推进课堂变革写作技巧.ppt

,Welcome,Whyiswritingsotough?,Input,Output,Beautifyyourcomposition,高考作文的华丽变身,遇难心不慌,遇易心更细,Whatwewilldointhisclass:1.Learntobeautifyyourcompositionbyusingadvancedvocabulary、sentencepatternsandproperlinkingwords;,2.Learntodevelopsentencesinordertomakethecontentrichandcoherent.,太稀了,太乱了,段落呢？,标点呢？,即使长发及腰，也遮盖不住满是错误的事实！,Handwritingalsocounts!,threeCcleanclearcorrect,评分细则：本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。优秀（22-25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。良好（18-21）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般（15-17）：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确；基本达到预期写作目的。较差（11-14）：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。差（6-10）：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差（0-5）：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。,高考英语阅卷特点：,1.阅卷时间短；2.阅卷速度快；3.阅卷老师的心理状态：给分中庸4.高考阅卷其余部分是标准化计分,书面表达是提高分数最大的潜力股,Whatmakesagoodwriting?,1.电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。,Computersareveryimportantinourlife.,Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.,Computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.,短语代替单词,advancedvocabulary,同义词的使用,2.Heisa_(聪明的)boy.3._,(我认为)NanShanNanbyZhangLeiisareallywarmsong.,bright/smart/intelligent,AsfarasIamconcerned/Personally,4.Theteachersthinkthewritingisveryimportant.,Theteachers_thewriting.,greatimportanceto,attach,2._,(众所周知的是)，thenewlylearntwordswillsoonbeforgottenunlessweusethemineverydaycommunication.,1.不但而且notonlybutaswellInNingxia,youcan_tasteyummyfood_canvisitsomefamoustouristsattractions_.,Asisknowntous,notonly,but,aswell,sentencepatterns,3.The+比较级,the+比较级(越越),你越努力，你越进步。,Theharderyouwork，themoreprogressyouwillmake.,4.毫无疑问，大声朗读英语很有益。,_readingEnglishloudlyisofgreatbenefit.,Thereisnodoubtthat,5.Thereasonwhyisthat+句子(的原因是),我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。,_wehavetogrowtrees_theycansupplyfreshairforus.,Thereasonwhy,isthat,Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvetheproblem.,1.Youcansolvetheprobleminthisway.,Only+状语置于句首倒装结构,一、运用倒装,2.WhenIputtheideaideaintopractice,IfoundmyEnglishfarfromsatisfying.,_didIfindmyEnglishfarfromsatisfying.,OnlywhenIputtheideaintopractice,grammarstructures,Itshouldbeagoodidea_,Itisimprtantforyoutodomorningexercises.,二、运用it作形式主语,1.Youshoulddomorningexercises.Itisimportant.,2.YoudbetterlearnandsingEnglishsongs.,tolearnandsingEnglishsongs.,三、使用非限定性定语从句,1.Theweatherturnedouttobeverygood.Itwasmorethanwecouldexpect.（一般）,Theweatherturnedouttobeverygood,_,whichwasmorethanwecouldexpect.（高级）,2.MaybeIwillworkasavolunteerinmysparetime,_(这将丰富我的生活)。,whichwillmakemylifecolorful.,whichisabletoenrichmylife.,时间(顺序)：firstly.secondlyfinally,meanwhile.并列或递进关系：notonlybutalso,besides,whatsmore,inaddition.原因：because(of),thanksto,dueto,asaresultof.对照或比较：while,comparedwith,instead(of),ratherthan,onthecontrary,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand.举例：forexample/instance,takeforexample.列举：suchas,like,properlinkingwords,觉得没话说,Developsentences,假设你是永宁中学学生会主席李华，你校将于11月18日校庆期间接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排他们的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。1.上午与我校学生座谈；2.中午与我校学生共同进餐；3.下午与我校学生游览永宁。注意：1.次数不少于100；2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。,1.上午与我校学生座谈；AmericanstudentswillhaveatalkwithChinesestudents.,Q1:Whatsitspurpose?,2.中午与我校学生共同进餐；Americanstudentswillhavelunchintheschoolcanteen.,Q2:WhattraditionalChinesefoodwillbeserved?,3.下午与我校学生游览永宁。Intheafternoon,AmericanstudentswillvisitYongning.,Q3:WhatcanthestudentsinYongningHighSchooltellaboutYongning?,1.Inordertohaveabetterunderstandingofeachother,wellhaveatalkinthemorning.2.Wewillhavelunchtogetherintheschooldinninghall,wherethetraditionalChinesefoodsuchasjiaoziwillbeserved.3.Intheafternoon,wewillvisitYongning,enjoyingsomecustomsofHuipeople.,假如你是永宁中学学生会主席李华,访问团成员Peter回国后来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.阅读中文书刊；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.,Sampleversion:DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,bywhichyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends,whocannotonlytellyoualotaboutChinabuthelpyoulearnChineseaswell.TryandwritemeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua,payattentiontoaccumulatingmaterialsforwritingfromourdailyexercises.Keepinmindyoumayusesomeoftheseo