings,thusmakinguslesshappy.(21words),Para.2thestudy,Inoneofthetests,resercherstold257peopletoratepicturesbasedonwhethertheyweresuitableforads.Participantssawaseriesofpictures.Onegroupsawfastfoodinregularpackagingwhiletheothergroupsawthesamefoodsetoutonceramictableware(瓷器餐具）.Afterward,someoftheParticipantswereshownphotographsof“scenicnaturalbeauty”andthenwereaskedtoratetheirhappiness.Othersratedtheirhappinesswithoutseeingthepictures.Theresearchersfoundthatpeoplewhosawthefastfoodbeforeviewingthenaturephotostendedtoratetheirhappinesslower.Yetthosewhosimplyratedtheirhappinesswithoutseeingthenatureshotsbeforehandwereactuallyalittlehappieriftheysseenfastfoodinadvance.Researcherssaidthatsuggestsfastfooddoesntdirectlycauseunhappinessbutdecreasestheabilitytoenjoythings.,研究对象、方法、过程、结果,Para.2thestudy,Inoneofthetests,researcherstold257peopletopeoplewhosawthefastfoodbeforeviewingthenaturephotostendedtoratetheirhappinesslower.Yetthosewhosimplyratedtheirhappinesswithoutseeingthenatureshotsbeforehandwereactuallyalittlehappieriftheysseenfastfoodinadvance.,Studentsversion:Theyfoundthatfastfoodpreventpeoplebecominghappy.Differentgroupsweregivenfastfoodindifferentpackagingandtheywereaskedtoratetheirhappiness.,Omittherepetition,Detailsnotmainpoints,研究对象、方法、过程、结果,omitthedetails,Inoneofthetests,resercherstold257peopletopeoplewhosawthefastfoodbeforeviewingthenaturephotostendedtoratetheirhappinesslower.Yetthosewhosimplyratedtheirhappinesswithoutseeingthenatureshotsbeforehandwe,Studentsversion:Researchersseparated257peopletotwogroups.Onegroupsawfastfoodbeforeseeingthenaturepictureswhileothersdidnt.Asaresultthosewhodidntseenaturalphotoswouldbehappier.reactuallyalittlehappieriftheysseenfastfoodinadvance.,ChecklistIsthelanguagebrief?Doyouuseyourownwordsasfaraspossible?,Amongthe257people,thosewhosaw/seeingwouldbelesshappythanthosewhodidnt,Para.2thestudy,Inoneofthetests,resercherstold257peopletopeoplewhosawthefastfoodbeforeviewingthenaturephotostendedtoratetheirhappinesslower.Yetthosewhosimplyratedtheirhappinesswithoutseeingthenatureshotsbeforehandwereactuallyalittlehappieriftheysseenfastfoodinadvance.Researcherssaidthatsuggestsfastfooddoesntdirectlycauseunhappinessbutdecreasestheabilitytoenjoythings.,StudentsversionPeoplewhosawthefastfoodbeforeviewingthenaturephotoesratetheirhappinesslowerthanthosewhodidnt.,研究对象、方法、过程、结果,ChecklistIsthelanguagebrief?Doesthesummaryincludethemainpoints?Doyouuseyourownwordsasfaraspossible?Areallthemistakesinspellingandgrammarcorrected?,Inonetest,amongthe257participants,thosewhosawthenaturephotoesafterseeingfastfood,photos,rated,26words,Para.3furtherstudy,Researcherscautioned,however,thatmuchmoreresearchwasneededtodetermineexactlyhowfastfoodandhappinessarecorrelated(相互关系)andhowstrongtherelationshipreallyis.,ChecklistAretransitionalwordsu