初中生如何写好看图英语作文(共67张PPT).ppt

怎,作,好,文,图,样,看,写,专项复习,看图作文是根据图画所提供的信息及语境来写作文。包括图画作文和图表作文两种形式。现在看图作文越来越趋向于就画写观后感，即寓意作文，难度较大，旨在通过画面表达现实生活中的实际问题，命题意图在于考察考生观察、想象和灵活运用语言、组织语言的能力。,评分标准,1本题10分，分四等给分A等：正确使用所给词汇，准确表述图示内容，语言地道，无语法错误给910分。B等：能用所给词汇，较完整的表述图示内容，语句有12处语法错误给68分。C等：所给词汇使用不全，图示内容表述不够准确，有3处以上的语法错误给35分。D等：只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。2单词拼写错误，每处扣0.5分。,写作技巧1.仔细审题，合理分配。弄清作文题目具体要求，比如词数要求等，以便确定下一步的准备方向，避免做无用功。然后仔细、全面地解读所提供的画面内容，不能放过任何一个细节，但也不能走极端。依据自身实际和试题难度，给作文分配合理时间。2.拟定提纲，构建框架。看明白画面后，主题就会在脑海中浮现，要迅速抓住这一灵感，把思路继续延伸，勾勒出文章轮廓，列出提纲，建立整体骨架。,3.领悟用意，组织语言。对画面描述直接切入主题，对图意纵向理解、横向扩展.主次分明、结构严谨、尽量贴近命题者意图。避免出现低级错误。更不能牵强地组织一些复杂句式或词语来故弄玄虚,用准确、简练的简单句或词间接表达同样意思也是不失分的好办法。4.细心检查，重新审视。时间紧,有时对一些细小问题，如拼写、标点、单词大小写等易于疏忽。因此一定要对题目要求、拟订主题、仔细检查、查缺补漏，精益求精，把失误降到最低限度。,图示作文四步法,1图示作文：根据图示写一篇70词左右的短文，短文必须以ItwasSunday开头。,看图作文解题步骤,1.看-审题：看图写一篇短文，使用第三人称。,确定基本要素:5W1H,何时何地何人为何如何做了何事,（审文体、审时态、审人称、审要求）,理解到位,Whathappened?,确定主要行为,确定主要行为,2.点-找点：,一幅图一要点抓要点配动词时态直达语态到位,观察到位,2.找要点：,在室外踢足球；,beplayingfootballoutside,球跑到了街上；,berunningintothestreet,追球；,runaftertheball,一辆车飞快的过来；,becomingquickly,警察拦住了车；,stopthecar,得救了；,besaved,3.连-表述：一般过去时，过去进行时，扩写句子。,形成基本语义单位,Whodidwhat?,连贯呼应时间空间细节,注意：时间空间细节连贯呼应标点,细节到位,选用恰当的关联词语，把句子连接成文。连接并列的句子because/so/though/but/and/when/while/if等。记叙事件经过Atfirst/then/fiveminuteslater/finally/atlast/intheend等。如果发现上下句之间跳跃性太大，没有逻辑关系时，要根据自己的生活经验，适当发挥想象，增加合理细节，使文段衔接自然，行文流畅，最后给文章一个结尾，发表个人看法。,增加细节呼应首尾,词与词搭配,词与词搭配,句与句相连,4.面-成文,表达到位,卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分。,检查句子的语法结构语法是否错误结构是否完整固定搭配是否正确主谓、时态、人称是否一致注意英汉表达差异，不要使用汉语式英语检查字母大小写是否规范字数是否合乎要求,品析,ItwasSunday.WangMingandChenLindidntgotoschool.Theywereplayingfootballoutsidetheirhomes.Atthatmomenttheballwasrunningintothestreet.Thetwoboysranafteritatonce.Suddenlyacarwascomingquickly.Atthatmoment,apolicemanrushedtothefrontofthecarandstoppedit.Theboysweresaved.Howdangerousitwas.,2图示作文：,请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文。记述昨天发生在Lucy身上的事（词数80字）。,Step1:Watchthepicturesfromthefirstonetothelastoneandgetthemainideaofthewholestory.,通看全图，掌握大意,Step2:Choosethecorrectmainpointorphraseforeachpicture.,根据每幅图提示找要点，根据要点,找词组。,围绕主题，提炼要点,第一幅图：下课了、要回家,第二幅图：见小贩、在叫卖,第三幅图：吃炸串、肚子疼,第四幅图：住院后、有反思,围绕主题，提炼要点,将四幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想象，将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。第一幅图：最后的铃声响了，时间就是放学回家，在路上（为下文铺垫）。第二幅图：根据她看到的可以推断：小贩在叫卖，好多孩子都在吃，于是她也想吃。第三幅图：吃后，感觉肚子痛根据第四幅图可推断她食物中毒了。第四幅图：要住院几天；妈妈在陪护，她也在反思应该吃健康食品，平时就要注意饮食卫生和安全。,合理想象，补出要点,Step3:Puteachgroupofwordsintoasentence.(Payattentiontothecorrectverbform.),根据词组组句子,leftschoolafterthefinalbellrang.,2.awomansellingfastfood，somekidswereeating，socheap,just1yuanfortwo,3.boughtmuchandate,hadastomachacheandfeltworseandworse.,4.wastakentohospital,stayawayfromjunkfoodandeathealthyfood.,Step4:Choosecorrectconnectivestojointhesentencesintoapassage,使用恰当连词，连句成文,Oneday,Lucyleftschoolafterthefinalbellrang.Onherwayhome,therewasawomansellingfastfoodthatwasboiledinhotwater,Itsmeltsodeliciousandsomekidswereeatinghappily.Thefoodwassocheap,just1yuanfortwo,soLucyalsoboughtmuchandatequickly.Afterawhile,Lucyhadastomachacheandfeltworseandworse.Thenshewastakentohospitalbyhermother.Luckily,shegotbettersoon.Lucydecidedtostayawayfromjunkfoodandeathealthyfoodeveryday.,3图示作文：这是刘明上周日在公园发生的事情，请根据图片内容写一篇文章。,提示词：runafteragoat;getlost作文要求：1、要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。2、话题作文字数要求为80-100词；图示作文字数要求为80词左右。,（1）-wentforapicnic-weredancing（2）-sawagoatrunning-begantorunafterit,（3）-thoughtofhisfriends-gotlost（4）-afarmercame-helpedhim,LastSunday,LiuMingandhisfriendswentforapicnicatthefootofthemountain.Someofthemwereplayinggames,someweredancing,theyfeltveryrelaxed.Suddenly,LiuMingsawagoatrunning.Hewasinterestedinitandbegantorunafteritforalongtime.Whenhethoughtofhisfriends,hedidntknowwherehewas.Hegotlost.Atthattime,afarmercame.Withhishelp,LiuMingfoundhisfriendsagain.Hethankedthefarmerandsaid“Goodbye”tohim.,请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。注意：1.词数80以上。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照revokeadrivinglicense,4图示作文：,围绕主题，提炼要点,第一幅图：与朋友聚会、喝酒,第二幅图：与朋友道别、酒后驾车,第三幅图：出事故、受伤,第四幅图：住院、吊销驾照,合理想象，补出要点将四幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想象，将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。第一幅图：喝酒的地点（可能在朋友家，也可能在小酒馆），根据喝酒的地点确定是谁邀请谁。可能因为高兴叔叔酒喝多了，喝醉了（为下文铺垫）。第二幅图：根据他说的话：Noproblem可以推断：朋友劝他，他没听，坚持驾车回家。第三幅图：酒后驾车，可以想象开车的情况：蜿蜒向前，撞树出事故。根据第四幅图可推断他没有死而是受了伤。警察到现场，将他送往医院。第四幅图：因伤势严重，要住院几天；警察对他处罚吊销驾照。,文章记述昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，用过去时态。,第一幅图：Yesterdayeveningmyunclewasinvitedtodinnerbyhisfriends.Hewassogladthathedrankalotofbeers.Asaresulthegotdrunk.,第二幅图：Afterthemeal,hisfriendstriedtopersuadehimnottodrivehome,buthedidntlistentothem,andsaying“Noproblem”andinsistedondoingso.,第三幅图：Hegotintothecaranddroveaway.Afewminuteslater,hewaswindinghiswayinthestreet.Andsuddenlyhiscarranintoatalltree.Hewasbadlyinjuredbutstillalive.Thepolicecametothescene,andhewastakentohospital.,第四幅图：Hehadtostayinhospitalforseveraldaysbecauseofbeingseriouslyinjured.Hewasfinedbythepoliceandhisdrivinglicensewasrevoked.,Myunclewillneverforgetwhathappenedtohimyesterday.Yesterdayeveningmyunclewasinvitedtodinnerbyhisfriends.Hewassogladthathedrankalotofbeers.Asaresulthegotdrunk.Afterthemeal,hisfriendstriedtopersuadehimnottodrivehome,buthedidntlistentothem,andsaying“Noproblem”andinsistedondoingso.Hegotintothecaranddroveaway.Afewminuteslater,hewaswindinghiswayinthestreetwhenhiscarranintoatalltree.Hewasbadlyinjuredbutstillalive.Thepolicecametothescene,andhewastakentohospital.Unfortunatelyhehadtostayinhospitalforseveraldays.Worsestillhewasfinedbythepoliceandhisdrivinglicensewasrevoked.Howheregrettedwhathehaddone!,Howtowriteapicturestory,Step1:Watchthepicturesfromthefirstonetothelastoneandgetthemainideaofthewholestory.,通看全图，掌握大意,根据每幅图提示找要点，根据要点,找词组。,Step2:Choosethecorrectmainpointorphraseforeachpicture.,clockdidntgooffoversleptandgotuplate,cookingbreakfastburnedmyhand,ranoutmissedthebus,ranthreemilestotheschool,arrivedtherefoundthatitwasSunday,Step3:Puteachgroupofwordsintoasentence.(Payattentiontothecorrectverbform.),根据词组组句子,Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidntgooff.Ioversleptandgotuplate.,IburntmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.,Iranoutofthehousetocatchthebus.Imissedit.,Ihadtorunthreemilestotheschool.(Ihadtogotoschoolonfoot.),WhenIarrivedthere,IfoundthatitwasSunday.,Step4:Choosecorrectconnectivestojointhesentencesintoapassage,使用恰当连词，连句成文。,Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidntgooffsoIoversleptandgotupanhourlate.IwasinsuchahurrythatIburntmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.ThenIranoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30bus,butofcourseImissedit.,IwasveryunhappybecauseIknewmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass.SoIranthreemilestotheschool.ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend,IfoundthatitwasSunday.,模拟作文一,XiaoMingwasonhiswayhomeoneafternoon.Whenhewaswalkingpastanicefield,hesawafrog.Hewantedtoplaywithit.Sohewentoverquicklyandcaughtit.Justatthattime,anoldmancameupandsaidtohim,“Frogsareourfriends.Theyaregoodatcatchingpests.Itsnotrighttocatchthem.”Whenheheardit,hisfaceturnedred.Heputthefrogbackintothefield.Theoldmansaidwithasmile.“Youareagoodboy.”,范文,模拟作文二,Oneday,anoldmanwalkedtoabridge.Hestoppedandthought,“Cananoldmancrossit?”Thenhedecidedtohaveatry.Hewasfulloffearandwasgoingacrossitwhensuddenlyhefelltothewater.“Help!Help!”hecried.Ashefelthisfeettouchthefloor,hewa