2018年高考书面表达复习指导.ppt

高考书面表达复习指导,ByMrWang,第二节书面表达(满分25分假定你是李华，你的巴基斯坦朋友Khan(属狗）对中国文化兴趣浓厚，他即将过生日。你在购物网站为他购买了一件礼物“狗”，请写一封邮件，告知他查收。内容包括：1.生日祝福;2.属相“狗”的含义；3.物品到达时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,武汉市2018届高三毕业生二月调考,WritingSteps,Step1审题文体、人称、时态Step2构思要点、用词、造句Step3谋篇书写、分段、排版,第二节书面表达(满分25分假定你是李华，你的巴基斯坦朋友Khan(属狗）对中国文化兴趣浓厚，他即将过生日。你在购物网站为他购买了一件礼物“狗”，请写一封邮件，告知他查收。内容包括：1.生日祝福;2.属相“狗”的含义；3.物品到达时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,武汉市2018届高三毕业生二月调考,文体：告知信,人称：第一人称,要点,时态:一般过去时一般现在时一般将来时,score:21,score:23,score:24,好作文标准,句子正确：句子成分、句子结构内容完整：增加细节、120字左右行文连贯：关联词汇、逻辑词汇高级表达：高级词汇、高级句型书写美观：书写整洁、三段排版,一、句子怎样才算正确？,1.简单句(simplesentence)主+系+表/主+谓+(宾)IamLiHua.Iamwritingaletter.2.并列句(compoundsentence)简单句+简单句IamLiHuaandIamwritingaletter.3.复合句(complexsentence)主句+从句IamLiHuawhoiswritingaletter.,二、怎样增加细节？,增加同位语、介词短语Iknowyouwerebornin2006,theYearofDogaccordingtoChinesetradition.增加非谓语动词短语So,Iboughtatoyforyou,hopingyouwillbeasluckyasadog.增加状语从句、定语从句、名词从句Dogsareourfriends,ourbestcompanions,aswellasthemostpopularanimalsintheworld,whoareloyaltohumankinds.,三、如何使文章连贯？,1.表示转折关系：but,yet,however,instead,otherwise，onthecontrary,afterall.2.表示因果关系：since,as,because,so,thus,therefore,asaresult(of),asaconsequence(of).3.表示条件关系：if,unless,onconditionthat,so/aslongas.,三、如何使文章连贯？,4.表示时间关系：when,while,as,after,before,since,assoonas,themoment,theminute,notuntil,nosoonerthan,hardly/scarcelywhen.5.表示先后顺序：firstlysecondlyfinally,firstofall/aboveall/tobeginwithwhatsmore/inadditionlastbutnottheleast；ontheonehand,;ontheotherhand,;foronething.,foranother,三、如何使文章连贯？,6.进行举例说明：forinstance,forexample,suchas.7.表达个人看法：inmyopinion/view,asfarasImconcerned,asweknow,asisknowntoall/us.8.引出话题：Asfor/tosth.Whenitcomesto(doing)sth.,besides,whatsmore,inaddition.,9.总结话题：onthewhole,inshort,allinall,ingeneral,inaword.,1.使用并列句【原文】Tomstudiedveryhard.Hepassedtheexam.【修改】Tomstudiedveryhardand/sohepassedtheexam.,四、如何使用高级表达？,2.使用非谓语动词【原文1】Theywentbacktoschool.Theysangandlaughed.【修改1】Theywentbacktoschool,singingandlaughing.【原文2】AfterIhadcollectedtheinformation,Ibegantoresearch.【修改2】Havingcollectedtheinformation,Ibegantoresearch.,四、如何使用高级表达？,3.使用with复合结构【原文1】Myfathersatinthesofa.Anewspaperwasinhishand.【修改1】Myfathersatinthesofawithanewspaperinhishand.【原文2】AfterIhaddonemyhomework,Iwenttobed.【修改2】Withmyhomeworkdone,Iwenttobed.,四、如何使用高级表达？,4.使用定语从句【原文1】Weloveourlibrary.Itisagoodplacetostudyin.【修改1】Weloveourlibrary,whichisagoodplacetostudyin.【原文2】IwenttoBeijingyesterday.Isawmanyinterestingthingsthere.【修改2】IwenttoBeijingyesterdaywhereIsawmanyinterestingthings.,四、如何使用高级表达？,5.使用状语从句【原文】Hegotupearly.Hecouldcatchtheearlybus.【修改】Hegotupearlysothat/inorderthathecouldcatchtheearlybus.,四、如何使用高级表达？,6.使用名词性从句【原文1】Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.【修改1】Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.【原文2】Asisknowntousall,Chinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.【修改2】ItisknowntousallthatChinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.,四、如何使用高级表达？,7.使用倒装句【原文1】Wecangethighmarksonlyinthisway.【修改1】Onlyinthiswaycanwegethighmarks.【原文2】Although/Thoughheisold,heoftenworkshard.【修改2】Oldas/thoughheis,heoftenworkshard.,四、如何使用高级表达？,8.使用强调句【原文1】Mybravedogsavedmylittlesister.【修改1】Itwasmybravedogthatsavedmylittlesister.【原文2】IdidntgotosleepuntilIhadfinishedmyhomework.【修改2】ItwasnotuntilIhadfinishedmyhomeworkthatIwenttosleep.,四、如何使用高级表达？,9.使用虚拟语气【原文1】Iamnotabird.Icantflyinthesky.【修改1】IfIwereabird,Icouldflyinthesky.【原文2】Youhadntfollowedmyadvice,soyoudidntpasstheexam.【修改2】Hadyoufollowedmyadvice,youwouldhavepassedtheexam.,四、如何使用高级表达？,10.使用套话Howareyourecently?HaventseenyousincelasttimewespentaweektogetherinWuhan.Imwritingtotellyou.Thereasonwhy.isthat.Iwouldbeverygrateful/appreciateitifyou.,四、如何使用高级表达？,1.adj.困难的,黯然低分词：difficult,闪光高分词：challenging,2.adj.美丽的,黯然低分词：beautiful,闪光高分词：attractive/appealing/breathtaking,3.v.生气,黯然低分词：getangry,闪光高分词：beovercome/overwhelmedwithanger,五、如何使用高级词汇？,1.v.使用,黯然低分词：use,闪光高分词：make(good)useof/takeadavantageof,2.adj.有好处的,黯然低分词：beneficial,闪光高分词：beof(great)benefit,3.v.影响,黯然低分词：affect/influence,闪光高分词：haveaneffect/influence/impacton,五、如何使用高级词汇？,1.MrWuisagoodteacher.,2.Theactivityissuccessful.,Theactivitydisplaysourtalentsandenrichesourlives.,MrWuisakind,patientandknowledgeableteacher.,五、如何使用高级词汇？,Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?,Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?,Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?,Which