M5U1Task作文范文.ppt

2007年湖南省高考作文：假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。要点：1.简要描述李华在你心目中的印象2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；3.对李华表示美好的祝福写作指导：第一：与2006年相比，题型变化不大，依然是介于提纲式作文和开放式作文中间的一种题型，主要内容给出，但是还必须考生发挥具体事例，这与我们M5U1project的第二篇文章相符；第二：内容变化不大，去年是写老师Mr.Moore，今年写的是同窗好友；第三：考试形式依然是上课时强调的应用文留言，留言其实和书信，便条差不多。评分标准：要点全面，且详略得当；结构清晰(总分总);文章连贯；,DearLihuaOfallmyclassmates,you,themostconsiderateandwarm-heartedgirl,arealwaysreadytogiveyourhandtoeveryonewhoneedshelp.(文章第一段写第一个要点，即文章中心)IclearlyrememberthatlastyearourclassmatesXiaomeisufferedfromacuteappendix(急性阑尾炎)atnight.Itisyouwhotookhertothehospitalinmidnightasquicklyaspossible.Inordernottodisturbothersyouevendidntcallupotherclassmatestoaccompanyyou.Untilthenextmorningotherclassmatesinourdormitorygottoknowthefact.AndweknewthatyoudidntsleepallthenighttoattendtoXiaomei.Moreoverinourdailylife,youalwayscomforttheonewhoareindepressionbecauseofbadscoreorclassmatesrelationship.Sowewouldliketocallyouthesweetsister.(第二段举出你能够想出的最简单的事例，作文的关键不是你的事例有多新颖，而是你写的句子是否能够显示出你的水平，比如说难词，比如说难句，比如说你是否用了联接词，如inorderto,until,moreover,so等)Allinall,youarethefantasticgirlwhodeservesallthebeautifulprospects,suchasstudyinginBeijingUniversity.Finallywishyousuccessandrealizeyourdream!YourssincerelyWangPing(第三段总结并给出你的祝福),DearLiHua,IoftenthinkthatImluckythatIhaveyouasmybestfriend.YoualwayslendmeahandwhenIamintrouble.IrememberitclearlythatIdidbadlyinoneimportantexam.MyparentsaswellasmyteachersthoughtIwasnthardenough.AndIwaslaughedatbysomeclassmates,whichmademereallysad.Butyouretheonlyonewhounderstoodme.Yousaidmanywordstocheermeup.Thankyouforgivingmesomuchencouragement.Besides,whenIhavedonesomethingwrong,youpointitout.Whatsmore,youreveryhonestandcanalwayskeepyourword.Wesharethesameinterestssuchasreadinganddrawing.Withoutyou,Iwontbesohappy.Wewillgotodifferentschoolssoon,butourfriendshipwillbeforever.Ibelievethatyouwillbebetterinthefuture.Bestwishestoyou!Yours,WangPing,一、举例常用的开头语：Lastyear/lastweek/lastweekend/oneday/lastSundayafternoon/onceIwillneverforgetthedaywhen.IrememberIclearlythatDoyoustillrememberthatAlthoughithappenedtwoyearsago,IwillneverforgetIllneverforgetthememorableday二、有关友谊的表达：makefriendswithsb/gettoknowsb/knowsbverywell/trusteachother/keepintouchwithsb/closefriend/precious/understanding/friendly/intimate/generous/thoughtful/goodtempered/graceful/turntomyfriendforhelp/havesthincommon/bewillingtoofferhelp/getalongwellwitheachother/betolerantto,学生习作一：DearLulu:Howareyou?IoftenthinkthatImreallyluckytohaveyouasmybestfriendsinceafaithfulfriendishardtofind.YouarealwaysreadytolendmeahandwhenIamintrouble.Istillrememberthethinghappenedinlastyear,whenthenewtermbegan,everybodyintheclassexceptmehadtakenthesummerextralesson,youknewthatIwassoworriedthattime,becauseIwasafraidIcouldntkeeppacewiththeclass.Fortunately,youlentmeyournotesandencouragedmenottogiveup.Iwasdeeplyimpressed.Besides,youarekind,mercy,honestandout-going.Wehavealottotalkwitheachotherandwehavealmostthesameinterests.Inaword,Ifeelhappyandrelaxedwhenwespenttimetogether.Last,IhopewecanbothtreasurethisfriendshipandIbelieveourfriendshipwilllastforever.,学生习作二：DearJulia:Ihaventheardfromyouforweeks.Iseverythingok?Recently,Ilearntalotmoreaboutfriendship,whichremindedmeofyoumyjuniorschoolclassmateandmybestfriend.Afaithfulfriendishardtofind,butImreallyfortunatetohaveyouasmybestfriend.YouarealwayswillingtohelpmewhenIfacechallenge.Icantforgetthedayswhenwewereingrade3.Yousatbymyside.Sometimes,youwerelikemyteacher,almostallmyacademicquestionsweresolvedbyyou.Iwashopelessbeforethattime,butwiththehelpofyou,gonewereallmybadfeelings.Then,Ididagoodjobinthetextgraduationexamination.Ifeltgratefulforyourgreat