8B_Unit7PPT5.ppt

Unit7Whatsthehighestmountainintheworld?,SectionB3a,3bHumanscatchwhalesformeat,fatandoil;Whalepartssoldtomakethingslikecandlesandsoap,Learnmoreaboutwhales,haverulesonwhaleprotection,stopputtingrubbishintothesea,3b,Writeaparagraphaboutwhalesandwhytheyneedtobeprotected.Usetheinformationin3a.,WhalesareTheyliveinTheyeatTheycanOneinterestingfactisAnotherinterestingfactisSomekindsofwhalesareindangerbecauseWeshouldprotectwhalesfromIthinkpeopleshould/shouldnt,WritingStrategy,Howtoimproveyourwriting,Tip1:Decideonthekindofthearticleyouwillwrite.(谋篇布局)Tip2:Whilewriting,rememberthesixfactsin3a.Tip3:Writeagoodbeginning.Tip4:Writeaperfectending.Tip5:Writecleanlyandneatly.(书写整洁干净),Afterwriting,Peerassessment,(互评),评分标准(满分15分）第一档13-15分信息点齐全，人称、时态正确。意思表达完整通顺，条理清晰，整体感觉很好。字数够，个别语法错误。字体端正，卷面整洁。第二档10-12分信息点齐全，人称无误、时态基本正确。意思表达基本完整通顺，整体感觉良好。少量语法错误。字体端正，卷面整洁。第三档7-9分信息点较齐全，人称无误、时态基本正确。意思表达尚完整通顺，整体感觉较好。有一些语法错误。字体较端正卷面较整洁。第四档4-6分涉及部分信息点，写出少量句子。意思表达不连贯语法错误多。整体感觉一般。字数不够，字体较端正，卷面较整洁。第五档0-3分只写出个别单词，所写内容不符要求，语法错误很多，整体感觉不好，完全抄袭或空白。,Showexamplesofgoodwriting(美文赏析),Sharesomeofyourpartnersgoodsentencesorparagraphs.Recommendordemonstrategoodwriting.(推荐和展示优秀作品）,Sample,Therearemanykindsofanimalsintheworld.Buthaveyouheardofthewhale?Itsakindofmammal.Whalesarehugeandsomekindshaveteeth.Theyliveinthesea,andtheyeatsmallfishandothersealife.Theycanjumphighoutofthewaterandsingsongs.Theyarealsoreallysmart.Butmoreandmorewhalesareingreatdangerbecauseofwaterpollution.Also,humanscatchwhalesformeat,fat,oilandmoney.Somewhalepartsaresoldtomakethingslikecandlesandsoap.,Sowhaleshavetobeprotected.Buthowcanweprotectthem?Firstly,weshouldlearnmoreaboutwhales.Secondly,weshouldstopputtingrubbishintothesea.Thirdly,weneedtohaverulesonwhaleprotection.Doyouknowotherwaystoprotectwhales?Allofusplayaroleinprotectingthewhales.,Assignmentfortoday,Makeaposteronwhales,WhalesareTheyliveinTheyeatTheycanOneinterestingfactisAnotherinterestingfactisSomekindsofwhalesareindangerbecauseWeshouldprotectwhalesfromIthinkpeopleshould/shouldnt,protection(n.)保护；保卫protect(v.)保护，防卫,Languagepoints,Thedutyofparentsistoprovideprotectionfortheirchildren.,e.g.父母的职责就是为孩子提供保护。,我们应该保护好环境。,Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.,2.huge(adj.)巨大的；极多的,e.g.一